ABCD Challenge Drabble OS By -Khwahish- - Page 3

Originally posted by: Couch_Potato

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Woman that was sooo very *HOT*. I love angst and guilt and pain. And this piece was drenched in it. Along with longing, yearning and lust. Overall such a brilliant piece of writing Mahi and all in 481 word? Wow. I felt like I was getting an hidden insight into an illicit affair between a married Kriya and ex-lover Rey. And yes, it was awesome.</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Thank you for writing this. Really. It was such a pleasure to read.😉</font>

Thank you CP jeee 🤗
Even I have a soft corner for angst *wink wink*
I am seriously glad ke it came out well...because it took meeons to fit his into 500 words lol
Yes yes you guessed it right ^_^
Wohi.hidden foundation tha story kaa ^_^

thiss was mindblowing

Originally posted by: -Vaish-

So I wouldn't get lazy at all pakke se...

Haaye!! Haaye!! Haaye!!

Mahi ...

kya likha hai... ^_^

It is the nice haye... not the ganda haye just saying... :P

So coming to the OS...

pata hai mari mahi...

i love the way how you put up things... You know devoid of past... lekin still giving the perfect sense and the perfect feeling...

I mean this is just so good... This particular thing is very difficult fo rme... I try... Lekin you put it up so effortlessly...

Abhi it was so beautiful... And the words gelled up so flawlessly... Not out of the place... Secong achievement... I mean you know trhis challenge is all about words nah.. and our focus is on over those... so i had this apprehension that what if words aren't placed rght and stands out khoob ganda... i had this apprehension when i was writing...

but u put it up so beautifully... It was such a seamless piece Mahi...

I really loved how you brought her resistance... and then washing away of it... and then how he read her..

It was so beautiful... ^_^

you make me feel liek ki what am i in writing... 😳

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awesome... Lubh you dher saara... ^_^

Haaye haye hayeee ...itna saaara pyaara :*
Waise bura waala haaye kaunsa hota h :P
I am super happy u liked that sort of compilation ^_^
I myself wasn'tsure ke accha lagega ke nai
Teri taarif sun.ke Iamon channe ka jhad ^_^
See Iwill be very frank
My words were relatively simple to assemble in the story...the can blend in the story maybe...u , snigs , maanett sabko kaafi tricky words mile the khe khe
Thankkuu babbyyy
I love you toosss :*

i was expecting ki tu return mein meri thodi tareef karegi... -_- ;)

Blueflames aka sabaaa *hugs* ...just saw ur like
Is it you ? OMG u watch D3 and follow KR ? :O

Vaishu - Mere drabble pe bhi teri taareef karu ab mein :P

haan nhi toh...

Baadmein fursat mein karungi teri tareef :P

kabhi nhi milegi tereko iske liye fursat... -_-