One Shot : Sources of Light | TY Note: Page 15

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Phenomenal piece of writing...i could visualise barun n sanaya playing out d whole scene...so beautiful...completly magical.

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arshi1986

@arshi1986

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

sooo beautifully written ...

well done

Edited by arshi1986 - 11 years ago

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

What a wonderful story! I loved it! Thanks for the pm.

I wish I had known about this contest earlier. I too could have voted for you then.

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Time is the healer for both him and her. Beautiful OS. Liked it so much!

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Ovi_Tanni

@Ovi_Tanni

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Wow it's beautiful os...i loved it😊

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lin2002

@lin2002

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

omg...this is...sooo...magical...pls...write some more...its actually beautiful one.:)..

u done a fabulous job...pls...writ one more...:)

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Niki

@..Enchantress..

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Beautiful OS.
The way you have described Arnav's pain, seeing Khushi cry is really touching.
His realization, repentance was awesomely described.
The terrace scene shows how she chose love over everything,
Fabulous work !!

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Beautiful story. The pain that Arnav felt after knowing the truth is written so good. And I loved the way both Arnav and Khushi made small progress every day towards their new life. I could feel the magic of IPK here. Very nicely written one shot. Loved it. Great job.

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sugandha mishra

@sugu2569

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

oh my good god ... this was a heartaching OS , i swear it was , very emotional , am about to cry any minute now !!!
I LOVE IT and thats final ...
lovely !!