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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update
Good job dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tht was really awesome...essa lagra saach mai serial chalu hai 😊
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Wow nice taarey prt was swt I luv it
Taarey dance but did not happen :((
gang ahaa I hate thm idiot every boy
1st thr Broke laptop than fight n did not
Said sry also n finally taani got idea I luv
Tht rey felt tht he is not imp for taani n scared
Aww per-cape not gud at all 1st thr are meeting
After ages n thn not romance n fight nahiii
Thanks for PM n update soon plzz
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soo awsmm prt dr
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Hi dr. Nice story. I liked it. Update soon. N plz pm me.
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Hi thanks for the likes/ views and everything replies i mean
i think ive another 4-5 chapters left..hope this is okay

recap- taani laptop broke, taani busy with her project- rey feeling left out..swayam hurt etc.,
part 45


After a while- rey and taani in the front room fighting

"aap itna chillakyun rahen ho?" taani s voice was also high

( Swayam got up from his bed, came to the door and stood , not able to decide whether to walk in or not... and listened )

" kyunki mujhe achha nahin lagtha, i don't like it taani jab tum mujhe apne problems se cut off karthe ho" she didnt understand for a sec

"rey please .aap bhi busy ho aur mujhe kuch prints chahiye tha " indicating a pile of papers in her hand and placed her laptop bag and papers on the table," tho gayi thi baahar" she frowningly replied.

"mobile bhi yahin chodke gayi ho" indicating side table . she lifted it up and looked thro a whole lot of calls and messages , he was still talking," , I was worried , look at the time "

" fine sorry" she gave up and sat down , opened her bag and took the laptop out and settled to work.

" tum abhi bhi upset ho ki gang ke wajah se ?" maybe her irritation about the gang was rubbing off on him...she was getting irritated now, all that she wanted to do was to finish her project and here he was going on and on...she sighed

"no , main jaanthi hoon ki unhone purposely nahin kiya aur sab ne apologise bhi kiya tho.."

"kya? when?" she opened her msg box and handed it out to him- kuch chahiye tho let me know, sorry yaar, hope everything is fine , really sorry, need help? Things ok? Etc., talking as he saw the msgs," sab excited the and maybe immediately realise nahin hua ki problem hogayi but now ..." she smiled slightly pointed to the msgs ," aur bharat ka do missed call bhi hain. so main angry nahin hoon, waise bhi uskeliye na energy hain aur na time " he smiled at the msgs . he had been feeling irritated with them . his eyes however also fell on the rest of the msgs she seemd to ve got- Natasha/XXX/shivam phir se? /his dad some un known names...tauji ...she was talking still " its just that abhi ke liye mera yeh complete karna bohot bohot zyaada important hain . so can i ...?" she pointed to the laptop and took the mobile back

He looked at her , then laptop and sat next to her," kuch help..?" his hands placed on hers

"rey main karloongi" she replied frustrated

"see this is what i mean tum mujhe cut off karthi ho completely like ...like main matter hi nahin kartha...aur baaki sab ki help lethi ho " she had no clue what he was talking about

"main cut off karthi hoon aapko?" she pulled her hands back and interrupted him frustration building up at his interference ," achha ? half the time mera koi bhi stuff aapko yaad hi nahin rehtha..aap team main busy rehthe ho aur... "

"thats not true"

"oh really.." she laughed," aapko yaad tha ki mera submission dates kal hain, ki mera last interviews do din pehle tha? ki mera project 10 months se 8 months mein stop hone waale hain? "

he looked guilty," wo ...no.." not knowing what else to say.

Looking at his disturbed face, her mind moved for a sec from her project to him. she held his hands " rey, but ab yeh sab kyun? kya hua? Suddenly...VP sir ne kuch kahan kya? " He shook his head ,"tho phir can i just finish this rey ? mujhe nahin discuss karna kuch bhi"

rey knew she was right but he didnt like it, taani on the other hand realised he was uncomfortable but was too worried about the pending work.

he nodded and got up," Can u manage ? swayam..?" she smiled and nodded . he moved to go out, came back to her gave her a one armed hug quickly and went out. taani s face broke into a smile at his hug and her smile stayed as she re started her work.

after a while -swayam came from his room

"bhai aap kyun aaye?" Taani got up from her seat in a hurry

"ita okay, i just came to see ki tum soyi kyun nahin abhi tak .arent you done?"

