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moomin4455

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Beautiful and very rare to read such an introspective point of view from Arnav. Khushi is too good, but then she is Khushi...

Loved it. 👏

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rosaline

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

such a wonderful update...loved it...

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segad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

banging my head in frustration!

why couldn't we have seen this on screen instead of the garbage we had to!!!!!!

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Angel1618

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Amazing... loved it👍🏼

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

beautiful os

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Ah Ana I am so glad to know you wrote one of my top 3 OSs in that whole contest! Sources of Light was definitely a Favourite! What can I say I can't get enough of the redemption track because it is one track that was not handled well in the actual show. Ever since I joined this forum, I have been on the look out to read about Arnav's redemption so this OS was definitely quite a treat and I must thank you for it! ;-)

The way you expressed Arnav's perspective and how painful it was for him to watch Khushi cry herself to sleep every night was just beautiful and heart wrenching at the same time. That whole phase of kicking Khushi out and making her sleep by the pool side was so disheartening that I couldn't bring myself to watch those portions of the show properly, I had the skim watch those parts! You most certainly recreated those moments on a different light adding Arnav's realization of his folly to it, which was again quite a treat to read. Then in the end the way you brought them together gradually and only after Arnav managed to redeem himself, was a heart warming experience. Loved it A!

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zeedia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow...it was beautiful...n the terrace part was the best...loved it.

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cocoamob

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Your Arnav here is so much more gentle and likeable. His redemption is also kinder and gentler - he persisted and patiently gave her time to trust him and his love for her.

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rima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

So beautiful

Take a bow

Arnav and Khushi in your story touched my heart

What a beautiful way to redeem arnav and what a beautiful way to bring them together

Kudos

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

BEAUTIFUL
Enjoyed reading this redemption shot.
The end was beautiful. Khushi forgive him n gave him another under sky where there parents blessed them for the blissful life.