dosti se pyaar tak... (KR ss) part 6 pg 18

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darshita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

their flash back and present in all the chapter was fabulous ... loved it...
do continue soon and pm me

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Blackheart

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Awesome update
Kriyansh moment so priceless
Its beautifull update
Liked it

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Pooh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

mein phir aagayi! lol
okay so the update was cuteee:)
hayee kria was jealous for that chocolate...rey toh usse aur bhi jala raha hai😆
awww kria had to clean his untidy room...so sad
"isko dance sikahana is like sher se bolna bye phir milengey.."
wah kya socha hai!🤣🤣
"14 yrs back the person who thought dance is nothing but exercise now feels dance is a flow of body,a way to express feelings, a way to go deep in your heart let out all your emotions... a language which doesnt need words"
wow yaar i luvd these lines!
u expressed and wrote it very nicely!😊
well done my sweetypie...iss baar bhi update was kinda small but its fine!
aur the update was superb...cutely written😳
sry for late comment again...
thanks for the pm aur haan thanks for dedicating this SS for me...
bas felt like saying it!
update soon!
-Reshma❤️

Edited by --resh_kr-- - 11 years ago

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arsha_simran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: --resh_kr--
mein phir aagayi! lol
okay so the update was cuteee:)
hayee kria was jealous for that chocolate...rey toh usse aur bhi jala raha hai😆
awww kria had to clean his untidy room...so sad
"isko dance sikahana is like sher se bolna bye phir milengey.."
wah kya socha hai!🤣🤣
"14 yrs back the person who thought dance is nothing but exercise now feels dance is a flow of body,a way to express feelings, a way to go deep in your heart let out all your emotions... a language which doesnt need words"
wow yaar i luvd these lines!
u expressed and wrote it very nicely!😊
well done my sweetypie...iss baar bhi update was kinda small but its fine!
aur the update was superb...cutely written😳
sry for late comment again...
thanks for the pm aur haan thanks for dedicating this SS for me...
bas felt like saying it!
update soon!
-Reshma❤️

heheheheee sweety!!!! i noe wierd thoughts!!! 😆

btw anything for u!!!! love u!!!!

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arsha_simran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: --resh_kr--
yaar...itna chotu sa update...not done!
next time i want a biggg update...u can do this much for ur sweety na?😳😆
accha, cuming to the update...
u described that running race scene cutely...and rey..kamina ne cheating kia!!!😡
😆😆😆
chooo sad now kria have to do whatever rey says
aur kya bataun?🤔
chotu sa update di tune...so uske liye chotu sa comment!
TIT FOR TAT...lol🤣
bt next time bigger update haan!and sorry for late comment😳
-Ur Sweety
Reshma❤️

hahahahhahaaa tit for tat!!! 😆😆😆

jitna bhi comnt kara enough hai!!! :*

sorry ki zaroorat nahi!!!

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-spongy-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

i enjoyed the update but really wished it was longer

but anyway

waiting for the next one

thanks for the PM

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Princess_Devil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

omg ithna cutee update...

awww poor kria pehli uski home work karo n uski fav choclate bhii 😆

rey bhi naa

again he made clean his dirty room...

2 stes in half an hr 🤣

bohth jaldi seekh gaya

awww i just loved it when kria said abt rey n dance...

amazing...

love u sissy 🤗

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arsha_simran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Princess_Devil
omg ithna cutee update...
awww poor kria pehli uski home work karo n uski fav choclate bhii 😆
rey bhi naa
again he made clean his dirty room...
2 stes in half an hr 🤣
bohth jaldi seekh gaya
awww i just loved it when kria said abt rey n dance...
amazing...
love u sissy 🤗

love u tooo di!!!! Har waqt luv u!!!! :*

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arsha_simran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

hola everyone!!!! 🤗

miss kara?😛

lo mein aagayai!!! story lekar!!! 😃

and sweety my sweet heart ye le treat!!!! 😉

and kal tereko mere upar pyaar aaying na aaj mereko aaying bahut saara wala!!!!

guys!!! aap sabke ke liye chotu sa gift!!!!😃

recap- even in less of light i could imagine his expression...

and den the pic changed and it was the one...

Part 5

i just love that pic sooo much!!! wo pic dekh kar mere face par ek badi si smile aagayi...

i heard him say- yaad haina ye,... kitni mehnat kari thi hum dono ne... actually sirf meinne...

kr- wat sirf tumne? nahi meinne...

rey- accha mein hi tha jisne tumhe itna beg kia tha... and jisne dance learn kia...so it was me...

i smiled at his childishness...

and i went to flash back...

kria pleessshhh man jao na... pleessshhh (with a puupy face)

reyyy (pulling his cheeks) dekho it is not easy... kitni mehnat karni padegi... aur aapko sikhana nahi...

rey- oh so kria ghai mehnat karne se darti hai (tauntingly)

kria- rey aap chup raho aisa nahi hai...

rey-toh kaisa hai??

kria- fine ill do it...

rey- thats like my sweety!!!

