Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 18)

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ARS24

@ARS24

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#381

Dear???!!!!
When are u gonna update?!?" pleajjj

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#382

Congrats on the new thread, hope this story has many more.

Wow the update was absolutely brilliant and fantastic,

The update was written exceptionally well from start to finish,

Awww loved the way Arnav was staring at Khushi whilst she was sleeping,

Khushi's reaction when she woke up was brilliant, she is so adorable.

Loved the way Khushi responded to Buaji she is definitely crazy,

Finally Sumer spoke to Khushi about Arnav's painful past and gave her a brief insight towards Arnav's behaviour.

I'm glad Khushi promised Sumer that she will always stay and support Arnav and never leave him,

Wow Khushi actually thinking about love and actually loving Arnav, very interesting indeed.

The update was a wonderful read, amazing writing.

Thanks for the email,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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GoGreen

@GoGreen

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#383

Hey Annoy...Hamare lite...nanhegii. ..ke language me...

ANNOY anather UPDATE PEKONA...hum logo ke moo per...

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MoonlightAura

@MoonlightAura

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#384

Wow.. this story is now slowly maturing. You have incorporated sweetness with a touch of wisdom. The great thing about your writing is that I do not have to dread that a cloud to doom is hanging around. It tells you that a great storytelling need not be immersed in great deal of drama or tragedy for that matter.

You have done a great job of inducing awareness and tension within the scene at the same time taking it away at a moment's notice. However I would only like to stress that Arnav and Karan are middle aged men and though I like family like banter between all characters, their manhandling at hands of bauji detracted from their characters a bit.

A relationship is about give and take. I like that Khushi will be a guiding light for Arnav but I do not want to see her high and mighty on pedestal of perfection. Please let her make mistakes, serious once, the once which may not sit well with Summer and bauji who have always been her champions. She is a good, well balanced human being but even her dialogue with Summer will not suffice in understanding the brilliant albeit a complex man that Arnav is.

Arnav is best described as Yin - Yang. He has both sides and we really take immense joy and satisfaction when he is put to test, of dealing with any situation with his this mental makeup and when he lives upto our expectation. I do not want Khushi to be Yang to his Yin. Khushi needs to possess enough of Yin - Yang herself to understand him, his complexity. No amount of advice, revelation, soul searching on her current plateau will make her understand him, though it can propel her is the right direction.

For in the end all we can say is - "It takes one to Know one"

Will wait for the update. Take Care..

regards,

MoonlightAura

Edited by MoonlightAura - 11 years ago

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#385

I can't believe i missed chapter 31 for so many days.

Loved it.

Laddoo shall have to do a lot of growing up and figuring out her Arnavji now.

Edited by msmarple - 11 years ago

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supriya

@Dreamy123

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#386

waiting... plz update soon

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eversweetdreams

@eversweetdreams

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#387

I am loving this story...and what an interesting stage it is at now.

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#388

Are you updating?? I want to read it... Please update soon!!!

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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#389

OMG such unholy thoughts Arnav babu 😆
i think khushi needs to pick up a lil pace i mean she is married now she needs to be a lil more mature and sensible concerning Arnav related matters specially now since she knows a part of his Past /

Hope bade papa's Operation goes well
update soon

love pari