ArHi FF:9:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 79

awesome update... love the gradual progress in their relationship :) and aloof adil.. nice name 😆

The equations are indeed changing and so is the mutual trust and understanding.

Chap 110 comments coming up! 😛

In chap 211,

I m not sure abt Khushi...but u r definitely making ur readers drink lot of heat...Ahhh! m loving it! ;)

I loved the Last verbal part where she questions and he answers her half-asked questions. Tht was just beautiful in every way...Its good to see their relation building up and khushi beginning to feel and understand the nature of certain things.

I like it everytime u mention it how he struggles to maintain her sanctity...especially focusing on the naiveness of it all from his point of view. It definitely gives us a perfc impression of how he's not holding bk himself just so to have her crushed under the effects of his crush but also because he really understands her innocence in this field...and want to reveal it all to her subtly...or rather I shud say want her to learn and understand it all by herself...where she accepts it naturally. I gotta give u a bow for tht. Superbly going Linny! Keep up!

There is lot of repitive addressal to khushi by her name by lordy...It makes it a little weird to having one referred by one's name in consecutive sentences. This is something I wanted to point out earlier sometime bk as well...bu passed it off thinking u must hv chosen to do tht on purpose. I m not ure though this time...so tht of letting u ponder over it.

Honest confession: It may be really bold of me to say it and might even earn disapproving looks but when I just read this- I am not really keen on writing chapters of this nature It scared me...for the gap between the husband and wife is just beginning to bridge...and if not for similar (if not as strong-going) scenes...the charm and effect of scenes on upcoming chapters will be lost...so I was really relieved when I read the second-half of ur sentence...

I am not really keen on writing chapters of this nature but each gradual little change in equations must be brought to light.'

As far as I know you, I can understand if its hard for you to write such scenes, but my aim is to just let you know tht u r doing a perfect job...with just the right amount of sensuality infused...yet nothing can be described as outreageous or unacceptable. But, still if u find yourself very uncomfortable in writing them...I would discourage u to continue anymore. Just know tht we would love TB&TBR in every way...for we know its in most trusted hands.

I guess thts all I gotta say abt this one! Will be awaiting next one eagerly. ;)...but the index doesn't say...when next one comes...*pouts*

A QUIL ...LORD ARNAV N LADY KHUSHI ARE GETTING ATTUNED

I must say the chapter was yummy lol

Aqu.. this was amazing... i loved how Lord Arnav kept cool all the while... even when Khushi was giveing sarcastic ans. to him/...


and then the curtain part was amazing... u have done a superb work there... it was really romantic ... it clearly shows that lordy is trying to make khushi get comfortable with him and be with him... i think this chapter will play a huge roll in the upcoming time...

Wow.. amazing update... loved the curtain part

So close, yet Arnav can never go as far as he wants with his wife can he? Not if he wants her to live.