ABCD Drabble OS By -Vaish-

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Himani

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Vaishu you know I love this work of yous ...

Its was so serence and soothing ..and yet you didn't miss to add the regal touch in it ... Its seriously difficult to compile these lot emotions in 500 words but you did it all the more beautifully 🤗

I loved the untagged relation they share ...It gives the reader an ecstatic feeling ..

Continue this naa... I am sure you would build a rock strong story on it :* :*

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akanksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Res unres... It was serene nd a peaceful for me... U used the words beautifully..their relation was appealing to me... The way u described the nature over there, was commendable...the concept was simple nd sweet, but u hv dat power in u to turn them megical...more than the OS, i loved ur way of description...hats off

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kriapatel

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nice os simple yet sweet beautifully written

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Its good..

And better when I get to comment on the first page itself 😛

I like the way you link the story..

Its good.. And the end was lovely..

I could visualize ek mast se movie ka scene ^_^

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Ramya sree

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ahhh It was a Bliss to read ...

Vaish from where u get these ideas Man ..

Hats off..

-Angel(Angel56)😃

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akanksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: ramya.reddy
Ahhh It was a Bliss to read ...

Vaish from where u get these ideas Man ..

Hats off..

-Angel(Angel56)😃

not man, its woman..gender prblm tera hai..vaish ka nai
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Ramya sree

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

not man, its woman..gender prblm tera hai..vaish ka nai
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ja bay galat jagah gaaliyaan khaye g 😈

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Akanksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Vaish it was such a beautiful piece of workk... haayyyeee... [8->

Kriya a princess and Reyaansh as her protector...

I loved how u used that nature thing...giving it even more magical effect...

it was really veryyy beautifulll...

m in love with this one.. Beatifulll... 🤗

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

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Posted: 12 years ago

vaish awesome os..

kria d princess n rey her protector..

d os was so serene n awesome.. simple yet amazing..

it s really really beautiful n awesome..

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