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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anusha16


I asked you one question remember??? my OS stemmed out from it... what question I asked??? u nodify ur brain and find out...😆


As it is I have limited supply in the brains dept idhula nonda vera seiyanuma??? Grrr...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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writing darling... but first I need to catch up with today's epi... grr damn this rec work!!!
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Originally posted by: ipkkndfollower


As it is I have limited supply in the brains dept idhula nonda vera seiyanuma??? Grrr...


oh really??? seri seri... just two more part... ull know in the third part...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely story and nice way of new track with related show characters..
Loved it dear.
Awesome..
👏⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys... Sorry am late... Was busy with record work and stuff... but finally managed to write this update... will go for two more updates and will finish this OS... got a bit lengthier than I had planned...But still...wanted to write whatever I felt...

hope I did good on the hotness quotient...

to all my buddies...

my next part...😳


Part 2

It was late in the evening... astha had finished all her works and was getting ready to attend naren's wedding. Naren was a friend of shlok...and he had returned from UK with good news of getting married to his sweetheart maya.

And so they were going to their wedding. Astha still had not calmed on her anger...instead it just led to more inbuilt frustration...and she was more active than ever to get shlok into bed with her.

She was wracking her brains to get an idea... when the thought struck... she simply looked at her sari and smirked, full of mischief.

Mr.Shlok... you are not getting away from me...she grinned to herself and got up to get dress as it was time for shlok to return back to office... let's see how he escapes from this one...she thought and slowly started dressing up in her sari.

Shlok had came back from office in a hurry as it was getting late...Has astha gotten ready already?? Thank god I wore a suit in the office itself... else it would have gotten late... He fretted and went upstairs towards his room...

Astha had noticed shlok's footsteps and his voice and was ready to start acting her plan. Shlok opened the door to his room...and soon as he did...he froze on spot seeing the sight before him. Astha was busy trying to hook her blouse, but her hands were too short...and she was not able to. She had noticed that shlok had been staring at her as if he was in a stupor...Here goes nothing...Hope this plan works...astha...Don't lose confidence...She told to her inner heart trying to pacify herself.

Shlok??? She turned around to see him pretending she noticed him just now. But shlok was still in a state of trance...and didn't pay heed to her...Maybe its working??? She thought smugly...

"Shlok!!!!" she shouted...

"Yeah-yeah..." shlok stuttered gasping for breath from the sudden shock.

"Will you please close the door!!!? Someone may see me in this state. Anyways... come help me here to hook my blouse dear..." she said innocently...

"Humm...o-o-okay..." Shlok mumbled and came near her...his hands were kind of feeling shaky from all the tension.

Why is he shaking??? It should be me doing that...he is weird...!!! Astha thought to herself feeling confused about shlok's reactions and shook her head... when shlok noticed her.

"You said something??" shlok asked her seeing her action.

"No... just help me with my blouse..." astha mumbled and pretended to be helpless.

Shlok gulped in exasperation...but as much as he was shaking... that much he was also anticipating...astha could see it in his eyes...she smiled to herself inwardly...Maybe today finally??? She thought and grinned to her ears.

Shlok finally moved closer to her and bent down a little as she is a very petite woman to get hold of her blouse...he finally got hold of it and tried to hook, but he was new to this kind of stuff...And so didn't manage to do it in the first try... he bent down even more closer that his breath was just caressing astha's skin. She felt a kind of tingling sensation soar straight up to her brain, making her lose control...but she controlled her brain, because she wanted to win...no matter what.

She pulled shlok's hands with hers to try and teach him how to do the blouse, and he tried too... but this time, even more unsuccessful as he also managed to unhook the bra in the process...

Astha was bit startled to feel her bra get unhooked...she was feeling kind of embarrassed now...but managed to speak back.

"Shlok? What are you doing??" she asked with embarrassment.

"Well...I tried to help with the blouse...but the bra..." he stopped not completing the sentence feeling apparently embarrassed to do so.

