ArHi FF:9:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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Deepthi

@Beauceant

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#791

Happy new year Lin..

Loved this chapter, the way their relationship is progressing.. Khushi is learning to trust Arnav more everyday..

Wonder there is something more behind Arnav' s reluctance to go to the village..

You have written the chapter beautifully, even though you don't like to..

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Jay

@jduke

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#792

Super cool update. First lord and the lady are coming close. Like their banter about village and his possessiveness :)

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rockingsoni

@rockingsoni

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#793

unres..

It seems Lordy is trying to make khushi immuned to him slowly step by step...

Khushi seemed soo innocent asking arnav about the same..

One thing I love about Arnav nowadays is The way he shows and expresses khushi being his and only his..

I have a feeling that this aloof adil will create problem in future... Is he somehow related to Guns being smuggled in Arhasia, and Arnav not been informed of it ????

At this point, like khushi, I also miss Aman and his loyalty...BTW where is Aman and Lavanya nowadays... Would love to know that they are settling well in their life...

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shipra.aqua

@shipra.aqua

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#794

You have got me speechless here...

What do I say about the chapter

There love it's so so so... Pure & beautiful & intense &... Just don't have words to explain how do I feel...

But, yes I did understand something from this chapter, the changes which u once mentioned about, which are to come in khushi so that she can become Arnav's completely...

Things are gradually changing khushi is gradually adapting to Arnav's animalistic heat, as in, in their initial kisses khushi wasn't able to cope with Arnav's tounge heat, but now things have started improving she kissed him back & also endured his heat for a much longer time,...

I just hope things improve & they become one as soon as possible, making that evil Shyam loose...

Oh, I see I blabbered a lot,...

But, I hope my mind is working on the right track...

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Tammie

@saomom

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#795

Well. 😳 ...and now I have to go to work. Gah.

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hellgirl

@hellgirl

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#796

rabba ve aqua...
1st thanx for the pm
and i luv it
khushi just want to visit the village and arnav is just avoiding that part of conversation like plauge...hehehe

and lord arnav uuff he uses a very strange technique to shut khushi up...*and we all know what it is *

now khushi doesnot feel that burning when arnav kiss her like she felt when the 1st kissed...i mean when lordy kissed her...
now she is less affected by the burn of arnav's tonge ...

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bea_rom

@bea_rom

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#797

yet again such a beautifully written chapter

even if you find these chapters more difficult to write, you do a great job

it is sweet, sensual without being vulgar

it's been a pleasure having an arhi-only chapter, without the family drama

Lord Arnav is more and more attracted to his beautiful wife and I'm happy to see that she gets more and more used to him

so this is the secret, she must get used to the heat

loved it loved it loved it

thanks for the PM

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Sanghamitra Roy

@Smrikta992

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#798

Lovd it..
Its awsome..
I lov dis caring arnav..Thnks for pm..
Nd happy new year..

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#799

a very beautifully penned update..it was just too good..Arnav and Khushi are getting closer with each update...good going...keep it up..please do update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊

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crackerszone

@crackerszone

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#800

Omg..gulps..dat was something..left me wid an extremely parched throat n wanting for more..thanks fr dis gift..a much needed one indeed...so its just a matter of practise for khushi..dat makes me wonder how many more hot n steamy scenes we r gonna get..rubbing my hands in glee