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..SunnYaara..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

oh wow great end of bloody creeps...waiting for next chapter...

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suri2610

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Good ... Good... Good... Good... Justice done...the best way...dammit...just good, good, good

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anu1017

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Awesome update!!! Justice has been served, loved it😊

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limitless

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Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

I could imagine every scene as if it is playing in front of myeyes ... Wonderful

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Maithly

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Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Awesome update

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ramyahe

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Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

I liked the line Justice Delayed is justice denied, I truly agree with this. So Kushi will now be fear free.

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sundu

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Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

WOW ! WOW!!!!!!!!!. You are awesome, What a story simply WOW! i am really enjoyint eh way u have taken ur story .Dont make us wait and update soon
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Barunz4ever

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Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Wow a perfect cruel end to the worst bas... ds ever😡. Though the plan seemed risky but well executed bringing an end to the most evilish acts ever.

So relieved finally for Khushi that she found justice n her tomentors r no more. A big applaud to her strength n bravery n her kindness to help others warn n come out of this devils trap . 👏And above all Thnks to Arnav who stood by her side always supporting her n protecting her n bringing her back from the feArful fate her life had got her in too. N just confirming her that ' tu jahhan meiin wahaan sang sang you chalu tere ... No matter wat he will always be by her side HAMESHA

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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Superb update...
I can't tell you how much I love this story...
Finally the culprit got their punishment... but even death is not enough punishment for them...
Khushi is free from the clutches of her past... Now she can truly move on...
Loved it...
Can't wait for the next update...

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Dedeepya

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Explorer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Note:

So, I had been a little unaware, and not concentrating on facts rather, indulging my complete concentration on what would be coming after this chapter. And this resulted in a blunder. During my googling I remember I have seen this--- Sex Trafficking will be given a life long imprisonment. But somehow while writing I missed the mere fact. I was getting carried away honestly.

So anyway, I'd like thank Nandu, for pointing that out! Thank you so much about the very valuable feedback you have given me. I guess instead of saying I'll work on it, I've made changes in my prev chapter. Not much, just used this mere fact and have actually tried to use my mind too which was previously in carried away mode LOL

So... I request you all to please re-read the Chapter-41. It now feels a bit complete, coz previously I knew it wasnt.

Once again thanks Nandz!! I really appreciate it. Although it doesnt take away the rushed thing now and continue to be in the same pace the chapter had began, I guess I tried to make it a little more clear... I hope this is better!

And Finally!! I wish you all a very very very Happy New Year!!

May your year be filled with lots of love and lots of happiness!

Lots of success and lots of dreams being fulfilled...

Lots of satisfaction and achievements!

I love you all! and This has been truly a great self-discovering journey for me... with the help of you all!

P.S: Who said Its completed? I still have 3 chapters LOL!!! Will update ASAP!