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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Taanysingh

Awesome Update
Hats Off to the WRITER👏
PLZ POST THE NEXT PART FAST...
I WANNA READ IT.. PLZ PLZ POST THE NEXT PART SOON😊


thank u so much for reading😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

TaaRey & Swaron: Make u feel tat u love me

Chapter 4

Recap:

Taani become as GS again

Sharon and kria friendship

Sharon: k k so 2day nite all gals in my home k gals?

Gals: ya k

Sharon: kria u r also cuming

Kria: ya sure

Here with boys they started 2 plan something and taani saw them and saw rey thinking deeply nd she found that they r upto something

Taani: guys I no that u r planning something. So hear this clearly again bhabhi said only gals boys r not allowed k (said with an attitude)

Rey was loving this taani so much

Rey: (to himself) be ready for tomorrow sweetheart (with his killer smile)

In shaani home

Every gals where present there and enjoying there

While with boys

Rey: guys I want 2 see taani give any idea 2 go there

Swayam: rey don't want yr

Bharat: arre chup

Vicky: swayam be silent yr how can gals alone enjoy without us ( here neha didn't leave so she is also there)

Nil: but how to get inside there

Boys somehow tried and got inside and hide inside a room to see what gals doing

With gals

Rinni: so Sharon truth or dare

Sharon: k this time I choose truth

Simmi: so Sharon if u want to say sorry 2 any1 to whom u wil say?

Sharon: hmmm k I want 2 say sorry 2 swayam bcoz I have hurt him many times I have always been rude 2 him it took time for me to realize his love I want him with always. only becoz of me we both r like this. And I m sorry kria I was not really friend with u first but now I think we vil b good friends.

Kria: no sorry Sharon

Simmi: so vil u say sorry 2 swayam

Sharon: no ways I m SHARON RAI PRAKASH vil never say sorry that much easily ( with her diva attitude)

Kria: wow the Sharon rai prakash the diva is back

Every1 laugh and continue their game and chat

With boys

All looked at swayam. And he was in deep thinking

Rey: swayam

Swayam: no response

Vicky: hey swayam

Swayam: still no respone thinking deeply about him and Sharon

Nil: swayam dude (shook him because of this sudden shook swayam was not able to balance his position and he fell down and while falling he held nil and rey because of this every1 fell down)

By the noise gals went to see from where the noise came and saw boys there

Sharon: what the hell

Taani: I know that these boys definitely will come here.so wht r u guys doing here?

Rey: wo..wo (looked at boys to help him to say anything)

Vicky:haa haa tell na rey y u came here

Nil: ya rey say that u came 2 see taani

Taani was not shocked r surprised because she know that rey loves her he vil come 2 see her. So she gave a "I know u vil cum" look to him

Sharon: so rey came 2 see taani. Then wht abt u guys?

Now rey smiled and gave a hi 5 to sharon

Rey: ya guys I came here to see my jaan then wht r u guys doing here?

Saying this rey came near taani and put his hands around taani's shoulder. Taani gave a kill u look so he took his hands from taani.

Nil: wo I came to see simmi

Every1 said their gals name and last left was swayam he looking at Sharon

Sharon: aur tum?

Swayam:mai

Both share a eye lock so every1 left from there leaving them alone and Sharon was expecting him that he would say that he came here 2 see her.

Swayam: mai (came 2 sense) I came here to see taani

Sharon: oh ( said in sad tone)

Swayam: (in mind) I no Sharon what answer you were expecting. We will get the right time to get together again I m waiting for that

Sharon: so come in

Swayam: ya

Swaron also joined the gang who were doing masti

Taani: guys did u had dinner? Bhai?

Boys (except rey): ya taani

Swayam: ya taani we had dinner outside

Taani: k bhai

Swayam looked at rey

Swayam: hmmm taani still rey didn't had his dinner

Taani: (in caring tone) What? Bhai its 10.30 now still didn't have dinner means its not good bhai

Rey was just enjoying his loves care for him

Swayam: taani y r saying me this I had my dinner only rey didn't had so say him this

Taani doesn't know how to ask rey to come and eat

Taani: (looking towards rey with attitude) cant u have ur dinner when every1 had dinner?

Rey: wo I don't feel hungry

Taani: so what? It doesn't mean that u shouldn't eat. So go and eat now

Rey: no ( with evil smirk on his face)

Taani: what the hell do u want any1 to invite u and make u to eat?

Rey: ya

Taani: what?

Swayam: rey

Rey: I mean no

Taani: k then come with me and eat

Rey: ok as u say

Taani went went into kitchen and rey followed her like a love sick puppy

In dinning area

Taani served food for rey.

Taani: hmmm now eat

Rey: no I wouldn't

Taani:rey don't behave like a child now eat. Y cant u eat?

Rey showed his right hand to taani which had a bandage in his finger. On seeing that she took his hands

Taani: hey Krishna ji how did happen? Rey u k na? its not paining no?shall I apply medicine for that?

