dosti se pyaar tak... (KR ss) part 6 pg 18 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
res
unress
the flashbacks 😃 you wrote them beautifully...
Rey ko dance sikhaya Kriya ne ...kamal ka teacher...aur student bhi itna lajawab...😆
proud teacher, smiling student...
surprise surprise,...next update mein pata chalega...
9 saal ki baat ko le kar Rey abhi bhi jeolus hota hai...yeh hui na baat

update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
cute memories dear.. Lovely.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
simply wow..
the flashbacks are superb..

rey ka surprise toh ekdam hatke hoga..

update it soon



with love
moumita
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
awesome part 😳
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
awsome updt
love the line rey aap acha karoge aap mere student ho
nice
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Awee Adorable

Awesome

sweet memories

loving dem ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Read all de parts jst nw
Superb story line
Luvd it
Amazingly written
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
hey guys!! i noe i m back after a very long long long time!!!!
m sorry!!!! and again sorry agar apas shuru se story padna padha to noe kya hua tha... 🤣
accha let me update now!!!

recap- she gets ready and goes to school... wonders y rey didn't sum and wish still...
finds rey isnt at stop she ignores it...
after that she goes to school and sits in her bench and is surprised...

Part 6

kri-omg my favorite chocolates!!! hayyeee my chocolates!!! i sooo love that person who ever did this for me!!!
just then dhruv came with more chocolates...
dhruv- hey kria... happy birthday dear!!! and handed me over the chocolates!!!
kr- dhruv awww thank u sooo much for the surprise!!!!
dh- my pleasure dear!!!
and then the teacher entered and v all sat in our places... i looked around and didn't find rey...
kr- ye rey pata nai kahan hai... mujhe kya mein usse chocolates nahi dungi...
and she continued the whole day cursing rey and getting wishes from everyone and distributing chocolates... until all this she had a person constantly with her...
kr- dhruv aaj shaam ko ghar zarur aana...
dh- ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai? of course aaunga...
kr- chal bye...
and while her way back she wondered why dhruv told that way... anyways she ignored the thought and reached home...
kr- mumma rey kahan hai??
kr mom- pata nahi beta kyun?
kr- nahi mummy bas aise hi wo scul bhi nahi aaya tha...
kr mom- lagta hai he must b not well...
kr- haan ok...
after sometime...
kr mom-kria beta go get ready u have dance classes to attend...
kr- yes and she goes and gets ready...
in the dance class she again searches for rey but couldn't find him...
kr- lagta hai he is really not well...
after some time...
kr- maaa and enters her room...
kr mom- kya hua?
kr- maa lagta hai rey ko sach mein bhukar hai... wo dance class bhi nahi aaya...
kr mom- ohh we will go meet him tomorrow...
kr- kal kyun?
kr mom- beta v have to go out na... u go get ready...
kr- wat sacchi?? thank u!!! and she hugs her mom
kr mom- accha get ready the dress is in ur cupboard... and her mom leaves
kr- wooowww this is beautiful and takes out the red frock!!! and then finds a note...
""Happy Birthday dear!!! from ur dear friend...""
awww that's really sweet!!!
zarur ye rey ne kia hoga... but he.. he isnt well na toh... wait dhruv... yes dhruv ne kia hoga!!! hayyeee sooo sweet!!!
she got ready and went down
kr- mummy papa lets go... and they went,,... they reached the hotel and went to the garden were the party had been arranged...
kr- mummy- papa baap re this is awesome!!! aapne kia?
kr dad- nahi beta ye tumhare friend ka surprise hai?
kr- wat sacchi?? (in mind)- wowww dhruv this is awesome!!!
then comes the time to cut her cake!!!
but before she cuts it she hears a voice...
kr- ye ye toh rey ki awaaz hai and turns...
kr- rey??
and she finds rey singing happy birthday with all of them joining him.. she smiles (32 inch wide) and cuts the cake!!!
she feeds her parents and then rey stepped forward but instead she fed dhruv after that... rey felt bad and her parents were also shocked!!!
after that everyone became busy and rey goes to kria-
rey- sweety happy birthday!!!
kr- thank u...
rey- kya hua? gussa hai??
kr- tujhse matlab?
rey- kya hua bolna?
kr- kahan tha tu?? scul and dance classes bhi nahi aaya...
rey- mein busy tha...
kr- accha kyun?
rey- tere liye?
kr- haw jhootha...
rey- arrey sacchi baba
kr-dekh mereko malum hai ye sab dhruv ne kia hai,,,,
rey-wat?
kr- haan...
rey- theek hai mein chalta hoon and leaves sadly...
mean while dhruv comes...
kr- thank u soo much dhruv...
dh- ur welcum par kis liye?
kr- surprise ke liye?
dh- wait kaisa surprise?
kr- arrey meri birthday ka...
dh- kria meinne kuch nahi kia...
kr- wat then?
by that her parents call her...
kr mom- beta chalo call everyone for dinner...
kr- maa ye surprise kisne plan kia?
kr dad- beta rey ne...
kr- sacchi??
kr mom- haan beta... isliye wo scul aur dance classes bhi nahi aaya...
kr- maa aap sabko bula lo mein abhi aayi and she runs...
she finds rey sitting at a corner at a swing...
kr- rey...
rey- haan
kr- thank u...
rey- kis liye?
kr- is surprise ke liye...
rey- surprise kaisa surprise? meinne kuch nahi kia... dhruv ne kia hai sab and he gets up and face the other side...
kr- reyu m sorry na... sab meri galti hai... meri birthday ke din... and he heard her snob...
rey- sweety m sorry and turned and to his surprise she was fine...
rey- ohh toh tumhara plan tha...
kria holds his hand and says... i m really sorry wo mujhe laga tumhe bhukar hai so tum kaise kar saktey ho and then dhruv was constantly with me...toh...
and then she hugs him!!!
rey- happy birthday sweety!!!
kr- thank u soo much!!!
flashback ends...
rey- tum bilkul bhi nahi badli na baatcutter!!!
kr- badalna bhi nahi chahti and they smiled...
rey- accha ye wali pic yaad hai??

huh khatam!!! that's it for today!!!
do hit the like tab and review!!!
next update kab milega don't ask!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Wow!! It's an awsm story...loved all the parts...
Update soon...nd do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Wow awesome update
Can't wait to see what happens next

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