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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#441

Sorry for the double Res, I needed two consecutive posts!

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#442

yaaay, finally tomorrow is tuesday

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#443

Sorry for the double Res, I needed two consecutive posts!

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celinawalter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#444

res

will be back again when the update is up.

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#445

Hello!

Due to asli duniya commitments, I will be inactive on the forum from July 2014 onwards.

I have moved all my stories (including this one) to an open blog, where everyone including silent readers are welcome. Since IF rules forbid me from posting the blog link here, I am posting it on my profile page instead.

You can still reach me by PM/scrap for a few more weeks, or on twitter @patronus31.

Thank you so very much for staying with me on this journey, and I do hope to see you on the blog!

Much love and best wishes,

Juhi.

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 11 years ago

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#446

Hello!

Due to asli duniya commitments, I will be inactive on the forum from July 2014 onwards.

You can still reach me by PM/scrap for a few more weeks, or on twitter @patronus31.

Thank you so very much for staying with me on this journey, and I do hope to see you on the blog!

Much love and best wishes,

Juhi.

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 11 years ago

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CheshireBilli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#447

RES

Updates becoming too long? *giggle*

You have got to be kidding. STILL RES

Edited by Semanti - 11 years ago

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mem1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#448

OMG!!! the party was like a modern day swayamvar!!!! Loved the conversation between the two at the party!

And Payal , a brat. That is interesting. I am so happy Khushi is a strong character and accomplished too.

Now we come to the Contract marriage. I suppose she will marry him for Payal's sake and he will marry her for his grandmother's sake.

Eagerly waiting for Part 2. Part 1 was amazing.

Juhi , You may have intended for this storyto have no cliff hangers, but with a plot like this coupled with your captivating writing, every chapter is going to feel like a cliff hanger.

And of course, the update was too long. NOT!!!!!

I was so determined to cut down IF time and was actually succeeding until this story came along. Now i am sucked back into the addiction wih full force.

I cant stop thinking about all the possibilities. Of course we have Arnav and Khushi and chemistry. But this time we actually have them married, living together , alone in california and to top it all Arnav is openly acknowledging his attraction. And they dont have any nafrat, oooh. The possibilities are mind blowing.

I really like this Arnav. He is so shamelessly blunt !!! Cant wait for the next chapter. I love the pace of this story too!

Have fun in india!

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A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#449

res😊

Edited:
I was hooked on to this story from the prologue, and after reading the first chapter, I already know that I'm going to love this story A LOT!!

I think I have liked all the Arnav's in the previous stories I have read, but this one is definitely going to be more memorable based on just the prologue and first chapter alone! Arnav is straightforward, brutally honest, shamelessly suggestive, a Silicon Valley billionaire, definitely easy on a the eyes and so much more!!

I also like this independent Khushi, who is practical and reasonable. I am looking forward to seeing how her character shapes up more as the story progresses - there's still some kind of mystery around her. I think the fact that her father has left her mother has probably messed her up a little bit, but who knows...

You say there will be no cliffhangers, but the way you write makes me want to know so much more about what's going to happen! And you write such long chapters, but I always am left feeling with wanting to read more (maybe it's the magic of your words/stories).

Just a couple of questions, how did Arnav know she was Ms. Gupta on the terrace, and what's the point of the one year clause if they will reassess their situation after one year??

I'm glad Khushi is doing this for her own selfish reasons and not just for Payal's sake. This girl has shouldered the burden for too long, and it's about time that she is going to be able to achieve her dreams.

This part of Arnav and Khushi's conversation kind of stuck out to me. What is so obvious that Khushi doesn't thin it's fathomable for Arnav to choose her? Does she have some kind of a handicap that makes her self-conscious? I'm very curious to know if there's something to this part or if I'm reading into it a little too much.

"And you expect me to believe that you have chosen...me?"

"Why is that so hard for you to believe?"

I stand up now, and place the file back on the table as I walk away.

"Isn't it obvious?"

"Not to me, it isn't."

Looking forward to seeing how the story moves forward as the couple starts their new journey in the friendly confines of the Bay Area😊

P.S. Hope you have a great time in India!!!

Edited by A_BA - 11 years ago

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joviha

@Joarshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#450

supeb updte...
so this was their first meeting...its really nice...so they married a contract marriage...for the sake of their family...and khushi may be for her sister...but reason for arnav?????
in this ff khushi is so strong...
and arnav is also too bold...
waiting for the prt 2...

Hi juhi thks for the prt 2...its superb...
iam loving this khushi and arnav very much...khushi is very practical thats why she accepted his offer...she had already ready to give away her dream for her family but arnav's offer gives her all so she had signed it...and arnav he is tooo shamless...he is openly questioning her about everything one will feel embarrassed to discuss...and also declared that he is attracted to her...
usually we have to wait for their love and marriage but now they are already married and next attracted and think love will be on their way...
can't wait to read more...
and welcome to india...have fun...

Edited by Joarshi - 11 years ago