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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

I am bawling my eyes out right now. Are you crazy to think that you don't do justice to the characters?


Pagal hai kyaa Sarah!

Yahaan everything is going dhundhaa in front of my eyes!

See, people like you are the reason I still stay on this forum!

Once in a while, you make me realize what potential KriYaansh have. And what potential of creativity their fans have as well.

You want my honest opinion? I couldn't have written sadness better than this.

Every italic dialogue broke my heart yaar.. I am crying like a fool reading it.

Kyun likha tune yeh? This wasn't a pleasure to read in any sense! This was pure hellish torture...!

Kyun likha!!! Just when I read about Vicky I was instantly sad... But as it progressed, mereko aisa laga as if I am drowning in a black hole of sorrow...


Uggh.. Write more stuff goddammit! U do full justice to all characters!


I dint expect that at all. You're comment just made me ridiculously happy. I guess I AM a sadist!

Though you're probably a little biased. Haina? And no way in hell do I write sadness better than you. Phir bhi I'm thrilled that you think I can write at all. :)

P.S. kyun likha sacchi bataaun? Monthly depression time chalra tha isliye. I was thinking about how I'd be incapable of functioning if something happened to my family.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: -Vaish-

Ant-depressants... 😆

You can try that...

But I am swooning over the way you wrote it... ^_^

No matter how much you made the characters cry or anything...

But with the beauty you wrote it that i was having a smile... ^_^ ^_^


😆😆 KriYaansh are my anti-depressants! (And chocolates work quite well too)

Thank you sooo much for all your wonderful comments! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
am crying still n sniffing ...

such a superb os..

more than d characters n story ur italics broke me more..

explained every emotions brilliantly..

aww just want 2 give u a big hug for this writing..

i hate such stories but urs s 1 among d sad stories i ve read in IF till date that i ve loved loved loved loved loved like hell..

do write more stories.. ur express every character brilliantly..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: vaishu88

am crying still n sniffing ...


such a superb os..

more than d characters n story ur italics broke me more..

explained every emotions brilliantly..

aww just want 2 give u a big hug for this writing..

i hate such stories but urs s 1 among d sad stories i ve read in IF till date that i ve loved loved loved loved loved like hell..

do write more stories.. ur express every character brilliantly..


Awww this is soo sweet. 🤗Thank you so very much! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
This plainly left me crying till God knows how long...
Infact... Am still sobbing...

Hillarious !
Stupendous !
Completely Out Of This World !

Don't know how to describe what impact did it have on me...
I could literally imagine myself in place of Vicky... In place of Sharon... N even Kria... Such was ur impactful way of writing !!
Am completely into a trance...!!!

For sure I want to reward u with whatever I can afford... For writing something so damn soul piercing...

HEAVENLY...!! AWESOME...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

This OS made me an emotional freak..

Can't believe I am still crying reading dis..

Speechless n Numb.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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a really really really fabulous work
it was very emotional
the concept and the storyline was very unique
the way you changed the povs was fab
great work
well written
and well expressed
u r a fab writer
cant say loved it because i cant even imagine what will happen if rey died...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i tried my best
but coudnt stop those tears ..

it was way beyond beautiful .. nd m truly out of words...

loved it to d core :'(





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Posted: 11 years ago
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amaaazinnggg!!!! Loved it,...
I m still in a shock... Wat evr I read has shocked me...
all those things happening...
I could Imagine and feel it...
very nicely written!!!!
all those POV of evryone nice!!!
and before changing the scene the last two lines...,,
loved reading it... The mind and heart statements... (I guess it is...)
and den kria uski halat...feel scared imagining her lyk DAT...
I too sum wer wished ab rey aayega...ab aayega...,.but no...
and the last punch line...loved it!!!
"" dying and not living are different""
""death doesn't hurts""
loved it!!! And now rey and kria are together...
marke hi sahi kriyaansh...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am crying right now I mean literally
This was so amazing I don't know but I think these tears are gonna last for a long time 😭
I am very much in love with this one shot
Keep writing... 😊

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