Oblivion- a KriYaansh OS

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

This is the best piece of work i have ever read !!!

so damn good !

you definitely made me cry :'(

Amazing one !!

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Sarah

@HPmaniac

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: luv_arsha
God u made me cry...it was soo ... I cant describe how I felt but It was very painful, u have written it so well that I can feel every emotion of the story...u r superb writer
loved the OS

Thank you so much!😃 I'm so glad that the story managed to touch your heart!

Originally posted by: zina.92
Amazing
Very well written

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: --RAINA--
amazing os
jst 2 gud
emotinal...

Thank you!😊

Originally posted by: k.sweet
this was amazing
awesome
n emotional one
loved it

Thank you😃

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Sarah

@HPmaniac

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ramya.sri
that was amazing
loved it
bohut emotional tha update
well written

Thanks a lot!😃

Originally posted by: unishaz
brilliant..

Thank you😊

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
it was fabulous and amazing but the over all pov written were brilliant... loved it

Thank you so much!😊

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha
amazing!!!!

Thank you! 😊

Originally posted by: daisydee425
Amazing

Thank you!😊

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Karishma

@Mystique.Kishi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

I was always aware you are one hell of a writer. Sarah, right??? Now coming to the one-shot, lump in my throat, Something that does not happen often. The last time it happened was when I was reading deathly hallows and Fred died (the ghost of his last joke still on his face). Yeah, so if that's what you were seeking to accomplish, then congrats on a job well done. My reaction during the end was odd. I was sad yet happy (I am not making sense, am I?). Anyways, i won't comment on your writing style and flow and all that cuz I am not that accomplished a writer (also not worthy enough). But, it was quite a read and I would love to read more from you.👏

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

awesomeee onee⭐️

brilliant write-up👍🏼

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Mruganka and Anushka

@Arshalicious

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

W-O-W I have no words to tell u how amazing this is!!
Loved the way u have described every single person's point of view so beautifully

Kria's emptiness and feelings about Rey are portrayed in such an amazing way
Loved this os to the core

Plzzz pm me the next time u write something so beautiful

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Soha

@-Soha-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

You made me cry...On this so happy on-going track of KriYaansh, after so many days I actually cried.

I really got lost in the OS. I don't have words to describe...I will only say it was lovely to read it, Surely well written!!

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

this is truly fabulous..

I loved the way you showed those contradicting thoughts..

and those thought processes.. they had the flow poetry does...

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Omg...tat ws so sad nd emotional...
bt u ve expressed the emotions so beautifully...
bt dint mention wich surgeory rey underwent nd 4m wichcomplication did he die?