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Meera

@KhushiPM

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

nice ts

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

"They would be friend's first" ! This line itself sums up the whole TS for me and i honestly don't see it ending any other way. Somethings are best left unsaid !

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

kuch batein an-kahi si rehne do,

kuch batein un-suni si rehne do,

sub batein agar keh dain dil ki,

sub batein agar sun lain is ki,

to phir kiya reh jaye ga,

aik ojhal beqali si rehne do,

aik rangeen un-bani si duniya main,

aik khirki un-khuli si rehne do.

beautiful part..loved it..

thanks for pm

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

the TS was a beautiful one i realy realy loved it!! so sory for the late reply!!

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

This is seriosuly a vry beautful story and hey this is happy ending...

My version of happy ending is when ther r not apart... and u did the same...

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Excellent story...👏

I must say this is the first time you didnt gave happy ending for Arshi but no problem... they will find a way to get together if they meant...😊

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

beautifully written..superb story..😊😊
thanks for pm..!!!

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Nice end.. Arnav redeemed himself for her.. And now even she knows that he will always be there for her, in good times & bad...

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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

This was the perfect end given the way you laid out your story, Arnav repented, Khushi slowly forgave, time is a healer and they both need that to re-establish their love. And importantly it had to be love not the foolish attraction which led to all the troubles. In my mind I would like to believe Arnav wins her over in time for the following Diwali where this time neither avoids their love and they finally get that damn kiss!!

Brilliant tale :)

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: farha_ipkknd
awesomeee .. I so so so wanted something like that in the show.. no matter how much I love Arnav, his ' you are the biggest mistake of my life ' always hurt like hell .. & thank God at least here khushi gave it back to him .. loved it .. continue soon

Thank you so much for the comment! That part had hurt me, too.. Its extremely difficult to go through such a thing, and I wanted to show Khushi to be stronger than what we had seen in the show! Glad you liked it!!!