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sarozz

@sarozz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

I love this strong side of khushi that they dint portray in the show...it hurts romantic see arnav sad but let him regret and realise how wrong he was and how much he has broken her down...simply amazing

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Raji Senthilkumar

@RajiSobtian

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Simply amazing part
waiting 4 next part

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

amazing and beautifully written, loved it ❤️ i like this strong khushi but she's also lost a part of herself somehow, hope she gets what she needs to be truly happy again. arnav has his work cut out for him, seems like he and his family have destroyed the woman he loved. hope he can restore khushi's essence and her heart, it's the only way he can repair his own heart. wondering what ur planning for ur next part, cant wait 😃

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

what does poojali feel abt this step of arnav

i want kushi to give it back to all???

what is the guarantee that he wont hurt her if anji desires again

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Thanks for this lovely beginning. Cannot wait to see what follows next!

I always enjoy reading ArHi stories where Khushi leaves Arnav and attempts to move on with her life with Arnav left suffering. His redemption on the show never satisfied me so I have to rely on IF writers instead. Thankfully they are a talented bunch and always come up with so many different takes on the scenario.

Arnav never truly understands the impact of his actions and his words especially when it comes to Khushi. It's always react first, think later. Great to see this captured in your story. And the lasting impact of his behavior is so visible in the changed and matured Khushi.

Really enjoyed it. Thanks again!

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Excellently written and very well thought out first part. I'm really eager for the next :)

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

it is more than a positive ending

hats off to u
for writing emotions so beautifully, I know she will forgive him one day

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Well seems she has started the journey to forget too what happened

Good thing this time he didn't ruin things

Or crowd her too much

It couldn't have been easy for her though

Seeing those who hurt her

But she always had large heart

And once again she forgave them

I think this ending was perfect for sure

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Love the update Chibi!!! I am going take it as a happy beginning to a long journey which they will have a happy ending 😃

Love that Khushi did not give in really easily and forgive him the minute she saw the family. Arnav needs to earn the forgiveness and win her back after lots of repentence lol!!!!

So I am happy that you left it there or I have a better idea why dont you make this a short story and give more updates how the journey had a fairy tale ending 😉Love all your stories yaar you have to come back and start a long ff!!!!

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Loved the story completely. As u mentioned the another possible way Khushi could have reacted to his constant blame game. I was actually fed up with the ever forgiving behaviour of Khushi. The character Khushi was introduced to us, as a dignified girl but later they couldn't sustain that impression.

Your story was amazing and realistic.