Virman: Dosti ho ya Pyaar, Dil Ka Rishta hai Chapter 20, pg 37

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prathe

@prathe

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

wow loved virman relationship and their understanding ...superb very well written 👏😊

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Nikhita Dixit

@ambarsariya

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

i loved the update sooo much...👏⭐️

NIMI...😊

Frndship is connection of hearts...so true...for two of them!!!

will miss u...u'll b back almost after a month!!!

try to cum soon!!😊

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

read all the 4 parts
loving this story a lot
thanks a lot for the pm

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Awesome..!!! I was smiling while reading..Simply Nice...Lovely bond...Waiting fr next n Thanks for the PM!!

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Fantastic updt dear...

Loving how they are slowly coming close to each other..

" Dosti dilka rishta hai .. "... loved this dialogue...

Cont asap and thanks a lot for the pm...

Take care...

Tada... :)

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GOOGLU

@GOOGLU

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

HEY FRST OF ALL ...A GREAT THANKS TO YOU DEAR FOR PM...
ABT FF...IT SOUNDS INTRSTING...
FRST I WANT TO READ ALL PARTS DEAR...AFTER THAT I WILL SURELY DO COMMENTING REGULARLY...
REALLY VERY HAPPY TO SEE ANOTHRT WRK ON OUR FEV.VIRMAN...
PLZZZ DO PM ME ALWAYS, ,,WHENEVER U GIVE UPDATE...
KEEEP ROCKINGGG...

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Amazing update Nimi
Liked it a lot
Waiting 4 next part... Take care

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

ohhh myy god,
what a ff
this is amazing, with every part i loved them more and more...
dont know if i like them or the friendship...you wrote😊

amazing work, please pm me when you update

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virman_superhit

@virman_superhit

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Hey... Thanks for the pm... So happy to c ur update... Was waiting for it... 😊😊.. And it was worth it.. 😉 ... Very beautifully written... Awesome update..

So slowly and slowly there friendship is increasing and they Dont need words to tell or understand each other's feelings... Awww... That was the sweetest part.. 😳😳😊.. How Mannu din need words to understand what Virat was feeling and y was he so low and helpless... 😳😳

Don't u always need friends like her... And then how she couldn't c him so upset the next day too and decided to help him... V sweet... 👏👏😳.. And then finally all well went and she got a solution for his problem... Yay... 👏👏

But Virat will go away soon... Ohhh ... 😭😭.. I hope u make the next updates without them being away from each other... 😆😆.. I loved Virat's gift for Mannu too... They r so perfect together... I hope the friendship turns into love soon... 😊😊

Update soon.. Waiting.. 😉😉

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Fab update ❤️.. I love their dosti.. So pure & so magical 😳.. Emotions are beautifully portrayed.. Superb Nimi 👏👏.. Will be waiting for the next.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