Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 23)

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alex1906

@alex1906

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#831

Eeks ekks eeks, arnav is angry at his too smart for their own good wife, well what can we say he was denied the taste of his own personal nectar, moody hona to banata hai boss. Poor khushi sigh! What can we do u urself decided to marry that khadoos, moody, now hot now cold man, ab bhukto.

now khushi knows about that blck patch on humanity witch, n she trying to be as understanding as she can be n more. This girl is seriously the epitome of true love and self effacement. She is ready to do just about anything for her arnavji. Can I say I love her already.

last scenes were so cute, they screamed of essence of khushi, childish n arnav was the strict yet indulgent husband, left to tolerate his cute wife's antics, not that he is complaining I m sure.

Loved it.

p.s- will ready with a bucket cold water for the nxt update. 😉

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ranjanatripathi

@ranjanatripathi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#832

What a place to end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So the hard Raizada has slowly mellowed a little!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Impatient for the next update!!!!!!!!!!

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#833

mindblowing. update yaar
mast
thanx for.pm
continue soon

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mon4u

@mon4u

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#834

This was mind blowing update. They are taking huge steps together in their married life. Awesome work.

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awroneema

@awroneema

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#835

1st of all...

Nahiii...dill tote tote kardiyaa...i was dying to know about those damn consequences...how arnav survived that particular night..was he able add perks on the bar...how khushe reacted...those awkwardness...the make ups etc etc..!! issshhh kiu leap le liya...at least subah toh hone de diya hota...!! pher leap le leti ...kya FARAQQ par jata.!!! i wont forgive u baasss...hump...

Grrr... I HaTE yOu...Like i LUV YoU...HuMPpp

Chalo...abb jab thodi sa shant huya mera dill toh Happy Valentines day to u too ji...now lets proceed with the update...

we saw there was a leap...a huge one...not on the the time frame of 1 month in the story...but a era in the characters...

buaji ---the evr motherly figure to our princess...who always try to make her daughter..a perfect DIL...like every common moms...and now we got a glimpse of that Madhumati as a in law member to khushi---

a mother can discuss anything nd everything with her daughter without others care...but before revealing the truth she hasitate for some times...and wanted to pass her to Samar...that shows..when it comes to her family she is hesitating to disclose the truth even to the DIL...a typical in law nature...but she knows from her age and finally disclosed it for the betterment of the family...then a little jealousy moment on her own titalya...

"She has been eating last after making sure everyone is attended to for ten years but had never seen such restless worry for herself from her brother. Replace her with his daughter and the man is so worried as if she is being sold into slavery."

i found it really cute...a healthy saas- bahu jelousy!!

khushi the most pampered butterfly ...is no more the princess of the house...she has taken the steps to her ..throne...to become the ultimate queen...Bade papas laaddoo, buajis titaliye became the bahu in true sense...and in spite of being novice she managed this pretty well...one of my fav monologue of buaji showing khushis desparate dream---

"When will he understand that his little Laddoo is now a married girl who wants to do all this in her marital home. A young wife who wants to pamper her husband and takes pride in his dependency on herself. That she is maturing into a woman in love and the reason of this change is his own son!

khushi is a lot mature..sensible and intelligent than her age...i mean as she was being pampered all her life...it cud be natural of her if she tried to behave moody, nagging, emotional, childish...demanding to her husband...but she surprises me to the bits the way she has been dealing the situation...her husbands aloofness..silence...anger ...and accusations...

she took the correct decision of going to the buaji rather than the reluctant father-son duo on that matter...and thax to buaji that she finally revealed the past to her...it was her right to know...it often happens...we called our DIL our ..daghter..or...part of the family..but when it comes to sharing secret ..they are restricted to those issue and make them feel like a outsider who reside under the same roof...i understand arnav..nd support his aloofness on the issue..he has been in trauma all his life..nd unfold that part of life is not that easy...but initially i was disappointed with samar when he told her only the half truth...but i am glad that buaji took the right decision...and the result is in front of us..i dont need to elaborate more after your this point--

