ArHi TS: Seeing You | 07/02 New Replies P21; Previous ones P16-18

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Awesome!Both of their feelings are so nicely expressed! I like the change in Khushi!

Great job and thank you for the pm 😊

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zaibun un nisa

@saima4744

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

It was pretty superb.
Love the way u update us.
Story was just amazing.
Tf pm.

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Enjoyed part 1. Waiting for the next.

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

mind blowing..in fact this belongs to my fav genre..I love the stories where Kushi leaves Arnav and he wins her back :-) btw this story line has potential to become a SS / FF.. give it a shot pleaseee

Edited by sman - 11 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

What a lovely piece of writing!

How could you even think of deleting it?

I loved the fact that Khushi is living away from all the people who didn't support her when she needed them.

And I loved that she is now working and standing on her own two feet.

She is not suffering.

She has put on weight and is in good health.

It is Arnav who is missing her and needs her.

She doesn't .

That is what I loved.

He has become gaunt and weak.

He deserves it all.

Waiting now to read the next part.

Best of your with your studies and exams.

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Nice TS
Waiting for second part eagerly !!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Welcome back my sweet sweet darling,

I have missed you so much as well as your writing, please return soon to the world of IF.

You know I have always loved your comedy genre based stories but this concept is definitely your style of writing.

I absolutely loved part one it was brilliant, yet quite heart breaking and emotional.

I so wanted Khushi to leave Arnav in the serial when he hurled all them cruel and harsh words so I'm loving you for writing this.

Khushi does not deserve to be living amongst the Raizada people especially Anjali and it's true they never knew her worth,

I'm glad Arnav after meeting her he has realised how much he has broken and damaged Khushi mentally,

So I'm guessing there will be some romance coming up in the second part, I hope Arnav can prove to Khushi that he is willing to win back her love and trust.

The update was a brilliant read, fantastic writing.

Thanks for the PM,

Please update soon, eagerly waiting xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago