ABCD Challenge Drabble OS By -Khwahish-

VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

22

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

awesome os..

emotions were emoted beautifully n u penned everything brilliantly..

great work dear...

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

31

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

this is amazing!!! 😃

Hundreds of emotions in a small piece of writing... 😊

Seems like she got married or so... but he isn't ready to accept the truth... 😔

& she fails everytime to keep herself away from him... n give in to his touch... 😛

I understand... limiting story in a few words is such a hard task... 😳

Fantastically described... good work... 👏

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

36

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Every damn word had an impact on me..

Every word depicted so much yet beautified the entire plot..

Clear yet blur images formed..

Transitions like a movie scrolled in front of the eyes..

I love the way you play with words yet so aptly put up...

All I can say is.. It isn't good..

But it's outstanding..

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

26

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Awesome os loved it so much

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

31

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: vaishu88
awesome os..

emotions were emoted beautifully n u penned everything brilliantly..

great work dear...

Thank uuu Vaishnavi 🤗

Glad u liked my work ^_^

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

31

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

this is amazing!!! 😃

Hundreds of emotions in a small piece of writing... 😊

Seems like she got married or so... but he isn't ready to accept the truth... 😔

& she fails everytime to keep herself away from him... n give in to his touch... 😛

I understand... limiting story in a few words is such a hard task... 😳

Fantastically described... good work... 👏 [/QUOTE

I alwayss look forward to ur comments 😛

Thanks yaar Yogini 🤗

Yes thats was the idea behind it but I kept it a bit unclear ...a sort of open end😆

😃

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

31

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -shenz-
Every damn word had an impact on me..

Every word depicted so much yet beautified the entire plot..

Clear yet blur images formed..

Transitions like a movie scrolled in front of the eyes..

I love the way you play with words yet so aptly put up...

All I can say is.. It isn't good..

But it's outstanding..