"haan bhai almost" he smiled ," go to sleep then taani thak jaogi " she nodded ," rey chala gaya?" he asked she nodded again , he hesitated and ," koi problem hain?"

"not really bhai, kal ta kuch tho report banjaayega" she replied not getting that he asked about rey. Realising that she was into the report, swayam kept quiet.

Reys place morning

Rey woke up to the alarm and switched it off, looked at the mobile which had msg- Taani

Good morning rey, my works done but kuch sign etc., chahiye tho main nikal rahin hoon college aaj, ive spoken to Sharon bhabhi bhai ke liye. Call me when free

She left? Seriously? And he saw some missed calls as well. He hadn't even spoken to her ...he threw the pillow at nothing in particular and not satisfied threw the mobile down.he so wanted to hit someone

Mobile rang- he jumped to receive and " taani"

"hello no Sharon here. Called to ask tumne wo finance details karliya?"

He made aface-" nahin" "nahin? No? Matlab sach mein? Rey...u said kit um karloge...what the hell rey...kyun?"

Main tumhe agar batao ki details sab swayam ki laptop mein tha aur laptop taani ke paas tha tho tum ...well ..." main bhool gaya Sharon" he could hear her mind screaming," but i ll finish it , waise bhi afternoon tak time haina, u don't worry...relax.." and disconnected before she could respond

He hastily called up taani-she received at the first ring," rey...im really really sorry" his disappointment and anger came up again at her voice," i had to get back aur main kuch jaldi hi nikalgayi, aaj submit ..." she caught the silence and asked," aap gussa ho? ...sorry" he didnt want to respond but her soft tired guilty voice wiped most of his immediate anger off," next week na main.."

"taani stop...chodo ab , its ok..ab mujeh yeh batao ki kya swayam ki laptop tumhaare paas hi hain?"

"nahin,bhai ke paas hain. project ka saara info mail..."

"oh ok, kyunki mujhe wo chahiye tha aaj ki Vp sir meeting ke liye.fine main usse leloonga . u take care...u reached?" he asked looking at the time

"no...another hour..." neither of them spoke and then bye haan bye. Cut.

Taani sensed the disappointment and cursed her luck...yeh laptop ko abhi kharab hona tha! sab aap ki wajah se she looked up in irritation and then sighed, atleast mera kaam almost poora hogaya.phir se last offices ka interviews and then send .aaj se apna naam type karoo tho bhi back up lena taani.

Rey cut the call, his anger level down but still feeling somewhat uncomfortable/ called swayam up to complete his work before Sharon could eat him up.

( Swayam wondered whether to ask rey about their fight but finally didnt)

Few days later

( background - taani submitted her final draft/ team gave VP sir details- those guys wanted the team to perform professionally for a big event on X day with a whole lot of other performances to see stage value of the team before any academy could be thought of / VP sir asked them to go ahead with it- teams happy but little upset as they have to listen to someone else choreographing them... laptops become fine though taani is free, work is already done now) Mobile convo going on

Both smiling..." kitne din baad free ho aap"

"main? Look my dear busy tum thi.." he replied."tum mujhe bhool gayi thi us project ke wajah se..its taken away my taani from me... "he shot back, he had complained about this continuously. She sighed and replied trying to lighten up,

"aap single piece boyfriend ho jo apne girlfriend ki project se jealous hoga "he smiled ," par aap bhi free nahin the rey..aapka rehersals ka timing dekho" he agreed kind of," but details batao... yeh kab hain?"

