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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#651

This is a humdinger of a story. I have a feeling it's going to streak past my fav Arhi story of all time...Shattered! 😉

I love that Arnav sees Khushi as an equal who deserves respect. I love that Khushi is so grounded and equally has trust issues. I know the sexual tension is strong in this story...it always has been with these characters...and that adds a zing to it but what makes this story really sizzle is the conversations that they have. They are so frank and open ... So refreshingly mature!! Maturity and sexual tension make for combustible reading!! Absolutely loving this.

Edited by neverbefore - 11 years ago

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123vava

@123vava

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#652

😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛

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_Devaki_

@_Devaki_

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#653

The update described the past as well as present beautifully..

All the flashbacks from Khushi's POV..I really loved the style of writing you are trying..

The first meeting of ASR and KKG...

Then the contract marriage proposal in ASR's way..and KKG accepting it for her family...

Khushi is really unique!..I loved her very much(may be a bit more than Arnav😃)

And the sexual tension between them😳...

Oww Arnav leaving for the States...Him asking about boyfriend...Just made me blush like Khushi😆..

As usual,loved the update very very much..especially the last line😳...

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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#654

Both parts were fantastic Juhi!! Just wanna keep applauding on this terrific job 👏 👏 👏

And no update of yours will ever be too long!!! It appears to be such simple,credible story and still sooo spell-binding.

Looking forward...raat abhi baki hai !! 😉

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ambili123

@ambili123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#655

it is the best contract i have ever read i loved d way him being honest to her

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fortuna

@fortuna

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#656

You write the most amazing stories and I log into IF a million times just to check if you have updated... please don't ever stop writing...your stories captivate me and I can barely blink while reading!

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sher_lock

@sher_lock

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Posted: 11 years ago

#657

this is just brilliant. OMG..!!

now, after having read chapter 1,,,... how the hell do u expect us to wait till next Wednesday for 2nd chapter. its going to be tough. really..really tough.

The storyline, the pace, your style...its all out of the world experience.

girl u truly rock..!⭐️

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Angels11

@Angels11

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#658

Whoa!!! u r ACTUALLY wondering if the update is long. Oh u crazy crazy gal. make it longer, the longer the better. throw in 1 more chap as well. v ll love it 😃

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awroneema

@awroneema

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#659

forgot to say...

1.good dat shym is not a gold digger n has has self respect..

2. is anjali physically fit..or she limps

3.ermmm how does arnav know khushi's name 😕