An ArHi SS: Shaadi *Completed, Moved to Open blog*

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello!

Due to asli duniya commitments, I will be inactive on the forum from July 2014 onwards.

I have moved all my stories (including this one) to an open blog, where everyone including silent readers are welcome. Since IF rules forbid me from posting the blog link here, I am posting it on my profile page instead.

You can still reach me by PM/scrap for a few more weeks, or on twitter @patronus31.

Thank you so very much for staying with me on this journey, and I do hope to see you on the blog!

Much love and best wishes,

Juhi.

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello!

Due to asli duniya commitments, I will be inactive on the forum from July 2014 onward.

You can still reach me by PM/scrap for a few more weeks, or on twitter @patronus31.

Thank you so very much for staying with me on this journey, and I do hope to see you on the blog!

Much love and best wishes,

Juhi.

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 11 years ago

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

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Posted: 11 years ago

Shaadi Mubharak

You had me at "I wanna be inside you"😉😛😆

So whats the reason ...why would she willing sign up to enter the sexy devils lair...

btw have you finally changed courses with Shyam...broken your norm?

Edited by CravingKhana - 11 years ago

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

UNRES 10 Saal aur 1 lambe redemption track ke baad...

A NEW story (so soon!).

By SEXPEL.

With NO "mysterious past"

NO "earth shattering secrets"

NO CLIFFHANGERS!

Ummm...

And if not, DAN:

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Back after some much needed Thanda Pani and confirm-ation from some v. v. reliable sources, that this is no ramanchi wala challenge.

I AM SO EXCITED.

And its called Shaadi. The ma and baap of half-hidden meaningz this title. LOVE. IT. ALREADY.

Off to Leela for the Prologue. BRB.

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RED - check

Female lead wala first person - check

Not annoying female lead - double check

Cool as a cucumber yet nervous as a bride female lead - triple check

Beautiful clothes - check

Anjali Jha Raizada - check

Mysterious Shyam Jha who potentially wears glasses - Quadruple check

Already a "we" who have secrets from the rest of the world - check

Presidential suite - check

Legal wedding - check

NO pheras meaning no "I love you dammit" - check

Traditional wedding in the future - NIC

Massive BED - check

Potential birds and bees talk - check

VERY VERY RIDICULOUSLY ATTRACTIVE MAN/HUSBAND/ArnavSR - check a million times over

A smiling ASR - check

Expensive Cologne - check

Says how he feels (and I can only hope gets what he wants) - CHECK

EYE SAX - check

Barely know each other but still got married - check

ASR's version of appropriate night dress - CHECK

Nerdy, practical, level-headed may also have dreams of sapno ka rajkumar and weddings - check

Khushi WEDS Arnav - CONFIRM

Suhagraat - NIC??? Or rather TBC?

WHAT IS NOT TO LIKE.

OR rather how can i NOT love this?

This story sounds super duper fun.

And I want to read the rest RIGHT NOW.

Lucky for me chapter 1 awaits.

Thank you J, for yet again trying something different, just after reading the prologue I know this is going to be amazing even without all the mystery!

Strictly NO PMs.

TFS.

RES.

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Uff! You just spring one surprise after another and expect us all to keep up.

Pehle toh fifty gazillion sorry's for not unresing on Seduction yet, but we'll get there. In the meantime, here's to ek nayi shuruat.

Red. *giggle* How could red not appear? But I don't think you've ever used it to quite this effect before this. Red here isn't just a pretty colour for Khushi. It seems to be an entity. A continuous reminder of the marriage. I break out all the symballisms for you.

And we have Plain-Speaking Expelliarmus Style. How I love the way your characters don't prevaricate or go round the mulberry bush. Not without very good reason at least. They tell the truth. They lie. They hide things. Either way, they do it directly. No pointless flowery speeches, and I LOVE it.

It makes it not just fun, but also very 'adult' (not in a gutterish way-- or may be partially gutterish).

So we have two distinct, mature, strong-willed, and decisive individuals who know what they want and what they must do about it. They don't shirk difficult decisions. They also don't shy away from being brutally honest.

This may not be a marriage in the conventional sense of the word, but I already see a special relationship. Isn't a marriage about supporting one another and being each other's anchor against the rest of the world? Well, they're already doing that. No one else knows exactly why they're married, and it doesn't seem that the two want to change that. No matter what the reasons may be.

And they obviously trust each other somewhere to be able to enter this arrangement.

Love will follow.

Sneaky high five to your challenge-giving friend. Bring on Chapter One then.

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

To start with thanks a lot for starting another fantastic story...I know it is only the prologue but when it comes from one of my the most favourite writer I cant just stop my emotions from gushing out...

So Khushi Arnav Raizada has entered into a matrimonial agreement with Mr Raizada for some reason..Hubby darling has admitted his eagerness towards making this marriage real in ever sense of the world but Khushi darling is not ready to give in so quickly...well Khushi dear like you even I like the chase..so dont give in so soon...

This Arnav is defi very appealing with his straight forward approach to his desires...he is so wants to be inside her than just being beside..😳 but he is a gentleman who would never force his wife..good boy...you just need to walk around in your usual nightdress and then enjoy the ride..spark will fly and so will the passion

Loved the narrative and light hearted tone of the story...

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

R

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Firstly, sorry for taking so long.

Secondly, I have a quote or two for you...

"Every great love starts with a great story..." - Nicholas Sparks.

This is what the love you show between Arnav and Khushi in your stories reminds me of :)

"The purpose of a storyteller is not to tell you how to think, but to give you questions to think upon." - Brandon Sanderson.

And you definitely do this each time. Whether their simple questions about the story or more complex ones that branch into our real lives.

Thirdly, you've got me hook, line, and sinker for this story. The mystery, the humor, all of it! I'm so excited for the next chapter and all the ones after that! :)

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 11 years ago

A New SS! Well 'Shaadi' Mubarak to all of us then! ;)
Thank you juhi di for writing this story! :) and again.. 'S' aa hi gaya😆

"Contract Marriage" & "Sexual Attraction" so this *Shaadi* has our own IPK Masala,
#with Seduction, oh la la!! ;)

'Red' this one colour has so many meaning and shades to it! Most of the time symbolises a new beginning, following an end!
And is it that for Khushi?

A contract marriage with a Millionaire havin Greek god looks. He looked kinda nice and dare i say cute while having bread and jam.. But the next moment he was the devil incarnate himself, straight to the point! *Hey Devi Maiyya* he surely had me gaping at his balant talks of his want! ☺️

while our Khushi, a successful women, she says! Nice!
Anjali jha, phir wo hi dastaan, singing about her brother, comforting a highly amused Khushi. I LOL'ed when Khushi almost expected her to talk about 'Bees' :D.

All in all, it sounds exciting.. Not mysterious and yet kinda thrilling in a differnt sense! :)

with No band, no Baaja, No baraat.. Well Shaadi Mubarak!

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely prologue! ...
Umm Arnav & Khushi are married?!?
Darn its a CONTRACT MARRIAGE??
I'm eagerly waiting to know why they decided to get married in the first place!
And *Ahem* both are sexually attracted to each other :D
I wanna be inside you when I read this line my tummy did a somersault :P
Well did Arnav said he wears nothing while he sleeps?
My gutter mind is busy imaging that sexy sight *hides face* :P
Loved the prologue!
Waiting for the next part already :D

Edited by moumita03 - 11 years ago