dosti se pyaar tak... (KR ss) part 6 pg 18 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
sweet.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
it was sweet and good chapter... means rey was tell her throught projector...
and their flashback of childhood was amazing good... look forward to read more...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
omg!!this is superb...
me ko aur perhna...
plx update soon nd pm me...
i m wandering what next??rey z gng 2 propose kri???
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
itna chootu update not done
but amazing tha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
nyc one...but very much short
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Itna chotu update...
But very sweet and cute..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Haye mujhe yaad nhi mene res kiya tha ya nhi anyways tujhe comment chaiye na yele..

Aacha coming towards update..

Pehle toh kitne months baad update kiya be..yaad bhi nhi araha ha pehle ke parts bhi padhne pade huh..

Haye pagal itna chotu update..?? God thodasa toh aur bada deti..

Anyways update was cute nd awsum..loved it..

Haye ye aur inndono ki fights..

Hahaha..kbhi nhi sudhrenge..

Aww..rey cheater..hahaha..

Haye update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
yaar...itna chotu sa update...not done!
next time i want a biggg update...u can do this much for ur sweety na?😳😆
accha, cuming to the update...
u described that running race scene cutely...and rey..kamina ne cheating kia!!!😡
😆😆😆
chooo sad now kria have to do whatever rey says
aur kya bataun?🤔
chotu sa update di tune...so uske liye chotu sa comment!
TIT FOR TAT...lol🤣
bt next time bigger update haan!and sorry for late comment😳
-Ur Sweety
Reshma❤️
Edited by --resh_kr-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Awesome update
Both the update amazing
Love it so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
heya peeps...dekho as promised i am back with the update jaldi!!!😃
i noe sab ki ye hi complaints thi ki i didnt update ek toh jaldi aur upar se itna chotu...😆
par dekho i m back with the update!!!!😉
so enough of my bak-bak and lets start!!!!

recap- i frowned at him and he smiled at me and dat is wen dat pic was clicked...

PART-4

see this is what that pic was all about...
humari first fight... i had a big smile on my face...our cute moment...
and the nxt pic... damn i didn't even knew dat dis pic was clicked...
universe ji luk at me...i luk so bad...my face... damn it has dat revenge luk...
it is the same pic... after the race the next day i had to do watever he says and give him chocolate too...
flashback--
huh...accha hua i didn't have to do much in the school... but as i xpcted he asked me to do his home work...and den give my chocolates to me... 😔 gadha didn't even share one chocolate wid me...ahhh luk at the way he is eating...taking out the camera and clicking pics of the chocolate i gave him so dat he can one day make fun of me...and again luk at the way he is eating... universe ji... mereko bhi chocolate chaiye... i noe he is doing it wantedly... hmmm eat rey eat one day i wil do the same... nd saw him eating and had dat revenge luk and dat pic was clicked...
flashback khatam...
i know it is rey itself...i should have understood dat he is taking my pic...
ahhh i should have known...but rey ne abhi tak wo pic sambhal kar rakhi how sweet!!!
rey-kya hua sweety...don't be shocked... u noe u luk sooo cute baatcutter... feel like pulling ur cheeks...
accha waise u remember this na,,,...i had sooo much fun,... u had to do my homework and give ur fav. chocolates to me and den clean my room...( 🤣) aur phir mereko dance sikhana...😆😆😆
kria-how can i forget dat reyu...(starts smiling😃😃)
flashback-
huh afer he finishes eating his chocolate i had to clean his room... set everything in a proper place... ahhh his room so messed up... but a bit better than mine...
he had thrown his bag on the bed, his books on the table and pencil under the bed...gosh this guy...his toys all over...his cars,guns, baap re...
i agree my room is more messed than his but i don't have things scattered like this... they just lie on the floor...just as i finished i was asked to teah him dance...
and my thoughts were like- universe ji dance??wo bhi is bandar ko?? aaannn meinne kya kia...isko dance sikahana is like sher se bolna bye phir milengey...
but having no choice i had to teach him to dance...it took me 1/2 hour to teach two steps correctly... but den it was fun...
his way of doing the dance...lol bahut funny but a good student...
flashback ends
rey- 😆😆😆 remember how much time i took to learn only 2 steps...
baap re... it was sooo fun... koi soch bhi nahi sakta ki 14 yrs back i couldn't even dance... luk at me today i dance sooo weelll and awesome!!!! well all thanks to u...
kria- right all thanks to me...!!😉😃 14 yrs back who couldn't dance now dances... 14 yrs back the person who took 1/2 hour to learn 2 steps can now learn 5 steps in 5 min... 14 yrs back the person who thought dance is nothing but exercise now feels dance is a flow of body,a way to express feelings, a way to go deep in your heart let out all your emotions... a language which doesnt need words...and all thanks to me...
rey- haan bola na all thanks to u... now enough ok... stop saying my feelings... i was wrong and u were right... u are always right... so now stop...
and i smiled😃😃... even in less of light i could imagine his expression...
and den the pic changed and it was the one...

huh khatam... i noew again a chotta chapter par jaldi update kara so khush raho!!! 😆😆😉
waise kya hua kya soch rahe ho?kaunsi pic thi? sochtey raho...
and haan update jaldi nahi milega!!!😆😆🤣 🤣
don't give me those glares... busy hoon... exams and all...
and abhi baaki stories bhi likhni hai... so don't expect the update... 😆😆

comments zarur dena and jo like button hai usse bhi press karna!!!!
phir milengey!!!!! tab tak ke liye adaab!!!


Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago

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