ABCD Challenge Drabble OS By -Khwahish-

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: anki_22
AH-MAZING...😳😳

it was unclear, yet so beautifully portrayed... it left soo many openings for the readers to imagine, and yet it was satisfying..😊 completely loved it...Another awesome creation..👏

Thank you so much anki 🤗
I am glad u liked the open end to it ^_^

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Akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

wow mahi..it was amazing... beautifully written...

evrything was described clearly...beautifully... lovedd it...

all d writers r indeed doing a fab job in this ABCD challenge 😃

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Kashish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Maaahi!

Woman that was sooo very *HOT*. I love angst and guilt and pain. And this piece was drenched in it. Along with longing, yearning and lust. Overall such a brilliant piece of writing Mahi and all in 481 word? Wow. I felt like I was getting an hidden insight into an illicit affair between a married Kriya and ex-lover Rey. And yes, it was awesome.

Thank you for writing this. Really. It was such a pleasure to read. 😉

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Kriapatel and Sweetieswagata - Thankuu guys ^___^

Glad u found it worth reading

@Anjali22 - Thanks 😊

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Unishaz - Thanku :)

@Sweetydiyafrien- Thankuu ^__^

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Princess_Devil
awesome OS...
written beautifully...
it was perfect...
loved it...

Shukriya Nikki 🤗

I am pleased to know you loved it ^__^

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: perfect_arsha
really mind-blowing os😛...loved ur portrayal of emotions😛

Thanks yaar 🤗

Glad u loved the portrayal :D

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
This what makes u different from others nd u shine with ur own light...
This OS...it has nithing specifically..yet it had evrything...
The most complicated task is to write the emotions...bt u did it wid such an ease, that it came out in such a masterpeice form...u rock it evrytime mahi...love u tons 🤗

Akanksha you never fail to bring that everlasting smile on my face 🤗

God that was a huge huge compliment ...I am super happy to know tereko accha laga :* :*

I always look forward to ur reviews :D

Love you too 🤗

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vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

So I wouldn't get lazy at all pakke se...

Haaye!! Haaye!! Haaye!!

Mahi ...

kya likha hai... ^_^

It is the nice haye... not the ganda haye just saying... :P

So coming to the OS...

pata hai mari mahi...

i love the way how you put up things... You know devoid of past... lekin still giving the perfect sense and the perfect feeling...

I mean this is just so good... This particular thing is very difficult fo rme... I try... Lekin you put it up so effortlessly...

Abhi it was so beautiful... And the words gelled up so flawlessly... Not out of the place... Secong achievement... I mean you know trhis challenge is all about words nah.. and our focus is on over those... so i had this apprehension that what if words aren't placed rght and stands out khoob ganda... i had this apprehension when i was writing...

but u put it up so beautifully... It was such a seamless piece Mahi...

I really loved how you brought her resistance... and then washing away of it... and then how he read her..

It was so beautiful... ^_^

you make me feel liek ki what am i in writing... 😳

:* :* :* :*

awesome... Lubh you dher saara... ^_^

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha
wow mahi..it was amazing... beautifully written...

evrything was described clearly...beautifully... lovedd it...

all d writers r indeed doing a fab job in this ABCD challenge 😃

Kitni saari akankshas hai yahaan 😆
You must be Akanksha Dhand from FB right ?
Thank you so much 🤗
Glad u loved the description ^__^
I know , from what I have read until now , all are amazing :D
Thanks to cp , anku and vaishu for the initiative ^_^

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