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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Dee...clearly a very hard chapter to write...but all I can say is was so nail-biting...amazingly written...

So releaved...the outcome for such people...is much deserved!

Arnav and Khushi at their best...kudos to them!

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Viji79
I had already commented on the update. I am writing this comment for two people.

Nandz...It is a reader like you who inspires an accomplished writer to deliver more and better. You are a ⭐️

Dee...I had expected "Well, I know death sentence was impossible, but I took a creative liberty and decided to deliver justice atleast in my fiction" line from you. I was pleasantly taken aback that you actually took the suggestion and re-wrote parts of your update to suit reality and made the Singanias convincing. So 👏

Oh thanks a lot viji!!!
My cheeks are now tomato red!
I m just thankful that dee instantly took my concern in to consideration and paid attention to what i had to say!!
I absolutely agree with you viji that dee made the changes when she could have easily shrugged them off saying that its a fiction and she is not getting in to the technicalities. So thanks for making your readers feel special dee!!

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Finally I can breathe...what a roller-coaster ride...absolutely scintillating!

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Loved the update. ..I am so glad that rohan and aakash are dead...arnav finally gave them what they rightly deserved. ..

waiting for the next update

continue soon

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Pdrover

@Pdrover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Loved the update
Congrats on new thread

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sanjana shah

@sana_09

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

i just finished reading the 41st chapter

In three days

I love it and i love the entire concept

The last chapter made me google and know more about human trafficking

It was beautifully written.

Please PM

Thank You

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Please do imagine me giving you a standing ovation right now as you read this comment , cause that's truly how i am feeling.

Mindblowing and with such detailing , i am left feeling numb.

Each and every aspect of this update right from Khushi emerging as the winner , Arnav just being beyond human, Shyam , Nk and Sheetal all playing their parts victoriously and the whole judicial system in all their law abiding scrupulousness but the ultimate punishment handed out could have not been more apt.

Justice Served and rightly!

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Anjani

@akurmapu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

yes, now the amended one is good 😊.

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

all i can say nice chapter well written...i do not have words to express what iam feeling after reading the last 3 chapters...

this is such a sensitive topic of women in the world facing u written very well ...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..

thank u for giving us beautiful story...

happy new year...

cheers...