Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 23)

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

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Posted: 11 years ago

#851

The transition of Khushi From her do- nothing attitude to a responsible maalkin of shantivan , a wife who is simply bestowed n head over heels of her husband , wants to lay the world at his feet n encompass him in her love so much that his demons/ nightmares just get disolved into oblivion yet retaining her child woman , happy go lucky qualities is absolutely remarkable... !!! 😊 🤗

Iam thouroughly enjoying their marital life Anony... 😃

Arnavz detestation for pda but the couple's passionate encounters in the bedroom , his curt demeanor when Khushi in her exhuberance had hugged him in front of their family , I really found it really irresistable yaaa... 🤗

Everything about Arnavz life now revolves around Khushi... His priorities change according to her moods n he is not at all afar when it comes to her happiness... He does anything n everything to see her contented... Well to cut the long story short , the husband is lovingly wrapped around the wife's pinky finger... Not that hez complaining huh ... Nope!! 😉

Aaannnd... dint the birthday celebration just begin?? 😃

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ipkknd12

@ipkknd12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#852

Wonderful update. Thanks for making it extra long one. :)

I am in awe of Khushi's character, a bit more with each update. Arnav ji is lucky.

Now that they are so close to crossing that threshold of becoming one, will Khushi say those 3 magical words to her Arnav ji? It's time, won't you agree Anony ji?

In the past couple or more chapters, we mostly have seen Khushi adjusting, caring and pampering Arnav ji. I wish in the coming chapters, We get to see Arnav ji reciprocating this sood sameth. And we can say Khushi is lucky. What say?

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sban

@sban

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Posted: 11 years ago

#853

goodness.. only you can leave the story at this juncture... amazing amazing writing!!

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rvas

@rvas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#854

that was amazingly writeen...I loved the whole tie part was just supe awesome...to leave us at that was pure evil...I like the fact that she is so in love that she is willing to try so hard but he is still taking his time to get there which is so what I expect from the characters that you have written

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Awesomeforever

@crazyforarshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#855

OMG...what a fantastic chapter my dear girl!!! At the outset let me say sorry for writing late, twas the weekend here in the gulf...with hubby home I hardly get time to myself forget about the computer completely...so any occupation other than mission pleasing hubby is a strict no-no!!!

It is so heartening to see Khushi so trying to please her Arnavji...indeed what all love makes you do...😳😳😳A young wife who wants to pamper her husband and takes pride in his dependency on herself. That she is maturing into a woman in love and the reason of this change is his own son! So beautifully written sweety!!!

The whole story telling sequence has been wonderfully handled...the reasons for it, the understanding, the consequences...everything is fantastic! Must say though, the whole tie-confusion was cute, I thought! PDA and Arnav Singh Raizada lived on two different planets. He was still so formal outside their room with her, like if people would know that he can actually smile and show affection to his wife, they will start charging him for it. I loved it...seriously...charging him for it?????? What a sweetheart of a character you've created when you made her understand why he is so insecure about her affection & loyalty!

The scene depicted on the verandah of Raizada Mansion is beyond beautiful really...the way he is trying to control his baser instincts, but can't finally...the way she is so pleading him to enjoy with her...the fact that her acquiescance also bothers him because he so wants her but he does not understand whether she wants him with equal fervour or no & if yes then what the hell is he supposed to do with it...the fact that she has become his life & he hardly realises that, the nutcase that he is...the fact that her compliance to his physical display of affection is affecting him badly, but he can't make head nor tail of it!!!!! All this & more is giving me goosebumps darling...beautifully written...that's all I can say!!!

The cliffhanger that you have left us with is seriously gonna kill me till the next update, so all I can say is, please update sooner than later otherwise I might just die of waiting...do I need to still tell you how wonderful a writer you are???? Please pat yourself in the back sweetie, a hug from me & a lil kiss too...just so that you update a lil quicker...muahhh!!!! 😉😉😉

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ArhiMaria

@ArhiMaria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#856

I cant tell you how much I loved the chapter but why did you leave it there! IAh I so wanted to read more! Hoping and praying for an early update! :-) And also hoping that you continue from where you left off and not forward the happenings to a month or a few days after! :P

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jiji

@lakshyaNkt

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#857

cliff hanger no bueno

please update soon

thnx

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#858

Khushi taking control of the relationship and stepping into her role as the wife, lover and bahu is adorable. Even more is Sumars worry. She is definitely maturing. And yet the crazy girl is too efficient for her own good that she deprived herself and her husband of the morning private kiss...lol. She is still the very adorable Laddoo. No wonder Arnav gave her a cold glare.

Arnav is beguiled almost against his wishes into believing in life and love by this ingenious and loving angel so that he is wondering...'How would it feel to have all your dreams actually come true for once in life'. I so want him to experience happiness.

As cliff hangers go, this one was the most painful one yet to stop on. really?

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Sharon08

@Sharon08

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#859

Back from vacation to three new updates!! Wohooo!! What a treat:)

I am loving how u handle their growing relationship anonymous!! Its slow and soo believable. I absolutely love how you involve other family members after their marriage too.

It takes a lot of love and patience for someone to handle a moody guy like Arnav and Im glad you molded Kushi's character into such a way that it is understandable to watch her deal with his antics and moods and not feel like she is weak. Love this story!! Cant wait for more!!

Thank you for all the wonderful updates Anonymous:)

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sweetpinky123

@sweetpinky123

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#860

Yaar this is so not fair. You know that was a damn cliffhanger. Why did you stop there :(

We had been waiting for this update for such a long time. Chalo still the update was amazing as usual. I love the way it started with Buaji's thoughts about their relation. Sumer's protectiveness is justified after all whatever happens Khushi is still his laddu. I loved the fact that Khushi is able to tell why Arnav's mood has changed. She is a wonderful wife trying to understand Arnav's behaviour, getting to know about his past and deciding to do everything possible just to gain his trust. Letting go of her friends for her husband. How her priorities have changed after marriage.

So his control snapped after all and like always khushi will never say no why would she even want to say no, he is her husband after all and one whom she loves so much.

Waiting for the next update desperately 😉

P.S You make us wait for the update. I am dying to read the CLG update. When are you going to update buddy?

Edited by sweetpinky123 - 11 years ago