dosti se pyaar tak... (KR ss) part 6 pg 18

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arsha_simran

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Posted: 11 years ago

hey guys!!!! I m back with a new shot and aap sab ka sar khane ke liye!!! :p

just a random thought...

so agar pasand nahi aaya toh jutta chappals allowed!!!

nd my Sweety!!!!

ye chapter actually ye story specially tere liye hai!!!!

i hope tujhe accha lage!!!

Dosti se Pyaar Tak!!!

girl:: this story is about two people... Jo bahut bahut acche friends the... Ya yun khelo Ki Wo best of friends the and they were inseparable!!!! Masti mazak sab chalta Tha!!! Dono ek dusron ko bahut pareshaan karte the but jab dusra udaas hota toh Wo bhi udaas ho jaatey nd ek dusre ko humesha khush rakh ne Ki koshish karte!!!

par unhe malum hi nahi chala Ki kab ye dosti pyaar Mein badal gayi...

kab they started developing feelings for each other,,...

par darte the,... Darte the Ki wat if other too didn't feel the same... Toh kahin unki ye bahut poorani dosti end na ho jaaye,,,.

par a twist came... A twist that changed their lives nd made one confess the other,...

i was 8 nd he too was 8 nd luckily we were both in same scul,college from starting!!!humesha saath saath...

i still remember how we first met...

usne newly shift Kia Tha...nd he was actually looking handsome and innocent...

mummy ne use nd uski family ko ghar bulaya Tha for dinner as they would b tierd nd issi bahane humari friendship bade...

jab Wo ghar aaya toh i was a bit hesitant... Actually shy nd naye logon se baat karna is not easy for me...

but Wo... He was sooo friendly,..abhi dinner ke liye time Tha isiliye mummy ne mujhe aur usse mere room Mein bhej Dia... ND wahan par he was the first one to tel me hi...

i hesitantly told hi...

par then he made me feel comfortable nd in few minutes i started to speak to him as if we knew eachother from long time!!! ND meinne usse baat karne ka mauka hi nahi Dia...hhehheee

nd tab usne mujhe ye name Dia)-- Baatcutter!!!

baatcutter kitna ajeeb naam hai na...

par i liked it nd phir us din ke baad se... We were always together!!!

we were inseparable!!! ND hum dono best of best friends!!!

jab nhi nein sad hoti Wo bolta u r my Sweety!!! Bd my Sweety sad acchi nahi lagti!!!

nd jab Mein gussa hoti Wo bolta Sweety sholly... With a cute pout nd nein usse zyada der tak gussa hi nahi ho paati!!! Wo Tha hi aisa...

par jaise jaise hum grow up huye Wo dosti kab pyaar Mein badal gayi malum nahi chala...

but phir bhi i didn't let him noe...

but that one day... That one day changed everything...

my equations with him changed!!!

that day he had asked me to be ready... By 7:30

he told me he is going to give me a surprise!!! I was sooo excited as he knew that i love surprises!!!!

and that day was a very special day for me!!!

he had asked me to message him...at 5...

nd as he asked me to do i messaged him...

he didn't reply,,.,.,,...

i thought fine,... No problem he must b busy so he could not message me...

but one hour passed and no message...

so i messaged him asking if he is busy? Whether today's plan is cancelled??

but still no message... :/

two hours passed nd no message or no call...

nd this was the limit...

how could he do this to me??? That too on my special day...

it is already 7 nd no clue of him...

nahi reply aaya aur na hi koi call...

agar plans ko cancel karne hi the toh kyun banaya...nd agar banaya toh inform karna chaiye about the plans getting cancelled,...

par no... Nothing has he done...

i was hell angry with him... ND i msgd him saying i don't wanna speak to him...its over between us...

our friendship our bond everything is over...

nd still no reply...

at around 8:30 he msgs asking if i m angry... Hell yes i m angry... Wat is wrong with him...then again he messages...haww...my Sweety is angry with me... Sholly na... Pleesshhh

par i msg him saying this time it is not easy!!!!

obvioulsy not,... It has not happened for the first time but this doesn't means ge can do it everytime...

nd atleast the other times he replies to me saying he is busy... ND everytime i used to agree... But this time no... This time no messages... Nothing,,..nd that too on my special day... No ways..,,

so i msgd him saying i don't wanna speak to him...it is better if he forgets me!!!!

nd uske messages aatey rahe bd i kept ignoring him...he called me but still i ignored him...

but the message which i couldn't ignore was----

bas.,... Khatam yahin par...

Wo kya message Tha... Wat special day ot was etc etc sab next update Mein pata chalega!!!

nd Sweety!!! I hope tujhe malum y i m dedicating this story to u... I hope tujhe ye pasand aaye..., nd story abhi baki hai!!! :p and guys do leave ur valuable comments!!! ND hit the like button... ND ande tamatar jutta chappals sab allowed agar story boring lagi ho toh... :p

part 1- up...

part 2-pg 4

part 3-pg 8

part 4- pg 11

part 5-pg 14

part 6-pg 18

Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago

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Abhilasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

res

bhool gyi toh yaad dila dena..😛

unress..

haye mast update tha..sims

loved it..

kriya rey se naraz aww..

haye bohot maza aaya padhke..

by god bachpan ka pyaar..aww so cute..

rey toh bachpan se hi kriya ki kitni care karta tha..soo sweet rey kitna cute hai..

haye rey kyu nhi aya..???

kya hua esa ki he didnt show up..??

aur wo msg..uss msg me kya tha..??

haye jaldi update kar..me waiting..

aur ye part bohot chota tha...mujhe bada wala chaiye samjhi..??

update soon..

le kardiya unress ab pagal ki tarah haas..😆😆

Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago

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unisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome part..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesum part...
Do cont soon...
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Thnks fr d pm...

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome start

loved it

and ha 2nd part jaldi update karna plsss

me waiting

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Posted: 11 years ago

superbb...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awww my sweetypie is here wid a new story!😛 Firstly talking abt the update it was so sweet just like u!!! Kriyaansh having a cute relationship in childhood...aur rey not replying to kria nd 2 ghante baad he replied asking if she'z angry!hehe...he's so adorable!!!
Nd woh msg kya h...i'm eagerly waiting to noe it! Nd secondly talking abt dedicating dis update...
to ME? R u serious? If yes toh i'm overwhelmed!!!!😃 Nd Haan I understood y u dedicated dis Chappy 4 me...!
Mein toh kria ki tarah hi gussa hogayi!hehe...nd Tanx a ton 4 dis update! Nd di I luv u loads!
Continue dis ts soon!!!!! Muaaahh! 😳

Edited by --resh_kr-- - 11 years ago

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arsha_simran

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --resh_kr--
Awww my sweetypie is here wid a new story! Firstly talking abt the update it was so sweet just like u!!! Kriyaansh having a cute relationship in childhood...aur rey not replying to kria nd 2 ghante baad he replied asking if she'z angry!hehe...he's so adorable!!! Nd woh msg kya h...i'm eagerly waiting to noe it! Nd secondly talking abt dedicating dis update...to ME? R u serious? If yes toh i'm overwhelmed!!!! Nd Haan I understood y u dedicated dis Chappy 4 me...! Mein toh kria ki tarah hi gussa hogayi!hehe...nd Tanx a ton 4 dis update! Nd di I luv u loads! Continue dis ts soon!!!!! Muaaahh!

my Sweety!!! Shocked mat ho this chapter actually is dedicated for u!!!

nd u were right on ur part...

tujhe gussa hona allowed hai!!!

nd isiliye i wanted to show dosti!!!

nd as my frend says sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...

be waiting for my next update!!!