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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#671

I could say so much and still, I don't know how to do that! I wish you could see me read then you would realise how much I enjoy reading your work. You are something else, you know!

This is one of the most intriguing stories I've read. Whenever, during the day, I allow my mind to wander, this is the story that I find myself thinking about. (Apart from Meeraji's EIT...and that means something even when somebody as unimportant as me says it :P )

What a twist of the original IPK...it's again Payal because of whom the events have been triggered mainly but the circumstances are totally different. Once again, I'm in awe of your work.

I really appreciate how Arnav decided to give Khushi all the respect she deserves, contrary to the show even though their's is a contract marriage.

I also LOVE Khushi's character. I think, you are shaping it up brilliantly! 😃

"Suave, assured...and handsome like no other."

I don't think any description has ever fit Arnav Singh Raizada like this one. Your statement is crisp, clean and confident very much like the man himself! ;)

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starsarun

@starsarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#672

Kitne words honge??
10,000 I guess..
I am stuck what to say now?
It was so big!
Started from Khushi's and Payal's argument then That proposal and contract and then thoer 1st official date..
And ends at bed!
I am amazed...
I liked it. Bas!

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bellacoolio

@bellacoolio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#673

Wow! Your stories are always one of a kind - a treat to read. I am loving the narration style. Beautiful!

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#674

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#675

awww awesome story line...loved it...it brought tears in my eyes when khushi asked him that after divorce she needs nothing from him...loved it...well its true that khushi cant be guilty as this marriage is giving benefits to both...not just one sided...loved it juhi too good...i loved ur long updates...it gives pleasure to read one whole scene in a continuity ...without breaks...:)

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riha5002

@riha5002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#676

Juhiji ...love love it...waiting to see how the flirty ASR and straight laced Khushi find their way together.

Aww california !! I wish they could come and visit me ! I would love to met Arnav and Khushi at least for a little while I could bask in their glow!!

Hayeee I can always dream...I guess Arnav and Khushi are few of the characters that I would like to meet...like ...Sherlock Holmes etc.

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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#677

That was a treat!!

I may sound strange but this Khushi is very much real and at times I could connect to her. What I really observed and appreciated is honesty on both of their parts. Like when she says she was envious of him. Who wouldn't be? I know the pains he has put behind it but still don't we all envy what meets the eyes first when it comes to millionaires?

I dislike Payal. Not that I have read much about her but somehow she lacks that gratitude and sense of responsibility.

Arnav is debonair. His sincerity and honesty aside, he really cannot get rid of being a player, a charmer, I think it is a part and parcel of his personality. Not all ideal but still very close to reality, I mean.. The whole his side of the story is so believable. The party Nani gave sounded like a fairy-tale ball where prince chooses his bride:) We had Swayamvars for the princesses though..

Like you said there are no mysteries yet I'm glued to the story so to me you have won the challenge, you are writing a stellar of a story sans mysteries and you didn't leave any cliffhanger here, though Red did make his appearance :)

PS: Chapters getting longer, a complaint, ha! I think you should forgive me for such a long comment.

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AR_EternalLove

@AR_EternalLove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#678

awesome update dear...👏

and welcome to India dear🤗

u made this soo beautiful portraying each characters perfectly and the first meet and the past of how this marriage happened in real...😊

arnav trapped khusi very well...he knew her weaknesses...😉

and khusi though wasnt interested in this kind of marriage had to do because of family...and her stubborn sister payal ..she has to do it for her family sake as arnav is doing the same😕

best thing was scene at cafe where khusi laid her own terms.👏.she doesnt need money for her in any way ..only she want payal to get married and rest she is capable herself...👏

well arnav hate adultery and that is why he hate marriage but still he is mocking this tradition..😕.great...atleast he is very real, outspoken, honest and opportunist too.😊..in reality u will hardly find honest man ..😕 and atleast he will keep relation respectful till this contract period.😊.thats best thing...😊 but will he be able to break this marriage later😉 he thinks khusi doesnt believe in marriage and feelings too.😕.yeah she is practical but i think she too somewhere thinks of perfect marriage thing and this was clear when she said what if she meet someone😉 ...and even in bathroom she too had image of man who hold her hand with love😳

i liked the bedroom talk..so arnav is asking khusi about her viginity...hehe well he is master in sex talks as he is been playboy image so he easily got his answer that she is virgin after all...😆 poor khusi was blushing soo hard and embarassed at his audacity..😳.well she has to handle him and thier sexual pull till one year😆

haha really a unique contract ..😆.atleast khusi will get something for her.😊..as arnav will be getting everything his way .😊..but yeah i agree with khusi that even at this day a divorcee female wont have chance easily...😕

let see how much arnav will be able to keep with his contract.😉..and how much khusi will able to accept all this😕...it will be best for her to join work soon...or else this famous playboy hubby will make her resolve break soon..haha😆i think arnav will fall for khusi and will change his soo called contract in to real marriage...waiting how will they fall in love😉

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