First time- an ashlok OS - introduction.

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hey guys... this is another fantasy that came out of my mind... so Im just giving an intro...

if you guys like it... I'll continue to write...


so please comment if you like it...

to all my friends...😳

All the calamities had come to end... And everything was just going fine... or was it??? Maybe not.

The storm was over in the agnihotri household...and the villain was banished. Life had returned to normal and the members were enjoying their happy time, and it was all thanks to astha. It was she who had discovered the true nature of her father -in - law and the abuse his wife suffered at his hands... not only that but also all the fake accounts and cheating he did to improve his business. She had managed to proof everything and with the help of her bhauji varad and her kaka vinayak she had been able to frame niranjan and send him to jail...thereby rising as the redeemed saviour.

Shlok was the one who had been most affected by it all... after all he was baba's bacha and he loved his baba very immensely. Discovering the truth had shaken him of his beliefs and his truth...and it took a long time for him to recover. Astha's love had nursed him back to sanity and he started opening his heart towards her... and astha felt happy seeing shlok in a different aspect, the real shlok.

Quickly they had become good friends and they also started feeling for each other. Shlok treasured astha gently...infact too gently that it had made her really frustrated...and she started having doubts. How she cleared her doubts and how her first time came to be ...is this story.

Guys I know the intro is quite ...formal... but I think my OS won't be that formal...considering the level my nirma brain is active right now...


anyways... If u like the intro ... and want me to continue the story... please comment...


thank you for the time!!!


part 1 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99830292

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg please continue I wish the actual show would fast forward to this track!
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CONTINUE PLZ... NICE START IM WAITING FOR MORE UPDATE
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agree do continue intro is great
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Nice intro please update soon
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lovely update
do continue
and mind it u are a vry good writer
i have read your lot many wrk
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anusha u r a fab writer.. just continue dear.. just continue... waiting desprately..
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Darling you can't start such an interesting plot and just leave it open asking whether or not you should write. Please continue and soon...no very soon 😊
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Interesting prolougue. Please continue soon and if possible update today
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The prologue is really interesting.

Please continue soon😊

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