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Posted: 11 years ago

All she wants is to see him broken




And all he sees is her love unspoken





Will this tale of love and hate leave trails of broken heart?

Will she ever know, from him she cant be apart?
(Reproducing Aashi's lines without her permission 😉, beautiful Aashi 👏)
Will this drive for vengeance take its course?
Or Love would become the driving force?



Edited by Viji79 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar



Badle ka din aur KC ki raath !


This is even more dramatic!

Badle ka din, KC ki raath.
Honge ye door, ya hamesha ke liye saath?
Haathon mein Khoon or Haathon mein haath! ;P
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Viji79

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<p align="center"><font color="#cc0000" size="4">And all he sees is her love unspoken</font></p>










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<div align="center">Will she ever know, from himshe cant be apart?

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will this drive for vegenance take its course?
Or Love would become the driving force?


P.S : Uthra di, brilliant poem!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updates...
love this part..
perfect hubby Arnav.. Always love him
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Posted: 11 years ago
luved the update

i felt proud of arnav when he chose AR .which is his baby...😃

don't know why khushi is doing this but she has feelings for arnav for sure...

arnav loves khushi a lot ...what will he go through when she will destroy him

revenge (badle ki bhavna) is very dangerous...it destroys everything n everyone no one is spared from this destruction...what i wanna convey is - although khushi is all set to burn n destroy arnav's life but she won't remain unaffected from the flames...

waiting for more
wanna see till what extent khushi can go
Edited by mwep - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Someone told me it's thursday today..
*Hint Hint* 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Finally! Finally I read 2nd and 3rd chapters. And I'm in complete awe...the fact that your writing is more than brilliant, beautiful. You've created a combined aura of immense love, secrets, hatred, passion, mysteries, and much more. I don't think I would be able to do complete justice to my feelings by penning it down right after reading the two updates, but I'll try.

Khushi has done a brilliant job in maintaining image of an innocent, nave girl. The character sketch being first I'm reading. She has cunningly binded Arnav in the thread of love, her sources being precise and perfect in giving her information as how the Raizada will be trapped. She is very very well planned, take it her arrival, her tricks to make him fall in love, her fake fainting. I doubt if she even for a mere second felt a bit guilty for doing such things to a person who considers her his life, his breath. But as you mentioned earlier, he had once taken all she cherished. Wonder what that could be, that has led her to destroy him so, so badly. Still, she is sometimes pondering over her own actions..well, how much ever you try, heart goes its ownway...

But alas, A Women's desire for Revenge outlasts all her other emotions...

Love the way you've interwoven past with present. His struggling days, the hardwork he put up, and now he had to choose between two very important things in his life. But he took decision..Khushi would understand.

And Shyam..a good guy..? Its great then! And Aman and Aaakash- the good guys, always with Arnav.

Anjali and Khushi share quite a good bond, communicating effortlessly.

And then, finally he comes..to break her fast...probably the last one. It pains to read that line, really. I mean..so eager for revenge?

And Khushi's family, its so very...suspicious!?! Garima being her real mother, had given her those brutal marks..though I thought it some other way earlier. Was it true? Or was even she involved? Or did she know something that Khushi didn't want Arnav to know and hence took this trick to make him absolutely loathe her mother? Well, too many questions...the time will answer!

Payal..what is she? Involved or just being dumb! And we even have paralyzed[really?] Shashi, and Buaji. This makes a not-so-happy family.

Who is her guru? The master mind...someone known, maybe? ;)

And in all this planning, she really fasted for her husband, knowing herself that it will be her last? And the last family function...sigh...

Also, extremely sorry for irregular and late comments...boards are nearing, so thoda study toh banta hai!;)

*scratches her head* I didn't miss anything, right? ;)

PS: Though I completely believe that Arnav is head-over-heels in love with Khushi, just, just for a fraction of sec, I believed that he too has something in his mind...a revenge, maybe? Yeah...I know I'm wrong..it just crossed my mind!;)

Edited by luv.u.rubletin - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aaj 23rd hi hai na? My calender says so.. Isliye just confirming! ;-D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haila!!!!!!!!!
Update day 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AALUSLOLWA

lavanya is guru ..han pakka .. i guess she is her friend .. khushi ki dost hai ..khushi is good ... and lavanya is her guru telling her k how to ehm arnav😉😆


Pehle Shyam boli ab La.. La is final, lock karde 😉

Waiting for the story to unfold

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