KUNWAR AMARJEET SINGH OS- His fantasy (updated in page 4)

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So, this is my first attempt at writing something here. Do tell me if it sucks or not. It is a look into Amar's thoughts on our darling Shakti Mohan. My analysis solely. I would also like to thank sonia and sneha for encouraging me. Also medha's recent os inspired me a lot. SO HERE GOES..


"I will be there at 9 o' clock sharp. You try not to be late." a husky voice said over the phone. A voice so maddeningly sensual it infuriated him and aroused him at the same time. She was still punctual. That was one trait that never changed. Well, he will surprise her this time. He will reach the sets an hour before her. After all, it was not every day that dreams come true.

He looked after the arrangements once again. He wanted to welcome her properly. Of course, he would tell her it was a joint effort by the whole team. Only he would know how he had painstakingly arranged for her favorite red velvet cake and white orchids. It has always been this way.

He remembered meeting her for the first time during the Maha audition. Glass, cool inscrutable glass was the first thing that had come to his mind. She was lithe with long limbs synonymous to that of a dancer. He had thought her pretty enough, not in the "come hither" way but more in a haughty, clear cut way that would make any man want to mess her up a little. They had not interacted much until Terence decided to pair her up with him.

He remembered that fateful first rehearsal well enough. It was the day he started to yearn in a quiet corner of his heart. It was the day he had met his fantasy for the first time. At first, she remained still with concentrated eyes on the choreographer who seemed unnerved by her steady gaze and stoic face. He wanted to laugh. He did not blame him. After all, that is the reason why everyone had nicknamed her "dragon lady". But then she started to move and he had a firsthand look into the fire hidden beneath that glassy exterior. She twirled and he was tossed in to a whirlwind. She moved like poetry and he found himself slipping away as fast sand from a close fist. His heart lurched as he witnessed a wide range of emotions cross the face he had previously thought "impassive". She had burnt him with her fire and he had readily let her do so.

And then came the first performance. It was before this performance, which would go down in history as one of the best duets on did ever, that he had seen a different side to her. She was pacing across and lastly, tentatively approached him.

"Do you think will be okay?" he had no idea the whispered question would shake him to the core. She normally exuded so much confidence that he believed he had imagined the momentary display of nervousness and vulnerability. But then he saw her eyes, that want to be reassured and he too her into his arms and gently whispered "don't worry. We will kill it out there". That was their first step to becoming what they were now. That was also the step where he had sealed his fate and his position in her life as "the reliable friend"

P.S.- There are more parts to this. the next part is on page 4. the link is given below.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98983881

hope you guys enjoy it. 😊😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res...šŸ˜‰
Unres...

Kishi dear...
Firstly a Big tight Hug frm me...šŸ¤—

Thnks fr writing d OS...😊

It's Megical šŸ˜Ž

U knw wen u said its abt Amar's p.o.v
I had thought it wuld be sumthng related to D present scenario..
Or evn on Shakti's return on d3..

Bt my my never thought it wuld be on DID...

U quite surprised me...

Cumin to u writing...

Ur Amazing...😃

Beautifully written...

Really liked it...
Well as u said it has parts will wait fr dem...šŸ˜‰

Bt plz try to make it a bit long if possible...😊

Well I never wanted d OS to end..ā˜ŗļø

Keep writing...

Thnks fr d scrap...šŸ¤—

P.s. hope I hvent bored u wid my constant blabbering...😳🤣
Edited by princessSonia - 11 years ago
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unres kar soniya. main mari jaa rahi hu yaha. pls ,pretty pls (puppy dog face)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I dont really read offscreen OSes. But this is freaking good :O

pls update! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was such a delight to read and the whole piece just sweeps you away. I really really enjoyed this and there were moments where all I could say was wow. I loved the descriptive way it was written and it's ArSha done so well. This line in particular stole my heart:

He had thought her pretty enough, not in the "come hither" way but more in a haughty, clear cut way that would make any man want to mess her up a little.

I loved your take on their relationship. Keep it up and please update soon. I'll be looking forward to reading more! šŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it is superb..
pls update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh please continue
Kunwar and shakti are too good together
I just wanna see them together(atleast here)
The way u described him i liked a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kishi! Is this your first one? I highly doubt, Because it was Perfect in everyway! God. It was perfectly penned, and Godamn the writing style of yours is WOW!
Update Soon Hun! šŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its really cool
os
really nice n beautiful one
i enjoyed it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Have read so many KriYaansh n ArSha FF/SS/OS But Reading a KAS OS for d first time! šŸ˜†
Starting was supperrbb..
U must Continue it
But Plz dear Make his pair with Shakti at last! Real life mei kya hoga pata nehi but ArSha can end up together at least in Fictions, ryt?!!! šŸ˜›
so give it a happy ending plzz

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