ABCD Drabble OS By -Vaish-

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

its really very much sweet..

loved the way u have described the whole thing...

thnks for the pm

with lots of love

moumita

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k.sweet

@k.sweet

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

awesome n beautifully written

thanks for the pm

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ash

@CrazyGirl.21

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Aahh Vaish! 🤣 I thought you gonna say Resers who dont plan to UNRES dont comment. But your instruction was so hilarious.. 🤣 🤣

Stay away from the first Page.. 😛 tu pagal hi rahegi. :P

Anyways, itna chota! Cant blame you though. 😆 Anyways, concept acha tha! Likha bhi acha. So Yeah acha tha overall. Imaginations was awesome. Pened down beautifully. Isse zada nhi keh sakti. Chota OS chota comment. 😆 Though itna bhi chota nahi hai. 😛

Love,

Einstein. 😆

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

that was awesome and beautiful os... loved it

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Kashish

@Couch_Potato

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

This piece transported me to a beautiful beautiful place. When it started I heard dramatic music in the background, forbearing and then I get to the next bit and I imagine all these Disney movies going through my head and then the last part. *sigh*

I really wanted to visit this place. Like I could feel it. It was soo gorgeous and I love the deep affection and trust that they share. Something that is clearly taken a long time to built and yet is right at the edge of morphing into so much more.

I loved the sensitivity and innocence in this piece and of course the writing. The vivid, detailed, descriptive writing.

Thank you for this snippet Vaish. It was a pleasure to read. And I am surprised it was all that in just 500 words.

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

hayee vaishu.. di... its bful...

haye... 500 words main uh decribed it so amzingly...

<3 <3 <3 BINDAAS... <3

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Ufff... Again yeh 500 words ka OS ;(
humpe itha bada zulam ;( ;(
but ekdum mast os tha di..
Like it was sweet n simple.. Realy liked it a lot..

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Such a sweet, simple,cute and lovely OS
kriya-d princess; and
rey- the saviour
i would really like to read more of it if u write...
The scenes were described very beautifully.