ABCD Challenge Drabble OS By -Khwahish-

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Words : Nectar ,Deep , Jeer


Autumns and Ashes



The door was open , it always was ...and he knew it always will be .He stepped inside as he was greeted by the photograph hung across the wall . The lifeless , inanimate photograph spoke volumes about the reality , the very reality which was of more significance than his entire existence .

Yes she was no longer his . The ethics , the virtues and the entire world before him claimed that but he chose to ignore as always . Ignorance ? He knew better .

He was here , again . And the mere realization of him being here made her entire form tremble miserably . She closed her eyes tight shut as she heard the bedroom door jerk open . He stealthily approached her with her back facing him.

His every calculative step towards her made her want to runaway to some secluded corner of this world where no one existed . Neither he , nor his presence and nor her guilt .

No she was not scared of the consequences that would prevail . The taunts and jeers of the lifeless souls around her didn't bother her anymore. The underlying truth was she still yearned for him , his touch , his presence even after all he had done and it made her die a little every moment .

How low could she stoop in her own eyes ? Did she possess no self-respect for herself ? Till how long will she let him guillotine the will power that still existed within her ?

His every tender touch evoked sinous desires in her . And when realization dawns upon her , she wishes to drown in the sea of regret forever .

But whatever may be the outcome , she won't let him witness the weak and inadequate side of hers . She will shield her scars till her last ounce of strength betrays her. She will never give into his pride , never in a lifetime .

"Kriaaa" , he mouthed huskily as his hypnotizing voice made her lose every trace of resistance she beheld . Her body surrendered to him as she felt his soothing touch on her cheeks and she willingly opened her eyes only to submerge in those deep trenches of his .

He amazed her how he made her give in so easily as every cell of her body responded against her will , like he had cast a spell on her , like he had all the control on her .

He grasped her waist possessively to diminish the agonizing distance between them . He crashed his lips with hers in one swift motion as his submerged emotions took over the command . His lips conveyed the untold stories of his that words couldn't. . He savoured the nectar hidden in those deep crevices and their tongues danced in harmony and they wished this moment would stand still .

One thing led to another and she succumbed with shallow breaths, head thrown back, eyes half closed, completely exposed in her trust of him, and it unravelled the last thread holding him together .

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A/N :
So I am done , phewww...
God I struggled a lot to fit this write-up in 500 words ... When I completed it for the first instant , it was of 374 words and when I tried of extend it , it ended up being in 674 words 😳...This one is of 481 words fortunately 😆
I hope it was good enough ...😳
Do review guys , we yearn for them 😃


Thanking You
Yours,
Mahi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reswa
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this was mindblowingg⭐️⭐️

ufff d way u portrayed d feelings wer amazinggg👏

and i loveed d way u used d words😳

fabulous write-up⭐️⭐️

lovedd itt very much❤️
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yay!!!! me first. See this is the reason i love you. Your works are vague and yet so clear. You paint the picture in vibrant detail and yet you let the readers use their imagination. When I was reading this i was imagining a back story of my own. I wont use any adjective to describe these for sometimes some works are so very beautiful that using words to describe them demean them . The only thing i would say is give me more pieces like this, Mahi. pleeaaseee!!!!!!!👏
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AH-MAZING...😳😳

it was unclear, yet so beautifully portrayed... it left soo many openings for the readers to imagine, and yet it was satisfying..😊 completely loved it...Another awesome creation..👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvarsha20

yay!!!! me first. See this is the reason i love you. Your works are vague and yet so clear. You paint the picture in vibrant detail and yet you let the readers use their imagination. When I was reading this i was imagining a back story of my own. I wont use any adjective to describe these for sometimes some works are so very beautiful that using words to describe them demean them . The only thing i would say is give me more pieces like this, Mahi. pleeaaseee!!!!!!!👏


Thank you Karry 🤗
Your appreciation brought a big smile on my face ..Glad my OS could reach you 😃
Definitely I will write more on such genres 😃
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that was a fabulous and awesome os... loved it
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awesome OS...
written beautifully...
it was perfect...
loved it...
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really mind-blowing os😛...loved ur portrayal of emotions😛
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This what makes u different from others nd u shine with ur own light...
This OS...it has nithing specifically..yet it had evrything...
The most complicated task is to write the emotions...bt u did it wid such an ease, that it came out in such a masterpeice form...u rock it evrytime mahi...love u tons 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu3003

Reswa

unres

this was mindblowingg⭐️⭐️

ufff d way u portrayed d feelings wer amazinggg👏

and i loveed d way u used d words😳

fabulous write-up⭐️⭐️

lovedd itt very much❤️



Thank u so much aishu 🤗
Glad u liked the portrayal of emotions.^__^

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