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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: pt311288

hey dearu
nice update
shlok is reapy champu here 😆

plz giv him somE of ur nirma thought
loved it continue soon

and do write few more erotic stories on ashlok



yeah... nirma...last update... i'll def bleach it out...😆

shlok is champu for now...y??? ull find out lastly...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
awesome update
loved it
poor astha
but y is shlok behaving like that
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
poor astha
but y is shlok behaving like that
continue soon
thanks for the pm


niki dear... u comment differently...😳

thankyou... will update soon...😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Fabulous!!! Poor astha, her seduction attempt went down the drain 😭

Thks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Aman3010

Fabulous!!! Poor astha, her seduction attempt went down the drain 😭

Thks for pm



don worry...our heroine will ultimately succeed!!!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
hope they have enough strength left after d party.. very nice uodate.. milabn abhi aadha adhura hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Awesome update ...poor aastha ...idiotic suresh ...wts wrong with shlokie ...pls do update the next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
I feel so sorry for Astha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Hi Anusha!Just read da 3 parts,and m greedy now!!!😃Wn r u updating next?!😳Ok coming to da updates I love it..!Hmm Astha trying to seduce shlok!😆Ok da last update was hot!😳Nd i wonder watz wrong wid Shlok?Has he md a promise to his baba dt he wnt touch Astha or sth..?😡Or has he taken to priesthood?!
M sure u'll clear da clouds soon,but till dn stupid phone!I mean I hated dt calll ofcrs..!Ok I know m blabbering..Bt da thing is I loved ur story and I enjoyed ur writing.Sorry for da late comment!But I jst kip juggling between updates,so..😳
Thank u for da PM!Nd kip writing!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
hmmm...u r playing with them and with us 😛

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