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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing Amazing Amazing...!
Really beautifully written...you described everybody's feelings so perfectly...just loved it to the core. Sad but so fascinating... 👍🏼 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohhh... u made me cry yaar 😭

that was so emotional... so touchy... 😊

these health issues gets so serious sometimes... 😳

they lost it... rey n then kriya...

her condition was a destruction itself.. poor gal... she lost her soulmate... 😔

perfectly written 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was really emotional.. <3
Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Do u even knw how much i cried while reading dis!!!
Actually i m crying even while writing dis to b frank!!!
I dnt understand...how u make me cry n still make me praise ur abilities!!!
Bt dis 1 is amazing!!! Astonishing!!! N...n...its different!!!
Rey's sudden death for d ppl!!!! Followed by kriya's slow death!!!
Bt well its for d ppl only!!!
Cz medical reports say dat he was dying slow death!!!
N kriya!!! Well she died d same moment she came to knw bout dis!!!
All thot dat she doesnt knw n dey haeve to tell her!!!
Bt she was just running away!!!!!
Which resulted in dis!!!
N its lyk its no1's fault!!! N every1's fault!!!
U cnt blame ny1...u cnt give d clean chit to ny1!!!!
Its astonishing shocking bt still amazing piece of work!!!
Grt job!!! 👏 👏 👏
Bt dat doesnt mean dat u'll kill both of dem in ur further works!! 😉 😆
Chalo write another work soon!!!
N plz do pm me!!! I wanna read more of ur works dats y!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reserving it here s its gets added onto my post...Will read it out soonish :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kishi forced me to read it now and I'm speechless..
Sarah girl how could you portray the depression emotion so easily ..
This is one amazing work..
Gsh taks tissue and wipes tears...
And Sarah hats off for writing it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Superrr Emotional
Sad sad
But Awesomeee
Beautifully portrayed

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