KUNWAR AMARJEET SINGH OS- His fantasy (updated in page 4) - Page 2

Hey..!
Gr8 work ya..!
I luvd d nervous shakti wala scene..
In fact i luvd everything..
Plz do continue..!
N if possible.. Do pm me..!
Thnx :-)
Jaldi update karna.. Eagerly waitin !!

I actually don't like stuff written on Kunwar as I expect too much!! Considering I call him Brother I have many expectations on how one should portray and I am so happy to read this!! Good work !! :D

hey kishi🤗,,
sorry for the late comment yr...yesterday mornin i left for hostel n i reached here today noon..
now just opnened the lappy n saw ur pm.
now abt the os.
its superb yr...cant believe its ur first story here..
u r really talented..
loved ur style of writing..
do continue it..
waiting for ur next story as well

Wow this is simply amazing!!
I am usually very picky about reading ArSha works bcoz I have a certain picture about them in my mind and if the description of the writer is something which I can't relate to, then there's no use in reading it

When do I begin??
Firstly thank you so much for liking my works and considering it deserving enough to be inspired by.
It was beautiful right from the beginning to the end. I'm a big time Kunwar girl, so reading something so exceptionally written from his point of view was an absolute treat to read.
You've portrayed the emotions beautifully, and I felt as if I journeyed with Kunwar from his initial days seeing the world through his eyes. How he thought of Shakti as just a hot headed girl that any guy would like to mess with to him realising that there was so much more to shakti than just a pretty face.
I loved the way he has hidden his feelings in his heart, and plays the part of the ever reliable friend ever since the day he saw her dance.
The way Shakti's vulnerable side, the side only Kunwar knows of, is brought out is bliss.
Lastly, my favourite part is how Kunwar comes to the set early to welcome Shakti, but credits the entire team for it. It was certainly what won this over for me.
There is no question of continuing or not, you must give an outlet to the talent you've got in there.
I'll send out PMs from your side for this so that everyone can have a look

res will read soon😊

this chapter was great and fabulous start... do continue soon and pm me

Nice start.👍🏼

Really liked this part can't wait for the other parts!