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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awesome update.
Loved taarey phone calls their cyte nok jhoks.
The cd gift was awesome

Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
soo nice prt
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
taarey phone convos loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
love this phone convo updt...
taarey missing each other,fighting and saying sorry and love each other,love this...
rey's surprise gift is superb...
i love this updt...
bt ab kuch romance chahiye taarey ka plzzz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm update
loved it
very sweet and cute taarey
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Posted: 11 years ago
taarey sweet phone talks awesome per they r craving 4 eachother , so badly , or tum unko nahi milne de rahi ho , agar tumne ab taarey ko aur der tak door rakha na it will be bad 4 u ,!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahaha darrr laga na sooo, plz go n taarey ko mila do good gil!!!! okkk
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow :)
Great update )
All phone convos were awesome :)
Taani's surprise was amazing :)
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update.taarey were superb n ossum
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prtn


hi all of u, am thrilled about 2 things- my like button worked this time!
and someone apparently posted this on FB- thanks a lot whoever it is for liking this.

also thnaks a lot lot for the feedback- for those who liked it as its going thanks/ for those who r confused umm im too at times😊

sorry for the late update- i had 2 sad and 1 bad idea - ive chosen the bad one as i couldnt bring myself to makr TR sad.

part 41
recap- taani left for her college

few days later --Reys place /Taanis apartment-
like Suvreen guggals if anyone has
watched it- both on the mobile


"ummm" rey kissing
the mobile "rey! " taani her voice also
showing her blush


"tum blush kaise karsakthi ho taani, mujhe tho yeh feel hi
aatha" he took the mobile off his ear, loked at it funnily and kept it back


"mujhe aapki voice se
hi wo feel aathi hain!"


Rey grinning naughtily," yeh wo feel kya hain?"


Taani looking caught," rey aap..." he laughed happily," aap
meri aise hi taang kheechthe rahoge tho main aapse baat nahin ..." false
irritation


"no no.ab tho sirf baat hi bachi hain, wo bhi stop mat
karo!" both smiled at their ends...," but taani," haan," im really missing
you.maine jitna socha tha usse kahin zyaada .its like everyday mujhe lagtha
rehtha hain kuch ...baaki hain, kuch kami hain and then realise hotha hain kit
um nahin mere saath ..atleast mere paas "Taani
s face changed but she couldn't say anything. He waited,"hello" umm," tum chup
mat hojao. Kuch kehthi raho" no answer,realsisng she was missing him as well he
tried changing the topic " okay tell me kya chalrahaan hain? matlab tumhaare
project mein"


"jo wahaan karrahin thi wo ab yahaan kuch offices mein
karrahin hoon but its easier kyunki yahaan dhoondna , intro karwaana sab
college ke taraf se hotha hain, so koi bhi office mein takleef nahin hothi..aur
company bhi hain..XXX , Natasha aur kuch aur log bhi aise hi projects karrahe
hain tho..haan its easier aur zyaada enjoyable bhi.." rey realised how alone she
must have felt here , he wondered- mujhe
agar d3 ko chodke jaana padega tho main tho...i ll go mad shayad
,she was
still taling something her voice charged up and as he didnt reply," rey?" haan" mujhe laga
aap sogaye. Actually sone ka time hi hain"


"no..waise bhi aaj kuch edits jo Sharon ne kiya tha usko
dekhna tha..blah blah blah..." he took off explaining some thing the team was
upto- (basically the team s doing
classes and live shows like in the show- they are yet to have a big break for
which they are trying to send their dances everywhere possible so that someone
will finance their actual academy like in the serial)


--------------------


A few more days later-
Reys place /Taanis apartment


"...but tumne kahaan tha ki tum yahaan aaogi" disappointed
rey," isiliye tho main nahin aaya"


"im really sorry rey! I thought ki main weekend aasakthi
hoon par yahaan college mein exhibition chal rahaan hai n aur main bhi
organising committee mein thi, so main ..." she sensed his disappointment and ,"
main next weekend ..."


"next weekend hamara ek investor ke saath meeting hain and
we have planned ki hum unke saamne performance denge and jo hamara classes hain unke ke bhi video dikhaayenge...students are also
more ab tho weekend classes bhi hain" he
replied irritated


"tho kya hua wo thodi na poora din rahega..."she said
enthusiastically


"hum log ------jagah jaarahe hain to meet them " he snapped
at her. she immediately kept quiet realsising that she wouldn't be able to go
and his tone was so rude, he closed his
eyes regretting his scream," sorry taani, im just..."


"nahin sorry tho main hoon , mujhe laga nahin tha ki..."


"leave it now" he cut her sentence


"sorry..." she replied tentatively and wondered how to cheer
him up , putting on a false voice ,"rey kuch batao aapki is ..investor ke baare
mein"


"kya batao? Hain koi ," his voice still cross," he wanted all our papers first! Dance ke baare
mein tho poocha nahin but still we
thought we can show him our dance and
see if.."


"but rey agar usne danace nahin poochaa tho he wuld be only
looking at you as business tho aap kyun unse..." she started seriously. He felt a surge of irritation at
her words


"taani i don't need any advises now. we don't have much
choices and i know what we are doing" he
was more rude than he had ever been to her," please don't interfere"



she felt tears fill her eyes but
at the same time got angry ," fine ..aapki life hain" both were quiet for a
second and then..."tho good night" "main jao" together and cut the call.



