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Abay

@ikki215

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

read the chapters in one go !

awesome story line and i loved it !

especially the 2nd chapter ,the starting was bit touching when swayam's background was told..

this dance felt surreal !

do PM me the update !

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

read the chapter and it was mind blowing

like totally awesome

i am so impressed by the story line and the way it is written

great thinking by you guys

i am really excited for this SS

update son

thanks for the PM

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..Fazza..

@..Fazza..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Loving the story 😃

Update the third part soon please!

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

res 😊

amazing beginning..loved d concept. 😃

DIva sharon...shy and sweet swayam...love dis combination...

in fst part attitude of sharon perfectly defined..and poor swayam who was bullied for no reason...i love d way sharon saved him.. 😆

she was attracted by his innocent nature 😳 and it was gud to see sharon concerned for him..n swayam thanked her for help...dat was cute 😳

coming to second part

swayam part nicely describe..sharon was dreaming about swayam and was blushing too...i like it.. 😳

there is something fishy about this sophia..i feel varun aur sophia ka jarur koi chakar chal raha hai.. 😆 i hope kuch ayesa hi ho.. 😆

and gud too see sharon lost in swayam thoughts 😳

waiting eagerly for next update now.. 😃

update soon.. 😊

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

perfect concept
i loved how the characters are penned down to perfection here.
Absolutely stunning writing
I loved the starting and i loved how the story progressed with a pace in two chapters without seeming like it is rushing.I liked the whole set up and I am really excited to read further.The chapters were captivating to say the least.
welcome back Baz and Prateek bhai.Good to see two talented writers back and in action.

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Firstly, I am sorry i didn't comment on the 1st part. This is a amazing story and when you two started this story i heard that you two are amazing writers so i would really be happy to read this SS. I liked the way Sharon saved Swayam in the first chapter. The second chapter, i liked very much. Sophia and Varun must be together (i suppose) . Swayam's family background was nicely described. Sharon-Simmi's friendship is always a treat to read and watch. Sharon saw Swayam dancing and forgot about Varun hehe. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Awesome work Baz and Pratik.

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Cenjonstrand

@Cenjonstrand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

amazing update ya
loved the swayam story
update next part soon

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

First of all I am so glad to see u both guys again in writing..Baz and Pratik,Dudes it is really a beautifull concept..I just loved the characters..Specially i would like to mention "Swayam",Personally i can easily visualised with his character and i really adore him here..

There was perfect introductory start to aware us about ur story plot..Swayam as a low profile and sharon as a diva "Like Always"..Next i loved to read such emotions changes in sharon after SwaRon first meet..Pratik n BaZ,I like ur way to narrate such small portion in write up..U described so well about college n ragging points..Swayam poor soul got trapped in those evil hands..And sharon like a angel saviour for him..

Now i would love to read Sharon and simmi Bond becoz they shares such a beautifull bond ..I just adore the way she confessed her emotions in front of simmi after seeing him dancing..Here swayam and his sweet sister bond is also amazing.I would like to read such bond in further updates..Anyways,I just loved ur concept and would excitedly looking forward to read SwaRon and their steps towards their love..

Baz n Pratik dude,Great Done here..Do update soon as ur comfort

N Baz..Dude Plz resume ur writing n ur work..We all are waiting.

Thanx for Pm

And sorry for late

Prateek