'Madhumati could see Arnav bitwa's wife shining bright through her daughter. First and foremost, she was now her husband's champion. Clucking over him like a mother hen since she came to know his mother's truth as if trying to make up for that vile woman's follies. '

her agony..her understanding..her pain on his pain..her dedication to remove the pain proves that how much she luv and care for arnav...and trying her level best to give him every possible happiness...she is doing a wonderful job when it comes to priorities her decision...without hurting i hope...the other fellows ..bingo..keep going khushi..i know once ur mrg is on track u will fix up the gap b/w lavannya nd arnav too...i donno abt rishav nd arnav getting along though..

and yes---there was a woman called sujata.who showed arnav wat is the meaning of relation..
and now there is woman called khushi who will show arnav the real meaning of relationship..u owe this to womanhood khushi...for the pride of womanhood.n u will do it i know..

Arnav is a really complex character...i m surprised this time...i thought he wil jump and grab the affection khushi is showering on him..like a mom on their kid...he was a child without a heathy childhood...a n adult with horrible belief on bond ..so when he is offered those missed moments i thought he will luv to be the child again...and steal the childhood again..the yong boy wo will luv to be the center of attention of his girl...but it surprises me when he acted reluctant on letting khushi pamper..n care him 😲

again---he surprised me the way he is showing his trust on her...by giving her the space---not peeping in her ofc though he has still issues with rishav...its commendable from a possessive and traumatized man !...so it actually worked on his case----physical assurance is greater than the verbal assurance..😆 now i am hoping some pay back too...i know khushi is all giving self...at least she might be dreamt of a verbal assurance in a tiny miny part of her heart too...arnav k gaddi toh i want...more..not kiss ..etc tak jo reach..so i can dream for that too ryt.. 😆

motto of arnav and khushi's life has become one now---
for arnav---letting khushi go away from him was never an option..
for khushi---she will not let her love slip out of her hand...

BUT...they have a long way to go on the understanding level...i see that...though arnav and khushi both of them are trying more and more to work on this relationship from their part...but the message is not received to the other end...

khushi thinks----

"Not that the self-sufficient man is making it any easy for her at the very basic level itself. She had to practically wrestle the daily duty of knotting his tie out of his hands and literally eat his head for getting the permission to manage his stuff around".

while according to arnav---

"And he had complied inspite of his uneasiness that change stirs in his mind, specially on the personal front. He had relinquished quite some control of his carefully built life to her, because that's what she had seem to want. And what Khushi wanted, he would give it to her. No questions asked. Mostly."

again khushi had decided to love him so much, fill his heart with so so much love, that one day he will have no option left but to return some of that love back to her...whereas arnav is alwayis luving her though he himself is not aware of the fact...nd due to his inefficiency in showing and verbalizing his heart out to her she can not see that...i feel arnav did not even has to confess his luv ever to her only if he shows her the pics on his lappy nd confess the real reason why he married her!! rest khushi is more than mature enaf to put 2+2=4 in that matter...😉 and then she will with preide let her hubby know..." u thick headed husband of mine u have luved me crazily way before i have even fallen for u!!"

the language the are successful to read without any misunderstanding is the language of intemecy---she knows he luvs their moments and he can feel that too...and its so wonderful to read..how they are taking baby...ermm.. toddler... nope.. adolescent ...young 🤪 neyaaa... who am i kidding... naughty ehm ehm..yess yess naughty steps to shape up their ehm ehm ...(uff that again reminds me..i hate u anamika...😡...uff uff uff my wish to know those damn consequences!!) relation perfectly...

so wat right now its only behind the close doors of their bedroom...we knw time will change soon...
may be a 180 degree turn---

in arnav babuwas behavior
towards his wify dear..😳

see..the hugging session already reached to the rainy garden of the mansion...we all will see how high arnav can get...on the nasha of his khushi ..😳

the update was MIND BOGGLING...i was floating in the wave of emotion...drowning in the pool of dream...drenching in the rain of passion and suddenly i realized...

hayee..wat a cliff hanger...!!

mann to kar raha tha k mai vampire banjau and ur khoon chusloon...!!
then for the sake of next update..i drop that wish too...
😆

oh khushiii...on his 30th birthday u made him blow 30 candles...nd a offered ur fav dinner...
on 31st birth day u made him enjoy u..ermm i mean rain...n wat will u offer in dinner this time..ur fav or his fav----or something common...☺️ [btw why dis sadoo hubby missing his wifys bday! its been over a year since they met..or r u planning any honeymoon bday..😆]

okay okay now----

take--1

khushi: Arnavji, are you alright?
arnav: I... I... want you today Khushi. Not... not kisses... I.. more..'