The next day early in
the morning-


rey on the mobile calling/taani on the
mobile calling...after a while msgd each other - SORRY / SORRY- both smiled
and msgd again- its fine/ koi baat nahin



And then --love u rey / i love you taani🤗❤️ ur my life , sorry taani smiled Both went about their work



Next night--- same
scene of them on the mobile, both in good mood and smiling and talking


"... tum hamesha aise raho , cutely baat karthe raho"


"umm matlab aapko lagtha hain ki main cutely baat karne ke
elawa kuch nahin karsakthi"


"maine aisa kahaan? " she laughed happy that they weren't fighting,"
all you girlfriends are like this, seedhe
seedhe baat ka ulta motive nikaalne ki degree hain kya aap sab mein? Boyfriend ko
samaj nahin aana chahiye ki kya bolna hoga kis time pe "


She laughed but then Her laugh stopped," all you girlfriends
matlab...yeh aap kis girlfriends ki baat
karrahe ho "


Seeing her show some possessiveness, he pulled her leg," jo
bhi mere hain un sab ki.im so famous you know..everyone loves rey ..so rey also
loves everyone " in the rey style showing off


"ha ha , rey i know u r joking "


"achha if you know im joking tho poocha kyun?" she frowned ,"
u don't trust me taani" he said acting like he was hurt


"oh please maine bas aisa hi poocha tha.mujhe pata hain ki
aap aisa koi mujhe cheat karne ka kaam nahin karenge"


He smiled happily," i know ,meri himmat hi nahin hogi tumhe cheat
karne ka" she smiled happily," kyunki
mujhe phir swayam ko bhi face karna padega na " he continued pulling her leg. He
smile replaced by a frown


"tho aap isliye kisi aur ko nahin dekhoge?"


"haan, swayam ki gussewaala lecture kaun sunega "


"rey! ...fine main
...aap...aapko jo karna hain karo..jiske saath jaana hain jao..main bhai ko
batadoongi. Mujhe bhai ke liye jhelne ki koi zaroorat..."


"Taani stop," his smile had disappeared," don't say that
again" she stopped in a huff ," u know i was joking, itni serious hone ki
necessity hain?" she relaxed though feeling a little guilty," kuch flirting
nahin karsaktha tumhare saath?"


"nahin...matlab sorry rey" she closed her eyes," i know..wo
itne din se aap mile nahin ho tho ...im miss you rey..bohot bohot zyaada" he
smiled feeling lighter," next time main teek se plan karke aanewaali hoon aapse
milne" no reply," rey?"


"nahin go on sun rahaan hoon, " hugging a pillow ," instead
of all these kaam ki baat hum dono ko aise hi rehna chahiye" she laughed but
her mobile beeped a msg- she saw and
then sighing answered," but mujhe abhi jaana hain , Natasha ka msg aaya hain
and ive to see , kuch ..."


"don't tell me. Yeh kaam word sunne ke baad mujhe uch aur
sunaayi nahin detha"


"sorry ab main jao?" "anhin" "
please rey, i really..." " tho go, main
call aise hi pakad ke baitne waala hoon"
" rey please please please..." "
okay okay...go.." she smiled," ..go"


"good night, sweet dreams" no reply -he cut the call. She looked
at the balnk mobile and smiled- he was missing her so much...she had to
complete her surprise for him soon


--------------


After almost a month
and a half- reys place


Kaka came in and gave rey a gift wrapped boxsaying," rey
baba yeh courier aaya tha aapkeliye"


Rey looking up from his coffee mug and laptop took it saying
thanks and mereliye parcel kaun bhejrahaan hain? and removed the wrapper .
there was a box which had an antique watch and a CD holder with a note-


To my dearest rey with all the love in the world- hoping ki waqt rukh
jaaye hamareliye ..mera first gift aapkeliye...aapki taani ki taraf se


PS- Waise mujhe thank
you kehne se pehle CD dekhlena


He was surprised, she hadn't given him a hint of anything! He
saw the watch and smiled broadly, took the CDs out and pulling out the one
numbered 1 began watching it. it had an old photo of his and hers ( like when
she first came in) and a voiceover of hers


Rey, aapko shayad yaad nahin hoga, aap mujhse
pehle ek jhoot ki wajah se impress hue the- meri ek false CD dance ka. Remember?
Hamare beech uske baad bohot kuch badal
gaya hain rey , maine uske baad hamesha correct kaam arne ki koshish ki hain ,
aapki wajah se. Par yeh jhoot ko sach mein badalne ka wish tha. this is real-jaisa bhi hain real
hain


and the music started- taani pretty much the way the original fake CD
showed- except that she had really danced in this. dressed in a really short
top and tights ( like crazy kiya rey) , she danced with grace to the relatively
soft music that was playing. Her movements were continuous, in sync with music,
her hands and feet swayed perfectly to the slow rhythm , her expressions
inviting. There was no nervousness or hesitation whatsoever

( i wanted a video here but im pretty bad at those stuff and so couldnt get it- please imagine it)


he watched feeling multiple things at once, the three
minutes transported him elsewhere"this was a completely unexpected surprise-
the dancer in him first nalysed the dance - it
wasn't bad/ it was good / it was more than good- she needed polish but she was
definitely on the rightest track to dance


the boyfriend in him however took over by then completely- she was brilliant, it had taken her che
mahine to get to this, 6 months of hard work with everything else she was
doing. Most importantly she had broken the ice with dance. he was so proud of
her . and he missed her more- he wished she was in front of him.


the mobile rang as if on cue- taani , he smiled and received
it-



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Posted: 11 years ago
update why are you taking so long...plz yaar .taary are nt there onscreen by your story i really felt they are together...as your story n serial both are fiction...plz update as soon as possible😭

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