One Shot : Sources of Light | TY Note: Page 15 - Page 4

Vow! Ana! Total justice to the title! A new light in their life through the source of love!

Arnav can never ever see her cry and her tears sear his heart like nothing else...

It is irony that Arnav Singh Raizada needs alcohol to support his words; Arnav Singh Raizada who never thought twice before hurting someone with his words.

Oh thank goodness that you erased that awful chap gaya moment of terrace from Arnav's memory and replaced it with something so artistic.

This OS makes me realize that a simple heartfelt apology with utmost sincerity is what it takes to get the forgiveness when you are on the wrong.

I like your thought process...

Take a bow, for writing something like this OS and IC which is entirely a different genre... You simply are awesome!

Thanks for this lovely OS. It began with Arnav asking Khushi not to leave him and ended with Khushi asking Arnav not to leave her.

Ana meri Jaana 🤗

That OS made me smile, a smile of happiness, a smile of content.

This is the first time I am reading your work and it was a delight. The beauty of this story and the way you wrote is "Simplicity". The relationship is very convoluted and complex and the emotions are very dense and heartbreaking. But you didn't overdramatize any of it yet presented the depth of their love and untangled everything in simple words.

On the show I totally hated this scene and but after reading this OS I feel like you have redeemed it.

Arnav is so tuned to everything that is Khushi; her emotions, feelings, pain, anger, body language, clothes, reactions, everything. And the best part he aligned himself to all of her feelings. He apologized, tried mending things and giving her the place she deserves and then decided to give her the space. This to me is redemption and I am sure he will continue to do this for rest of his life. Arnav wanted Khushi in his life and wanted her forever but he didn't force his decision on her and let her decide the future of their relationship and that I respect.

Khushi's love is a perfect example of how forgiving love can be. It's not about hate or anger or pain or hurt, it's about being together and finding happiness and let time do the healing and mending.

This was brilliant piece of writing Ana.👏

Awesome dear... i loved it...

You know this OS stands for outstanding!! Kudos lady!!

Lovely os! You deserve a prize!! Wonderfully penned down! Shows how good of a writer you are! In one shot you had it covered all!

The pain, the torture, the remorse, the repentance, the apology, the acceptance, the indifference, and finally everything above all, their hearts and its reunion!


Wonderful!!! Brilliant man!


Cheers

That was so beautiful Ana! I loved how serene the whole OS felt. Patience, time and love healed Khushi and although Arnav didn't deserve the second chance your writing made me feel like he did!!

loved it dear..
it was wonderful... and really beautiful.../
sometimes alot of words r not needed to convey wat ur heart speaks...

Oh Ana that was simply fabulous...I loved this redemption of ASR.

First of all Hun a big congrats for achieving the fifth place rank for the OS contest,