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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

brilliant updt

congo on nw thrd

happy new year

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rishaithra

@rishaithra

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

hey buddy

i read last 5 to 6 chapters in a go

coz it was really unexpected that khushi was victim of this and i

was dumpstuck bcoz i didnt even thought this exactly actually had quite an idea

after shyams voice message to arnav of his search result

i felt feared really so much on every update i know but didnt have the guts to read on fearing what might come next

but as it is i couldnot stop myself from keeping away from this story

so again started reading

khushi's past was far more painful than what i would be that i thought

but u managed it to express so well and emotions and the bravery which she showed after all these

brutality reamined me of nirbhaya and it screamed that no girl should be guilty and ashamed of herself since its not her fault at all

and must not loss the hope of living i really pray god that ever girl who suffered finds her solemate just like khushi

u have showed her as one strong and bold women and her pillar of strength arnav it was so awesome

words are less to appreciate this work

and i really was overwhelmed and the end of 41 chapter coz justice shouldnot be delayed or denied

wish some miracle happen and fulfill death to the bas***ds of every case and victims to get justice soon.

really in our country justice is delay and sometimes denied too .u really provided the tribute to the girls who suffered and suffering but last i really cried so alot and this really twist my heart and stabbed it

fantasticly written awesome 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

This was total seeti bajao update! 🥳

Loved how Arnav executed his shatir plan and kudos to Khushi.

If only every rapist and trafficker got this kind of punishment!

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Omg way a wonderful chapter... Way to go arnav shyam n Nk... Wow just wow... Oh n loved khushi ... She was so brave ...
So finally Ronan n akash got what they deserve :)... Singhanias r doomed for life :)

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

wow, this edition makes it more complete :)

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mishal07

@mishal07

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Loved the update.

finally khushi got justice.

Loved arnav's support and the way he stood by her side always.

written beautifully👏

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arshi_1982

@arshi_1982

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Hey. Awesome story. The pain n romance n fright all has been portrayed in the ff amazingly. The scared n still bold character of khushi is such an inspiration. I m in such awe of the character Arnav n Shyam r potraying.

Well I also wanted to comment on ur note. I thought thy were sentenced to death coz of the murder of Khushi's parents. But yhn this new turn in the story is good too. Anyways all tht matters is tht the two cheapsters r dead.

Edited by arshi_1982 - 11 years ago

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

awesome update... very well written and inspiring :)

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

I had already commented on the update. I am writing this comment for two people.

Nandz...It is a reader like you who inspires an accomplished writer to deliver more and better. You are a ⭐️

Dee...I had expected "Well, I know death sentence was impossible, but I took a creative liberty and decided to deliver justice atleast in my fiction" line from you. I was pleasantly taken aback that you actually took the suggestion and re-wrote parts of your update to suit reality and made the Singanias convincing. So 👏

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Dedeepya

@dedeepyalove

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Viji79
I had already commented on the update. I am writing this comment for two people.

Nandz...It is a reader like you who inspires an accomplished writer to deliver more and better. You are a ⭐️

Dee...I had expected "Well, I know death sentence was impossible, but I took a creative liberty and decided to deliver justice atleast in my fiction" line from you. I was pleasantly taken aback that you actually took the suggestion and re-wrote parts of your update to suit reality and made the Singanias convincing. So 👏

LOL!!! I dont think I can say that, coz obviously i was wrong! Had I known and still taken the liberty like you said, then may be... I had to convince myself first, which I wasnt even I posted it, Nandz just helped me where exactly was the non-convincing thing...So!!

Thank you so much for everyone of you, for helping me through-out in your own way... you see given the kind of story, and obviously M no expert, there are lot of things which needs to be reiterated. And its your comments that keeps me updated every time. All i want to do is to feel it was sensible at least to me when I re-read it... so thank you everyone!