dosti se pyaar tak... (KR ss) part 6 pg 18 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
superb
loved it
pm me wen u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys!!!!!!!
I am here with the second part of it!!!
and looks like everyone is very eager to noe wat that message is...
Nd I am thinking isse ek short story bana dun... I want to show some dosti moments,...
Haan wo saare flashbacks hi hongey... so agreed?

Looks like agar meinne apni bak bak bandh nahi ki toh tum log mujhe maroge...

So stopping my talks...lets start...

Recap--- but there was one msg of his which I couldn't ignore...

And the message was-----

I am really sorry sweety... nd baatcutter agar tumhe mujhse baat nahi karna toh no problem...agar mujhse baat na karna will give you happiness then theek hai I won't message u nor call u... I always want you to be happy and smiling... Ab I wont irritate u...your wish is my command!!!
bas I want to say is ki--- I love u... I love u dher saara and always will... Just be happy and smiling!!!!!!
Take care of urself!!!

Awww this message!!!! I just couldn't ignore this... this message shows how much he cares for me!!!
nd nd he told he loves me...? really?
But it can be in the friend way,... but he still cares for me...he wants me to be happy... and for that he is ready to hurt himself...
Really... Damn that is y I love him!!!!
nd idiot itna bhi nahi samajh sakta... my happiness is with him...
idiot... I love him soo much!!!!

And then i messaged him

"Reyu tum apni sweety ke liye aaj chocolates nahi laaogey??"

Nd then I got the immediate reply----

""Matlab u forgave me!!! Yyyaaayyy!!!!!!
abhi laa raha hun mein!!!!!""

And by sending this message I confirmed that I have forgiven him...
It is normal every night I get one chocolate from him which I eat it the next day...

And then I heard mom and dad saying they are going out after sometime they will b back...
and before I could ask them anything they left...
Well this was shocking for me... if mom and dad have to go out they inform me well in before... But today this sudden plan... but then I thought that it must be some thing important...
So I pushed the thought... and then I was looking out for a book to read
I wan walking towards my bed that suddenly ""booo""
Hell this scared me... this idiot ahhh I hate him for this,...

Everytime he comes home he do's this... everytime I think I will be prepared he comes at an unexpected time... I hate this thing...
I got scared and about to fall... I closed my eyes... but then I didn't feel anything...no pain nothing and that is wen I realized I was in his arms!!! SAFE...
Wen I opened my eyes I saw him staring at me!!! With love clearly visible...
And I drowned into his eyes!!!! His chocolate brown eyes!!! They were beautiful!!!

(and then started the famous look look with obvious KR bg)

We were both lost but then the ring on his phone brought us back to our senses...
we straightened ourselves and then he went to a side and spoke and then came...
I wondered wat is it so important that he doesnt wanna share it with me...

but then wen he came to me the first thing he did to me was he hugged me tight!!!!
i too responded but this time the feeling was different...
haan better stop saying sorry or else i will bcum angry again...
and u call me baatcutter na...lusomething totally different...

and then wen we pulled back he started his sorry mantra...
rey- i m sorry baatcutter really sorry
kria-par rey
rey-i noe mein gadha hon,idiot hon,par please mujhe maf kardo... plzz sweety forgive me... i noe i ruined ur special day...
kria-arrey rey suno toh
rey-i noe should have informed u ki late ho jaayega... and wo bhi aaj...
kria-arrey rey
rey--and i noe i should have atleast replied to ur messages plzz plzz mujhe maaf kar do...
i m sorry sorry sorry...
kria---- arrggghhh reeeyyy!!!!!!!!!
and then she pushed him on the bed and this shocked him nd stopped blabbering...

nd then kria went next to him and spoke--- rey dekho i am not angry with u now... and how do u noe abt my specal day?? and tum mereko baatcutter bulate ho na...luk at urself now u r being a baatcutter...
and now tell me where are my chocolates?

par rey he was lost in kria and more than that he was shocked... did she really push him on the bed?
but he was brought back to reality wen he hear her scream...
kri---- reyyy reyyy
rey-huh kya hua baatcuter tum theek hona...
kria-- haan rey... now tell me wer r my chocolates? and how do u noe wat it is today?? and rey tum door se nahi aa sakte?? jab dekho window se aatey ho and mujhey daratey ho... better next tme come from the door...

rey- kria... u noe na mujhe window se aana kitna pasand hai!!! nd special day... just like that/...nd rahi baat tumhare chocolates ki wo kria i dont have it right now...
kria- wat rey?? rey how could u do this...
rey-par sweety
kria-par kya rey?for the first time u have cum without my chocolate...
rey-lekin baatcutter
kria-nahi rey i shouldnt have forgiven u...
rey-meri baat toh suno
kri-kya suno rey? yehi ki aapne mereko for granted le lia...aapna rey aap ko aisa nai karna chaiye tha...
this made rey hell angry his baatcutter is not ready to listen to him... nd den he pulled her to himself and kissed her/...
i was shocked but then i always wanted this... so i too kissed him..
but the kiss was for a short time... nd den wen we pulled back
he told-- sorry...par tum meri baat nahi sun rahi thi isiliye ye karna pada...
nd den kr- its okk...
rey-- accha baatcutter tum mere saath neeche chalo...
kria-- par kyun?
rey- kya tum kabhi meri baat nahi maaan sakti?
kria- accha theek hai...
nd den rey- accha chalo close ur eyes...
kria-kyun??
rey--sweety...
kria--ohhhkkk
nd den i closed my eyes and he tied a cloth on my eyes...
i felt his hand on my waist which sent shivers... nd then he guided me down and then i didnt feel his hand nor could hear his voice,...
i got scared and then i heard someone actually rey...
rey--ab tum apni aankhon ki paati khol sakti ho...
and then wen i removed the cloth...
i was shocked... actually shocked would b an understatement... i was very much mesmerized...
the place was beautifully decorated!!! with candles,flowers,colours... nd in between there was a heart made...
it looked so beautiful!!!
nd then i saw a projector... with our childhood pics...
nd then i heard him say----


bas itna hi... khatam!!!!
as i told i am making this a short story!!!
so keep thinking... and have fun!!!
and keep thinking ki wo special day kya hai??
do leave ur reviews,likes and comments!!!!

Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cute update 😳
rey becoming baatcutter...lol...😆

nyc yaar..! 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
awesome dear..
Loved it..
Missing kriyaansh chemistry..
Update soon..
Thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
loved it
update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
cute update
rey bhi kria ke saath rehke baatcutter bangaya lol
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
it was a great chapter... finally after seeing rey message kriya forgive him
and to bring her chocolate and their little non jokes were go on...
and rey gave a surprise to kriya by take her bind folded...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
amazing
Missing our kriyaansh
rey kissed kriya...
lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

this was so so so cute !!
i just loved it..
i was awestruck..
how can anyone be so cute ! 😳
loved the OS
thanks for the PM

please do write more.. would love to read them
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Loved KR

Super Adorable

Update Soon :)

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