SwaRon SS-Dancing to the beat of heart

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Swayam belongs to a poor family
I think varun and Sophia are cheating on Sharon
Hope Sharon comes to know about his real face
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter
Please update next chapter soon
Thanks for the pm

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

amazinggly penned

luved how you gave a background story for swayam

he is hardworking n mature for his age

the worst part was the description about his father

n sharon was thinking about swayam the whole day

tat came as a surprise to me

she also saw him dancing n was completely mesmerised by him

both have stepped into tat attraction phrase

which was a delight to read

all in all a very well formed update

do update soon

looking forward to ur update 😊

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Amazing update..👏

i just loved swayam in this story..😊

pls update soon..waiting eagerly for the next chapter

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

I love the friendship between Sharon and Simmi. The way Sharon talked about Swayam was so sweet and I feel so bad for the condition that Swayam comes from. Looks like something fishy is going between Varun and Sophia since they both are missing all the time. I hope Sharon does break up with him soon like what Simmi wants. The scene where Sharon watches Swayam dance was too good.

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

very aswom update...

somthing is btwn shopiea nd varun i guess .

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

what a chapter!!!
god!! wonderful!!

firstly the part where swayam thought that she is an angel made me eep!! then shar to is impressed by him!

really liking it!! you never fail to addict me to your writing!!
also the description of swayam was hot to say the very least!!

that little suspense element is there as to why swayam was hiding the fact that he danced!

the dance truly swept her off her feet!!

brilliantly penned!

thanks for the pm.

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

wonderful concept n awesome chapetrs..

just read both chaps together..

it was mindblowing .. sharon d diva n simmi n shopia her BFF n varun her BF..

sharon saved swayam from being bullied.. n felt very happy doing it..

swayam from poor back ground n has a cute sister i liked their convo n hate his father.. poor mom doing everything she could to run d family..

sharon shared everything with simmi.. nice.. shopia n varun disappearing at same time something definitely fishy abt it..

sharon saw swayam dance n was mesmerized by his dance n was having tears in her eyes..

beautiful n mesmerizing part..

waiting for next part..