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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Beautifully written OS 😊

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hot.cakes

@hot.cakes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Beautiful... Just beautiful!
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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Unbelievably beautiful!!! I've always been a big fan of your writing skills.'It's complicated' has never failed to put a smile on my face.I always thought your sense of humour was unbeatable...never knew you could do 'angst' also so well.What a range!!Kudos to you!!

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Very very beautiful

Just loved it..

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

wowww...

amazinggg...its such a beautiful piece of writing...

enjoyed reading it...

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SaRun.

@SaRun.

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Ana..im imply speechless!

i really dnt knw what to say.. I LOVED IT ❤️

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hadiqua

@adrastiathena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

loved it! u surely know how to touch ppls heart ❤️

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Meghipk

@Meghipk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

it was beautiful ❤️

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Mahnoor

@Lalaland222

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

RESESESESEESESE. :P

UNRES. :P

First of all, I was wondering.. as soon as I finished reading it, WHY DIDN'T YOU WIN THIS? T_T

I mean this is na-insafi. :P Anyway, you've won us by this piece. :')

Second of all, this was the kind of repentance I had been expecting from the team of IPKKND. But.. *sigh* we didn't get it. :'| Okay, I just realized that today was the day when IPKKND ended. ._. :O

I miss it. :| I want Arnav! Or better.. I want BD. :( My life sucks. I'm going to die alone.

Lol. I'm high. :P

This was amazing. ❤️_❤️ I loved ever bit of it. How he regretted that she was sleeping on the cold floor, and the way he brought her in after some time without making her realize that he cared for her. And how he kept the light on, just for her. I nealy cried there.

My favourite part, "I'm just scared of other kinds of darkness now" Got me emotional.

*Control's herself*

So when are you updating IC, huh? :P

OH! And I loved how in the end, Arnav wanted her to stop him fromnot going and that's exactly what she did. :') I miss them yaar. :( Oh and I loved how you gave the flashback to how once they were talking NORMALLY in the show about the stars and if Arnav's mother was happy seeing him or not.

The way he apologized was so Arnav-like. It was splendid!

It was absolutely beautiful.

You always pour your heart out to writing. :')

Loads of love! ^_^

Edited by Lalaland222 - 12 years ago

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dimishra

@dimishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

wow, ana!! it was such a good creation of yours. u have a wonderful way of writing ur os's. normally i dont read them as they seems too short and ends fast. but u write them in a way i can feel the story for longer then its number of words. the emotions, the environment of it was so enchanting that it lasts longer. keep it up.

i read it later as i wanted to take time while reading and it was worth it