*Completed* Th# 1 ArHi SS: Revenge - Page 82

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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm late! So horribly late! But my AD has been so unbelievably busy!
So let's get to the update. Arnav did come back to Khushi which is a good thing, right? I don't know :/

I really want to know why Khushi is hell bent on getting revenge. She seems to clearly epitomize the saying "revenge is a dish best served cold."

And how could Garima treat her own daughter like that?

Every time i read an update I end up with more questions! Not that I am complaining! It makes me eager to read the next one!

:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
well written update..interesting..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
please update soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesoem parts read al 3 parts together
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg ... read 1st chap. Its amazing.m loving this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such an intense update in the first chapter itself? And so many curtain raisers i mean clues? You have definitely changed ur writing style.
She doesn't want to bear his child. She has been hurt physically too by someone as thats what i come to get of the line- ' But all the marks were not given by him alone'...Skeptic.

* Chapter 1.

Edited by ...Iyla... - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Oh wow, what a fabulous concept...

Sry dear, i cnt share my email id so i m buddying u...i wnt pms, though i wil b in active bt i wil reply...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry wrong post 😛
Edited by lazyleaves - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hellooo... Remember me? I know I am super late and here after what seems like ages to me.. But better late than never na? ☺️ Hehe after reading 1st chapter I was totally in a world of questions. And even though I was not reading any upates I kept on thinking abt this story and how u might hv progressed it.. and here I am finally..

Chapter 2:

So arshi had a starting in a classic arnav khushi way.. Arnav Muing khushi.. and hurting her.. Tht's ASR for us.. 😃

To be honest even though you used the ipk teez scene yet it didn't make me grin like usual.. I am yet to wrap my head around this new khushi who can manipulate anyone..

But even between all these I blushed and hayeed at it Nobody loves me!" he pouted ☺️

Arnav is sooo much in love.. just the perfect hubby anyone could ever have.. if only khushi was the perfect wife for him and tht's what brings me to one of the many questions going in my mind : Is arnav really ignorant? Doesn't he hv the ASR side of him at all or is it blind in love effect?

2nd question khushi has a partner it seems? Who is it for whom khushi typed the msg yes?

This khushi is very very intriguing.. She is clearly in love with arnav even if she herself is not ready to accept it.. and she is rather taking tests of arnav. I wonder what khushi thinks arnav had done to deserve this wht she is planning. yeah I hv my mind set on the fact that khushi is MUing arnav. Arnav haven't done anything tht could justify wht khushi is planning to do.. Call me crazy or anything but till u write arnav is to be blamed also (which I'm sure u won't,) I am not gonna think Arnav has done anything. At the same time I do believe khushi does have a reason for behaving how she is..

Wonderfully written update.. Breathless one if I might add.. 👍🏼

Chapter 3:

And here enters anji, shyam and others.. I knw in ur scrap u told me I'll get my too good anji and I am eagerly waiting to see how her character shapes up.. 😃 Already I loved the chotasa but cutesa interaction between anji and khushi..

Shyam seems fab, akash too but I loved Aman here..This man need importance in the story Zee..plz plz?
now coming to arnav khushi.

Buhaha khushi bitia..here she is planning for His doom and at the same tym not actually deep down but her love surfacing regularly .be it keeping fast or thinking along this line? If no, where was he? Is he fine? Did he take his medicine? Did he have lunch? Yeah I can very well see how khushi's plan is going to succeed..😉

Arnav did came for His khushi.. and thn the kiss.. ☺️. His protecting side for khushi is another adorable side.. 👍🏼

What's wrong with garima? Why is khushi finding love in her step father but not in her mother gareema? Why woulkd gareema abuse her own daughter? Did she play a role in khushi's current MU abt arnav?? And ye guruji kaun hai nandkishore?

I knw my comment for chap 3 is all jumbled and tht's wht I am feeling. Hehe me totally in a pool of questions and at the same tym I am loving the way story is progressing.. with each update new sides are revealing making me more hooked to the story..

Moving to the next thread..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 2:
The start was just so cute. The part were Arnav remembers his past.
So she can't speak. Hmm. And she lost her father. Her mom?
Whether she accepts or not Arnav is more to her than she actually thinks. Its just really hard to imagine Khushi like this. She and planning? Faking her love?
A fire in AR? I don't think khushi has done it. I am sure someone must have been helping her. Does she have a secret brother?
I know he will choose khushi.


Is this revenge of hers something related to her father's death?
Most ironic phrase of this chapter,
"If only he knew the complete truth".
Yeah right.

|| Can't wait to read the next chapter. ||



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