"well... you got to help me with both now...my hands are really paining from stretching my hands backwards..." she sighed and shook her hands.

"Okay... I'll..." shlok mumbled and tried his mightiest to help with the bra and the blouse.

The minute he touched her skin while trying to do her bra...he felt warmth flow through his finger tips...he felt the skin to be so soft and smooth ...and he became greedy...he tried to feel her more...her skin more...he ran her his finger through her spinal ridge...to notice that astha became rigid and started breathing heavily...he felt her skin some more...surprisingly like a thirsty person...not scared or tensed...

Astha was becoming highly drugged by the sensation provided by shlok's finger tips...her whole body only sensed those fingertips and nothing else...as if both were in sync with each other...she felt a hot wave course through her body...so hot ...that she ended up moaning softly...and ever so sweetly.

"aaah..." astha moaned slightly trembling...her voice was so different, and so sensual...that it roused shlok. He completely forgot what he had tried to do...and he slowly circled his hand around her small waist completely surrounding like a snake does for the prey.

Astha started trembling even more so...the strength she had a moment before left her...and she started to drown in the feeling of shlok's caresses...while shlok slowly but firmly pressed his hand on astha's waist...as his fingers touched astha's belly button.

Astha couldn't control herself anymore and snapped out...she moaned again experiencing unspeakable explicit pleasure...and she felt extremely happy for this was what she had wanted...her man caressing her...spreading his touch and perverse throughout her body...

"Shlok..." she managed to mumble and pressed her hands over his...trying to feel the sensation of it all...when shlok bent over and breathed near her ears...and smelt her hair. Her hair was like an addiction, sweet and sensual...just like her.

"Hmm..." shlok whispered near her ears making astha quiver...

"Well..." astha mumbled unable to speak coherently.

"Astha..." he whispered in his baritone voice and pulled all her free hair to the other side...and slowly lowered down his head to kiss her in the shoulder...when a ring suddenly interrupted them.

"Wha..." shlok exclaimed, startled by the noise...when he realised what he had been doing...he glanced up on astha through the mirror who was showing the same expression as him. Both of them highly embarrassed now pulled away from each other...when shlok recognised what he had been about to do and felt shocked about it ...he realised the noise was the ringtone of his mobile phone...he immediately pulled out his mobile from his pocket and saw who was the caller.

Astha felt numb unable to say anything after the incident...she blankly stared at shlok who was concentrating on his mobile phone. The shocked expression he gave drained the colour out of her. She didn't move at all and stood still.

"Astha ...it's suresh...I need to take this call..." shlok mumbled and exited quickly as if escaping from a mistake...without even glancing at astha.

Astha was deeply hurt by all this...So Suresh is more important than me??? She thought angrily...she always liked Suresh but at this moment she felt ugly jealousy for him. She cursed herself for trying to seduce shlok and resumed to dress up.

Shlok came back to the room after attending the call noticed astha had already gotten dressed up. He felt nervous about talking to her, but nevertheless he must, so he started to speak.

"astha are you ready?? Shall we go??" Shlok asked politely.

"Yes..." astha muttered and exited the room without saying another word.

Shlok felt a terrible awkwardness between them... shaking his head...he closed the door to his room and went down the stairs...



Hope you guys like it... thanks for reading this update!!!😊


part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100231268



Edited by Anusha16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
hilarious update dear👏👏👏👏👏👏


damn that call spoilt her plan😡😡😡

waiting for next part...update soon
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Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Awesome update. Poor aastha.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: meerab...

res


will unres tomorrow


sure darling...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjipankaj

Awesome update. Poor aastha.

Thanks for pm.


hmm... thankyou😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Darlinggg ore the hot update...what's the matter dear 😆😆 and look who's calling whom wildcat 😉...as usual rocking and awesome...wish we get to know what's wrong with this Shlokie...does he need chittu kuruvi legyam?? 🤣

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