khushi: Kyaaa!!!
Arnav: Don't say no

khushi: but...i dont...w..a..nt...
Arnav: plzz

Khushi: I mean...i dont...w..a..nt...to say no..
Arnav: ohh..dats fine..so may i...

khushi: but i cant say yes either...
Arnav: damn itt...why khushy..i why..i donno..u HAVE to say YES...pls

khushi: i..i...m on my dates...arnavji...sorry..
Arnav: shit...but u r dancing in the rain remember...!

khushi: thats fine...i m a 30 day girl...u know..whisper...
Arnav: what the!!! 😡

take ----2

khushi: Arnavji, are you alright?
arnav: I... I... want you today Khushi. Not... not kisses... I.. more..'

khushi: Kyaaa!!!
Arnav: Don't say no

khushi: but...i dont...w..a..nt...
Arnav: plzz

Khushi: I mean...i dont...w..a..nt...to say no..
Arnav: ohh..dats fine..so may i...

khushi: but i cant say yes either...
Arnav: damn itt...why khushy..i why..i donno..u HAVE to say YES...pls

khushi: but this is a garden...nd remember u hate PDA..!!
Arnav: yea..yea..i was going to continue in that sound proof room of ours..u know..

khushi: but this wet saree is heavy..i cant walk that much...
Arnav: uff i will carry u..hunny..now say YES...

khushi: but that is PDA too..
Arnav: grrr...oky..oky..i give up...i dont mind PDA any more..happy now say the Damn Yes..

khushi: haww..arnavji..thats cheating u didn even peck me good bye for the god damn excuse of ur PDA...!! i wont play with...u katti..
Arnav: khushi...u r the mature one of us...so u know we never play..we do business...only..now SAY YES...

khushi: arnav ji...i work for NGO...i dont do business for profit..u forgot!!
Arnav: toh thoda sa charitty mujh per bhi kar though..

khushi: i would have but i use ur credit cards only...
arnav: let it be...u have turned me off as well...
khushi: what the!!!

uff issey pehley soch soch k dimag ka dahi banjaye update de dena...nd u promised a continuation...NO LEAPS are allowed this time...

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Maleina34

@Maleina34

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#836

Oh the cruel way you treat us your loyal readers by leaving us hanging like that.

Great story.this chapter was awesome!

I love the way Kushi has matured. She is one acting as a wife and she has become very understanding of Arnav. Arnav has still a lot to learn about his wife. His trust issues are pretty deep I think it will take him a lifetime to let go of every hurt he has been afflicted. I wish he opens a little more emotionally, not just physically.

Please stop torturing us and update soon

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Anita05

@Anita05

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#837

Whoaaa what an amazig update whoaaa im dying here i want to know how its gonna happen yaaa waiting

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Arshidrishti

@Arshidrishti

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#838

superb update

love it 😉

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#839

very interesting update! loved the passion between arnav and khushi, the chemistry between them is so electrifying and sizzling that they can set everything around them on fire! for me they are one very unique jodi, everyone other couple fades in the background when these two are mentioned and thank u so much for keeping them alive through ur mind blowing writing!

coming to the update, its nice to see that buaji is seeing that her titaliya has been transformed in a married and very mature young lady who loves and respects her husband more than anything!

i think it was kinda cute seeing khushi doing all these domestic things for arnav, their bond has truly evolved over the last month and their comfort level with each other has increased tremendously. n now that she knows something from her husband's bitter past she can finally understands from where arnav is coming and y he is still harboring all this fears about betrayal! i simply fail to understand how a mother can do this to her own son! is mother much more important than her own blood happiness! no wonders arnav hates his mum, she made him go through hell all these years but now that khushi is here onward with him every step of his life, things are looking brighter and promising for them:)

this birthday is going to be one of a kind for arnav, its going to be so special.

i know u have ur own style of writing and i really love it without any doubt but i just wanted to read wat was khushi reaction to arnav's request. i dont to read it in a retrospective narration. its just a tiny miny wish.