An ArHi SS: Shaadi *Completed, Moved to Open blog*

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PrncssOfHeart

@PrncssOfHeart

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Posted: 11 years ago

#691

I admire your writing capability alot. You have a talent to keep your reader glued to the seat when he/she's reading your updates. Touch wood bt you are awesome. Its was just first chapter but I was having varied emotions like khushi had when arnav told her about the contract. Nd u must be kidding for long update. Atleast I want this long chapter evrytym u update. Nd last but not the least welcome to India. . .😊

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maina95131

@maina95131

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Posted: 11 years ago

#692

Love love love this story!!

Love both arnav and khushi

Ur updates are never too long...always leaving us hanging want more

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napk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#693

What!! Updates too long... no never

The excerpt go me hooked again to Shaadi... again haa haa

Man this Arnav knows what he wants and gets what he wants... he didn't do much of convincing also... he did his homework and used the right points... I was so sure Khushi will reject... I think she was so sure she would reject... but man the things he is offering her... I know nothing long term for herself... but the happiness her family gets is what khushi is interested... I felt bad when she thought she envied his forture... but very glad that she loves how she is settled right now after so much struggle...

I knew it... Khushi is never selfish... she doesn't want anything from him if there is a divorce... to think about what she wants from the deal is also reasonable... just the right amount for her sister's marriage and her PhD... I am also sure she will not want to live that luxurious lifestyle... she is very practical...

Now that the deal has been made... looking forward for their 12 month journey...

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Skiran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#694

Prologue is intriguing and I was anxious to know more about contract details.
Insipite of you telling beforehand that it is not a mystery, your writing makes it curious enough.

Liked the practical Khushi trying to explain things to Payal honestly but went in the drain due to selfishness of Payal. Arnav liked being called 'Arrogant womanizing jerk' by Khushi! Wow! He is not a ruthless ASR here.

Arnav holds Khushi's hand and promises her that she wouldn't regret getting married to himthis - loved this part 👏

Will wait to read more.

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janu

@Janu75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#695

Who complains about long updates😉

Well , I am in love with this Arnav

Have fun in india

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#696

I just love it whenever you start your new story because it amazes me more than the last one

I love stories where Arshi are going to be married or are married and in this case they're getting married

It's so amazing how Arnav chose her and why she's actually perfect for it...

LOL at how Arnav asks about her bf and whether she's had sex hahahah

at least he's going to be faithful :D

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anisa79

@anisa79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#697

Amazing!! Absolutely loved that chapter, cant wait for the next one

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Swati Singhal

@swatim318

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Posted: 11 years ago

#698

awesome update...

loved it..

thanks for pm...

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#699

its not that easy flowing words from you are new but this is seriously wow i wondered how this will turn out without your trademark cliffhangers but they are there just differently:)

no update from you is long have a nice trip and hope to read more soon!

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Akanksha-

@Akanksha-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#700

Finally read the first part
Interesting, intriguing, awesome update. All I felt is wow after reading the first update and wanted to read more. Did not feel the update is long at all and in fact wanted it to be more longer.There are no your trademark cliff hangers but still its very intriguingly written👏
Have a lovely trip and will wait for the next update