Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 23)

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#821

A very Happy Valentines Day...to you and your amazing story!

The loving Khushi has realized do much about her husband's past..it's like she's shielding him now...she has matured so much since the last three month...it's like a huge change.. has come over her...and Arnav as well...ithey make each other happy..very proud of them both!

The ending was sooo romantic...perfect Valentines...gift, waiting ...and waiting for the next...this was such a beautiful update...loved it!

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Hkrajan

@Hkrajan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#822

Looking fwd to next chapter

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savi_malvi

@savi_malvi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#823

Beautiful update. Really appreciate the hard work u do to give us such masterpieces. Love the natural progression of Arnav and Khushi's relation and hopefully he will start talking abt his insecurities. Thanx for the pm :).

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shell01

@shell01

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#824

Wow wow wow ...lovely update..The story has come to such an interesting & most awaited point😳, simply loving it...

What a happy birthdaywala gift for birthday boy Arnav ji ? A hot, sizzling & sexily adorable Khushi. He couldn't have dreamed or asked for a better gift. Or maybe not. There's more to go because his birthday has just begun😛.

Cant wait to read the next part ...You surely know how to keep the excitement up😆

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#825

that was a wonderful chapter...
u covered alot with this...
it was such a delight to know that arnav has accepted and decided to give into her... and khushi working towards helping him overcome his past and trust issues by giving up on everything else was heartening...
bhuaji was so right with her feeligs and am glad she explained everything to khushi..that seemed to have changed everything...
and with this amout of love and care arnav is bound to throw his cautions to the wind...!
the lst part really gave me goosebumps...how could you stop it there!!! it was d valentine's update afteralll!!!!! ;)
well...i loved loved d update and am eagerly waiting for the next part...!
ps , what should i do to get email notification of your other story...

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seema13

@seema13

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#826

Truly a brilliant update ...Love,romance nd emotions every thing was there nd i thourly enjoyed.Thanks...for giving us such a wonderfull update.

u show very well through buaji POV the slow transformation of Khushi into a mature woman who not only wants to take responsibility of her wifey duity but also wants to play a perfect role of a married woman as well.. nd loved how buaji helping her in this process nd feeling proud to see her titaliya doing perfectly allright.Sumer reaction ... it shows how he cares abt Khushi nd don't want to except the truth that his Laddoo is now a married wowan.

So finally Khushi knows the past of her husband .Thanks to buaji...now Khushi's many unspoken question will be answered itself .truly appriceate...the way she is determine to erase all bitter past memory of her Arnavji nd for that She will do anything nd everything nd i can only say how lucky is our Arnav that Khushi is in her life.m sure end of the day all her efforts will be pay off nd Arnav will return all with bonus to our khushi .but till then she will have to keep patience...lots of patience.

i totally agree with khushi decession to keep her friendship into back seat.how mature she is...she knows her broken nd insecure husband needs her more than any thing else.Their relationship needs her full concentration at this stage nd so her decession is fully justified.

Happy to see their growing needs of intimacyy. both r eager to take their physicall intimacy further.
love the whole rain scene...it was truly romantic nd the way u shown Khushi in the rain...god it was too sexy nd any normal humain being will lost his controll... So our Arnav was no exception .love how Arnav thought goes on to see Khushi in the rain.

waiting eagerly to read next update.

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pree2605

@pree2605

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#827

awesome..

loved it..

thnxx fr pm..

update sooon

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fatim28

@fatim28

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#828

nooo y r u doin this to us cant wait

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Badtameez.Dil

@Badtameez.Dil

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#829

My expectation from next chapter : 😉😆

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Badtameez.Dil Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Arnav... Arnav Khushi...
Khushi... Arnav Khushi...

Aankhon Mein Arnav ko Utharne Do Zara
Baahon Mein Arnav ko Pighalne Do Zara
Badtameez.Dil Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Arnav... Arnav Khushi...
Khushi... Arnav Khushi...

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Salvatein Kahin Karwatein Kahin
Phel Jaaye Kajal Bhi Tera
Nazron Mein Ho Guzar Tha Hua
Khwabon Ka Koi Khafila
Jismo Ko Ruho Ko Jale Do Zara
Sharmo Khaya Ko Machalne Do Zara
Badtameez.Dil Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Arnav... Arnav Khushi...
Khushi... Arnav Khushi...

Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara

Choolon Badan Magar Iss Tarah
Jaisa Surila Saaz Ho
Andhere Chupe Tere Zulf Mein
Kholo Ke Raat Azaad Ho
Aanchal Ko Seene Se Dhalne Do Zara
Shabnam Ki Boondein Phisalne Do Zara
Badtameez.Dil Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Arnav... Arnav Khushi...
Khushi... Arnav Khushi...
Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dalne Do Zara
Bahon Mein Arnavko Pighalne Do Zara
Badtameez.Dil Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Arnav... Arnav Khushi...
Khushi... Arnav Khushi...
Arnav... Arnav Khushi...
Khushi... Arnav Khushi...
Arnav... Arnav Khushi...

How many of u ppl agree wd me ????😛

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#830

I can't believe u stopped there!!!

Amazing chapter. They are both getting close to eachother. I'm glad that khushi knows about his past. She understands him more now and what he behaves in certain ways. Arnav is he two side. He is showing he's caring side to her but when he's in front of other pple he's emotions less .

Waiting eagerly for next chapter. Do continue soon