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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Awesome update
Love the way you describe Akash n payal redeem. Their marriage was effected a lot with khushi's departure n his mother wasn't helping. I love when Akash finally gave her ultimatum.
Anjali, atlast in the end she was with her brother n trusted him to bring khushi back in their life.
Love new khushi.
Khushi too wanted Arnav to bring her true self back, she don't want to live a line n fighting her heart which was still in love with Arnav. Her one sentence 'Don't go's said all.
Love the TS

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

beautiful update

totally loved it dear 👍🏼

thanks for the PM

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Nice part hope arnav forgv arnav

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Lovely piece.
Really liked how you kept it realistic.
The story felt natural.

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

beautifully written

awesome part

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Beautiful TS... Loved it

Edited by chandana.s - 11 years ago

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

I absolutely loved the second part and I think it was a perfect ending,

I don't think the ending was sad as there is a chance for him too win her back and she has not said no to him.

Awww love the fact Akash was feeling guilty and he even apologised to khushi which was so sweet,

Arnav and his jealousy and possessiveness is always a treat to read, love the way he barged into the cabin and shouted at veer.

I'm glad Khushi did not forgive or talk to Anjali and Mami straight away, they deserved the silent treatment from her.

Loved the beautiful and sweet moment between Arnav and Khushi at the end in the garden, it was acceptance and acknowledgment of hopefully starting a new journey again.

Loved the two shot, both parts have been a wonderful read.

Amazing writing and written exceptionally well,

Thank you so much for writing this,

Thanks for the PM xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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nmaharaj

@nmaharaj

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Really enjoyed reading it.

Edited by nmaharaj - 11 years ago

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

lovely second part! 😛 it felt real, repairing broken trust again takes its time and that's what arnav gave her, without letting her forget about him. i think u finished it nicely with a lot of hope, arnav will have to work hard to get all of khushi this time and khushi will have the loving husband she always deserved ❤️ she's become like asr, dil and dimaagh constantly fighting for control, but of course dil will win 😳

even though she's still recovering from all the damage that was done he's learning fast how to make it up to her - not grand gestures but small everyday things like being considerate of her feelings, giving her space, caring about her needs, his relationship with her family, supporting her in front of his family, every little thing she always needed from him. and so, of course they must eventually become one again and have their hamesha

superb job, hope u think of continuing this or writing another shot following on from where this ends, would be beautiful to read 😃