Arshi FF:Entwined--Thrd 3 *completed* double update Page 28 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I felt finally at peace. That's all.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Will update comment tom!
Bas one thing dee!! Certain parts seemed a bit rushed to me! I mean the prosecution of singhanias part!
Will again read tom n comment!
Happy new year!


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Okay!
First of all thanks for the acknowledegement dee! M glad you found my input valuable!! I just had expressed my doubts n opinion. Thanks for considering them!

Coming to the chapter! God it was one action packed , fast paced chapter!
It was heart wrenching to read about the stats and facts regarding this ultimate act of violation of human rights. Most disturbing fact is that small girls and children who dnt evn know the meaning of sex or traficking are made to lose their innocence ! Just for money! And by whom? Who are already so rich.Absolutely disgusting

M glad khushi didnt hide her face! Only those who have something to ne ashamed of or are afraid of society hide their faces. A brave fearless person like khushi would have never hidden her face.

M glad Dee that you brought changes in their whole prosecution matter. Death sentence in india is pronounced only in rarest or rare cases. And most of the times they are commuted to life inprisonment. Evn if they had succeeded proving that khushi was pushed by rohan with the intent of murder evn then singhanias wouldnt have received death sentence.
Arnav was absolutely right in his thinking that they could have come out with some influence. Most of them come out on parole. So well thought of plan arnav! Now they can live without any fear or apprehension!

Finally justice was delivered! Obstacles between A n K have been removed. Though they have found each other finally, but Now they have another thing to work on. Arnav's insecurities, fear and guilt!
I hope they are able to overcome it!

P.s- N when i was resing yesterday somebody wrote perfect ending! N i was like WTH! Ending already!! So thanks for the note dee where you clarified few chapters are still left!!
Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
totally ROCKING update Dee... you gave us the best new year gift .. loveeeddd it
I was afraid of peoples' reaction to Khushi & the aftermaths & all that .. but now I think Arnav is enough to handle all of that .. & I must say what Khushi did , takes a lot of courage .. I'm proud of her
but the last part stole the whole chapter ... indeed justice delayed, justice denied .. oh, how I loved it .. loved it, loved it, loved it .. muuhhaaa

p.s : I commented on chap 39 & 40 in thread 2 ,last page ... congo for new thread & happy new year :)
Edited by farha_ipkknd - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
awesome update
wish d delhi rape case could get dis kind of end
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all dese b******* should hav dis kind of end ...it should not be left to courts
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Oho that was filmy end of the villian looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Awesome...even death is too less of a punishment for both of them..loved d ending...both were lying dead at her feet...terrific...hope khushi is fine...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
lovely...yes the ugly truth of this country, justice delayed is justice denied...

update was fab, thank god khushi was unhurt...waiting for the epilogue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
This is one of the stories for which i used to wait up for updates and when i started reading it, initially i thought it is about something gone bad/ wrong with her but never i thought u have written abt Human Trafficking, which is a major issue not even in India but also around d world where girls are treated inhumanly, and i cannot even imagine happens to them. For Khushi, Arnav came as a hope, and what he did with Rohan and Aakash is the actual fate of people like him.
Justice delayed is Justice Denied...is actually true
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, that was awesome..The bas***ds deserved it and much more...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
finally! way to go Arnav ... hats off to you.

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