Taani kept on asking rey and she was continuously speaking. She cant see a single small wound on rey . she cant control herself and she doesn't know what she is doing her love and care for him is filled around them.

And rey he was just loving taani more on looking at her love and care for him.he understood one thing that whatever happens between them their love and care for each other will never fade .

Rey: taani taani calm down (made her sit near him) see its just a small cut in a finger its not much big so relax. Its not paining and I m k now.

Taani now calmed down and realized what she is doing

Taani: (in mind) hey Krishna ji wht I m doing I cant control my emotions towards rey

Taani somehow managed and she ia back to the new attitude taani

Taani: oh so because of this only u haven't ate?

Rey just nodded his head in yes. Taani looked at him and feed him the food with her hands. Rey was adoring her very lovingly.

Taani: so finished over now

Taani turned and was about to leave

Rey: taani (called her lovingly taani stood there without turning to him)

Taani: hmmm

Rey: today is the best dinner I have ever had in my life thank you

Taani didn't say anything just left from there and joined every1. As it became late after doing so much masti boys also stayed in sharon's home.

Almost every1 slept in sharon's room taani,Sharon and kriya were talking some usual things.

Kria: taani shall I ask u something?

Taani: ya sure

Kria: taani u r loving and caring for rey so much right?

Taani: what?

Kria: then why r u not with him?

Taani: no ways I don't love him any more

Sharon: taani

Taani: yes I love him so much wait but how kria no that

Kria looked at Sharon to answer taani

Sharon: actually taani we all saw the scene in dinning area

Taani: what?

Sharon: sorry taani we thought it will fun that u wil show attitude to rey but there we only saw ur love

Taani: yes bhabhi I love him more

Kria: then y don't u say him that and be together with him

Taani: no kria I cant say to him. After break up I was really broken I cant take the fact easily only to meet rey I came here and after coming here my life has changed a lot even I say upside down and after lots of mu and fights we became one that was the time my life was heaven.and whenever rey was busy and we had no time for us I understood his situation and even if we spent 5 mins its enough for me.but later everything changed he broke my heart my trust into pieces and later he tried to bring me back into his life but its late atleast he should have told me once before break up. Then I made myself strong. And even at the time of engagement I thought anyhow rey will make me 2 understand him and will stop the engagement and take me with him but he took my hands and gave it to vishesh it completely broke me. even now also I love and trust him more than myself but its just that I have a fear of losing him again if we r together so i need time to take any decision in my life

Taani said this all with a teary eyes. Sharon and kria also had tears. Sharon looked at the door and signaled kria to see and also saw there and found emotionally swayam on seeing his sister like this and rey with tears and pain in him standing there

Precap:

Reyam reaction after hearing this.

What rey will plan to spend time with taani?

if it was boring just adjust

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PM plz
Luvly yaar luv tht rey wanted
To see taani aww n thn luv Sharon 😊
Prt n lol all came out n rey smartly
Save himself 😉 rey put his hand on
Taani shoulder wow 😊 luv tht taani care
For rey 😊 n make him eat dinner 😊 n
Feed him 😊 scold him whn she got to know
Abt it luvly n last shaniya (Sharon,taani,kriya)
Emotional tha n reyam hear everything wow 😊
Let see now how rey manofy taani n woo her back
Thanks for PM swty 😊 update soon plz yaar 😊
Edited by raddhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...

boys sneaking in girls party...purani aadat...lol...

loved taani's concern for rey...awww she feed him...that scene was lovely...

taani's explanation why she cant trust rey again.was really sad...and reyam heard that...rey ka kya reaction hoga...and swayam ka?? hope sab jaldi thik ho jaye...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! Boys sneaking in girls' party. Old habit! Kabhi nahi jaayegi yeh toh!! Hehe!
And caring side of Taani, it was awesome! I love the way Taani scold Rey for every thing and then Rey's reaction on that! Pura Love Sick Puppy!! It was so cute yaar!
And eager to read how Rey will manage to spend time with Taani!
Loved whole update!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome update
rey tells that he came to meet T jaan lovely
taani care for R is nice
she feeds him cute
T emotional talk is nice
what will be rey's reaction now
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update

swaron scene was really cute

luv taani concern for rey

n gang were listening them hiding behind kitchen really funny

finally taani pour her heart out

want to know now what will rey do now to win her trust back

update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg!!!! u updated it also, m happy , update is fantastic , loved ki u gav taarey...lalaala,,,,,,,,, happy , yeh boys kabhi bhi girls ki party mein sneakpeak kiya bina nahi rah sakte kya , wow taani feeded rey she loves him too much pr she is so sad , now when rey knows about it toh vo kta karega to manaofy taani want to kno plzplz plz update soon n happy chocolate day , I kno ki m little late may be1 n half hour
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update😃 dining scene was superb. i hope rey ko taani jaldi hi mil jaaye
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...
boys ki toh purani aadat hai sneaking in gals party...
love taarey n swaron scene...
update nxt part soon... :-)

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