and den starts the practice... arrggghhh to teach him dance its just so difficult... but accha student hai... listens to me!!!

jo bandey ne pehle aadha ghanta lia tha 2 steps seekhne mein ab he is taking one and a half hour to learn a sequence!!!

i m proud of my teaching...

and finally the day was here...

humara dance competition... uska first dance and "humara" first dance!!!

v wer at backstage... nxt was our turn...

rey was hell nervous... uska pehla dance and wo bhi mere saath...

but then i told him... rey chinta mat karo tum accha karogey...

rey- kria it that ki agar meri wajah se tumhara name spoil hua toh,,,,,

kria- aisa nahi hoga... aap mere student ho...

rey- issi baat ka toh dar hai...

kria- reyyy./...

rey- accha sorry baba...lifts ke liye dar lag raha hai...

kria0- don't worry rey bas lifts ke liye humne sir se help li tha na... i noe i can trust u and u won't make me fall haina?

rey- haan i won't but sach mein daar lag raha hai...

kria- don't worry u trust me na... socho sirf humare alava koi nahi hai... no one is watching u... just let ur heart out and trust me aapka performance bahut roaking hoga!!!

rey- sacchi?

kria- mucchi

and they hug...

anchor- now it's time for reyaansh and kria to perform...

they break the hug and go on the stage...

lights off... on the stage... they perform salsa... (olaalalaaa)

this one-- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k1LI_qxRRMA

after the performance... the hall is quite...

rey and kria look at eachother shocked... but then they hear someone clapping and then the whole auditorium is filled with applause!!!!

rey and kria luk at eachother with a big smile and hug **tight wala**

after their performance rey and kria go backstage...

kria- dekha rey meinne kaha tha na humara performance roaking hoga!!!

rey- haan baba u r always right...

and dey were eagerly waiting for the results to announce...

after 10 mins...

anchor- and the winner is...

rey and kria nervous... kria chnating universe ji plzz hum ho... rey smiling at her...

anchor- winner is reyaansh and kria!!!!!

kria luks at rey and den smiles and den both shout!!! yyyaaayyy and have a hug!!! 😳

they receive the trophy and both smile at eachother and have their pic clicked!!!

flashback ends...

rey- wo trophy jeetne ke liye kitni mehnat kari thi na...

kria- haan and humara dance sach mein roaking tha...

rey- all thanks to me!!!

kria- reyyy...

rey- kya?

kria- forget it...

rey- us din ke baad se my life changed...

kria- and all thanks to me...

rey- for a change i agree... agar tum mujhe dance nahi sikhati toh i wouldn't b a dancer today... ek "non dancer" ka tag liye rehta...

u made me realise ki anyone can dance if they wish to...

and kria smiles...

kria- ur welcum!!!

then the pic changed...

hayyyeee ye wo wali pic hai... mera first birthday together!!! and actual mein mera 9th birthday...

i just love this pic!! first time ehsaas hua surprises kitne spcl ho saktey hain...

rey- i noe tumhe mera surprise bahut accha laga tha...

kria- nahi wo tumhara nahi tha...

rey- haan haan y wil u agree mera tha... tumhe toh wo tumhara best friend dhruv ka laga tha na...usse hi jaakar thank u bola tha tumne...

i could sense jealousy...

kria- accha my fault... but mujhe laga hi nahi tha u can do something like this isliye i thought ye dhruv ne kia tha...

flashback starts

kria was sleeping peacefully... the sun rays fell on her waking her up...

as soon as she got up she heard...

happy birthday kria!!!!

kr- mom dad thank u sooo much and hugs them...

kr mom- happy birthday beta may u get all the happiness...

kr dad- may u live a long life

kr- thank u mom dad...

kr mom- accha now jaldi se get ready u have to go to school...

she gets ready and goes to school... wonders y rey didn't sum and wish still...

finds rey isnt at stop she ignores it...

after that she goes to school and sits in her bench and is surprised...

huh khatam... thats it... i G2G i noe chotta sa update hai... but njoy!!!!
do comment!!! and hit the like button!!!
keep thinking rey ne kya surprise dia...!!!!
and update jaldi nahi milega as usual!!! 🤣😆

Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago

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Pooh

@..Sugary_Pie..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

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Unres...
Yayyyie me first ..me first!!!😃

Hayee yeh mera party tha??? Not done...!!! Yeh poora SS tune merko dedicate kia tha na...
So ab yeh ek chappy is my treat..Not done!!!!
Okay so cuming to the update..
Hayee kriyaansh k first performance...!!! And as always they roaked ittt! 😃
Aur phir rey ne agree kardia ki he became such a gud dancer all bcuz of KRIA!!! 😳
Wow kria's birthday!!! Woh bhi wen she was 9yrs old! Hayee...
Rey ne wish hi nai kia ...bechari kria felt bad
Par usse kya pata tha ki there's sumting for her in store 😉
Par yeh dhruv koun h??? 😲
Jaldi update kar sweeto...merko aage ka story jaan na h!!!!
Luv u loads
Ur sweety,
Reshma 😳

Edited by --resh_kr-- - 11 years ago