"next month first week...u are coming right? "

"haan bas hamara final presentation ka dates pata chaljaaye then decide karloongi.. " he made a not again face, she sensed it and added," yeh 3 months bas , uske baad main waapas wahaan ...aapke paas" he didnt reply, he didnt trust himself to talk normally , she changed the topic and continued "but itna bada event aur itni jaldi? Do hafthe bhi nahin"

"event ka preparation tho bohot months se hain but we r just last min entry ...its a new concept hamareliye blah blah blah, exciting hain in a way... " he explainedhis enthusiasm clear even late in the night seeping even thro the mobile . taani smiling thought- this is what i love about you rey, ur passion to live , to dance. kitne excited lagrahe ho..rishnaji aise hi sab teek rakhna "...tho humein atleast 4 other teams ke saath co ordinate rehna padega, sab paagal horahein hain new stuff roz roz seekh seekh ke, u should see Sharon aur bharat fighting "

"im sure aap log achha karoge" he smiled," aisa koi dance nahin bana ab tak jo aaplog seekh nahin sakthe"

" this is over confidence ! " he commented smiling

"over confidence nahin sacha confidence hain sirf aape nahin poori team pe- kyunki aap sab born dancers ho, born to dance ho...meri tarah nahin" she smiled, he frowned

"meaning what? "

"main...main dance trained hoon , natural nahin" there was no sadness or anything, it was just a statement.

" ummm...i cant comment " she had a q look, he continued," maine tho tumhaara dance live dekha hi nahin",before she replied," CD doesn't count," she smiled " waise i have been forgetting , main yeh CD swayam ko dikhaana chahtha ..." he had wlked to the table and picked up the CD cover with both CDs

"NAHIN" she interrupted , he stopped " matlab wo jo 1 mark hain wo mat dikhaana jo 2 marked hain wo dikhao"

" whats the difference? Dono tho same hain...except the dress" she wore a longer top covering her waist and tights in the second one

"aapko yaad hain?" she shyly asked surprised he remembered

"of course , this is my girlfriend substitute ," he joked putting it on again in his laptop , she suddenly missed him ," plus the first ones more ...sexier " he grinned looking at the screen

she blushing said," bhai bhi dekhenge na" he raised his eyebrows and shook his head- she and her brother obscession! "par aapne shayd teek se pehla waala dekha nahin" there was some anticipation in her voice.

he frowned and muttered ," dekha tho hain..." and saw again," kyun? did i miss some..." he caught sight of her one particular pose where she bent backwards and her waist was seen , paused- zoomed--- she waited ---," u have a tattoo taani?! "he was excited and grinned ," never seen it before"

Taani blushed tomoto red ," pehle nahin tha, its new. Nil ne kahaan tha kabhi ki aapko pasand hain, aur main kitne din se wait karrahin thi ki aap kuch kahenge..."

God nil! Rey shook his head stille grinning, that small mark lifted up his spirits to somewhere high to the skies ," tumne bataya kyun nahin? Kitni baar dekha hain kabhi notice nahin kiya" he spoke looking at it from different angles , she was blushing at the sudden lightness in his voice, "whats it? star? " he finally made out a star on the waist above the belly button ," Kitni odd place pe hain! "

" kahin aur lagathi tho sabko dikh jaatha na..yahaan kisiko nahin dikhega"

"mere elawa" he interrupted

"haan" she agreed without really thinking what he meant, he smiled- sometimes she was a kid.it added to the adrenaline rush he already had thanks to the rehersals. She continued ," wo star hum hain Taani aur rey - taarey matlab star!"

He went quiet for a sec and then burst out lauging , she felt surprised then stupid and then insulted at his laugh- rey! Stop...its not funny...Aap...fine haso and cut the call.

he continued to laugh for some time staring at the STAR from different angles - Taarey really! Star! Girls! And laughed again , but Girls! He was touched and dialled her no again.

She ignored it for three times and then picked it- "okay fine sorry" he started," main tumpe has nahin rahaan tha!"

" really? Without reason hasne keliye paagal ho kya?"

" haan hoon tumhareliye" she softened and he smiled - forgetting everything yet again," im missing you "

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awsm update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum update...loved it :)
I hope ye three months jaldi khatam ho Jaye

Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww!!cute updt...
thamnk god taarey ki fight jyada serious nehi huya...
bt phir se taarey dur dur...
taani ne tattoo karwaya star ka...means taarey,so sweet...
rey ka dant todne ka maan kar raha tha...
bt lovely updt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow I luv it n aww taarey fight
But it was not tht serious thank god
I luv how rey was feeling left out n was
Jealous from taani project aww baby taarey
Mob convo was best n wah taani ne tattoo
Kiya wow man tht too stars luvly I luv it aww
Last prt I am missing you me too thanks for PM

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